Date: Apr 05, 2014 11:36 am Title: Chapter 29
Please hurry with the next chapter...I absolutely adore this story and I've been waiting patiently for an update and now I'd like yet another, lol!!
Author's Response:
Heyy, sorry for the VERY long wait! The new chapter is here, enjoy :D
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2014 08:19 am Title: Chapter 29
Jill is weak and pathetic if she just jumps back with Michael now. He hasn' t done anything to earn her and I'm not sure he ever will. She wasn't enough for him to ditch a complete peice of shit like Lisa, and now as soon as his marriage implodes she goes running to him like a puppy? Girl, goodbye. I am fucking done. Pathetic pathetic pathetic.
I understand her mixed feelings towards Godfrey but she shouldn't let that drive her into the arms of the person who fucked her over 1000x worse. And she definitely shouldn't pull a Michael and cheat on Godfrey because their relationship isn't going well. If Jill can't forgive Godfrey she should stop wasting time and dump him. Then find a decent man aka NOT Michael.
I will never forgive Michael either.
I'm interested to find out Alexander's motives. Was he trying to protect Jill and keep her away from Michael because he knew her dumb ass would take him back? Still doesn't justify what he did but it is so frustrating watching someone you care about throw their pride and sense out the window Li!e that so if that is his reason a small part of me understands.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! I am finally updating the story and there is a part with Alexander than might clear why he did this.
Thank you for the review and the rate. Once again, you and ima_music share the same opinion about the love triangle Jill/Michael/Godfrey lol. Are you sure you two aren't the same and only person lol? :)
The new chapter is online, enjoy :)
Date: Apr 04, 2014 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 29
Lmaoooo Jill!!! What the fuck are you doing?! See now I'm gonna get mad at her because she just forgave Godfrey, and now it seems like she's about to fuck him over. Why even forgive him? At this point, I don't even care that she's lusting for Michael. It's the principle of the fact that Godfrey has confessed to her about his involvement in the fuckery, she forgives him, and now she's about to fuck him over. She's going to do the exact same thing Michael was doing with her when he was still married to Lisa. SMH. I can't. And I do not believe there is love between Michael and Jill. I don't and i have never have. Lust, yeah sure. But real love? Hell no. A mess and fuckery all around.
Author's Response:
Hey girl! Yup, I'm updating this story after a one year hiatus. I guess Jill wasn't the only one suffering from writer's block :S
Just like you, I hope Jill will make the right decision. She was in Godfrey's shoes, and I doubt that she enjoyed this position!
The new chapter is here, enjoy :D
Date: Mar 25, 2014 10:32 am Title: Chapter 21
YESSS!! FINALLY!!
Author's Response:
Looool. Cheers to the divorce lool
Date: Mar 25, 2014 09:31 am Title: Chapter 17
UGH!!!! I can't stand her ass!! Divorce her already!!
Author's Response:
Cross your fingers and maybe he will lol
Date: Mar 25, 2014 08:49 am Title: Chapter 12
YESS!!!!!!!! A baby girl for Mike and Jill!! I was hoping he would have gotten her pregnant!! WHOOP WHOOP!!!!! AWW SOOKIE, SOOKIE NOW!!! Bye Bitch Ass Lisssssssa!!
Author's Response:
Loool! jill did what Lisa didnt want to do
Date: Mar 25, 2014 08:36 am Title: Chapter 11
Damn, who's the story really about? Jill or Lisa's bitch ass? I getting sick of this hoe, Lisa!!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. She'll soon be gone
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2014 09:23 am Title: Chapter 28
I would have never got back with him. Lies ruin things. Alot. Great chapter Annie
Author's Response:
Lets see if Jill change her mind about Godfrey or not! Thank you April!
Date: Mar 22, 2014 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 28
Poor Michael, but I think he deserves it. He loves Jill and is a good dad to Kaya. Poor Jill :( I don't like Godfrey, but it's a good thing that he told the truth to Jill! Lisa and Yasmeen are bitches, sorry haha.
Author's Response:
As long as he is being a good father to Kaya.... :/
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2014 12:19 am Title: Chapter 28
i dont like this ending
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2014 12:18 am Title: Chapter 28
i dont like this ending
Author's Response:
Its not the end of the story ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2014 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 21
YEEEEEEEESSSSSSS GIRL !!!! IM SO GLAD MICHAEL LEFT HER.. SHE NEVER LOVED HIM FROM THE START.. (IN REAL LIFE)
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2014 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 21
YEEEEEEEESSSSSSS GIRL !!!! IM SO GLAD MICHAEL LEFT HER.. SHE NEVER LOVED HIM FROM THE START.. (IN REAL LIFE)
Author's Response:
Idk about in real life but in the story, not so much :/
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2014 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
the fact that she was just moaning making noise and michael was talking to the dude that was suppoed to be fucking her, lmao too funny
Author's Response:
Loool. I didnt realize you were reading the chapter of the first part >.<
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2014 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 28
The fuckery is through the roof. Glad Michael told off Lisa and Yasmeen once and for all. And how dare Yasmeen imply that Jill is a whore? She's the only innocent party in this whole mess. Michael is the one who acted like a whore.
I can't believe Alexander either. He has some nerve. I still don't fully understand his motivation in all of this, he wanted to keep Michael away? Michael did a good enough job of that himself.
And now Michael is feeling salty because Jill forgave Godfrey? GOOD! I hope it eats at him. Godfrey did what Michael should have done at the start of this mess which is man up, tell the truth, and work to keep her. Now Michael is kicking himself because he realizes that if he had done the same thing Jill would have forgiven him and they could have been together. No need to be concerned about Godfrey betraying her because in the end he didn't. Look in the mirror Michael you are the one who doesn't deserve her and you know it.
At least Michael is a good father. He needs to stay focused on Kaya. Lord if I were him (which I would never be in this story because I'm not selfish enough) I don't see how I could even stand to look Jill in the eye after everything I had caused. I would be permanently ashamed of myself.
Author's Response:
We all agree that Michael was the whore loool. Yasmeen did it fornhis image now let's see what Alexander excuse is! Now lets focus on Kaya because like you said, despite being an horrible lover, he is a fantastic dad to her!