Date: Jul 25, 2013 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
good but why were you so late updating =(
Author's Response:
I have 3 other stories and I don't want to update one more than the others !
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2013 09:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Michael is pathetic. I don't feel sorry for him at all. He had no right to turn around and use Jill like Lisa has been using him. He should have ditched Lisa's ass as soon as he saw her cheating. Pathetic pathetic pathetic. I still don't think Jill should ever forgive him. Whether he has developed feelings for Jill or not is irrelevant. He could have hired a prostitute to get even with Lisa and save Jill the pain. He is just selfish. And he obviously loves Lisa more than Jill even though Lisa obviously doesn't love him. You can't tell me she hasn't been banging Danny that whole time she even planned a trip. Jill needs to move on. I hope he regrets losing her for the rest of his life. I want to see him suffer.
I now hate Lisa in his story as well.
Author's Response:
Michaek is stupid, I agree. His wants his mariage to succeed and this is the only way he found to keep Lisa. I think Lisa loved Michael once but obviously he did something that pushed her into her ex-husband's arms. I know you already hate Lisa, I know there is no good reason to cheat on your husband but maybe you will hate Lisa less once you found out what she had been through with Michael ;). I said too much now!
Thank you for the review
Date: Jul 25, 2013 09:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Lawwddddddd... Smh!!!! I really can't now. Michael is a bigger fuckin idiot than I thought. What man in their right mind would stay with a woman who not only refuses to have his kids, but fucks their ex-husband while married to you? And that bullshit ass logic she used means nothing! Doesn't matter if she wasn't in love with Danny when they had sex, they still had sex! And not to mention, she will always love him b/c he's her ex husband and also the father of her kids. Michael played himself with that. So he deserves every bit of suffering that comes his way from Elvis in drag and Jill. So fuckin dumb. He should've divorced her ass as soon as he caught her. But he thought 2 wrongs made a right. And he hurt Jill with that nonsense. She's not a revenge ploy or a sideline chick. I'm so mad I could bust his apple head open! Elvis in a drag is fuckin trash like I said. I hope she's still cheating on his dumb ass. That's what he gets for staying with her. Jill is a good woman, and she deserves a good honest and SINGLE man. I hope Jayro fits the bill. I can't wait til their date. Now I bet Lisa thinks or knows that Jill is the woman that Michael had sex with to get "even", but she doesn't know his cowardly ass loves Jill and has real feelings for her. Does she not notice how Michael is always staring at her? Is Michael in love with Jill? I hope his marriage falls apart while Jill and Jayro have a blossoming romance. Michael and his ho disgust me. I don't feel sorry for either of them.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! Sorry for responding that late :S. Michael wants his marriage to work so bad that he would have done everything for Lisa. Even if it meant hurting someone else in the process. I'm still debating whether Lisa is still cheating on Michael lol. But it doesn't matter, she cheated once and once is alreayd too much. Don't want to spoil the story but at this point Lisa doesn't know that Jill is the one Michael slept with ;) And it's going to be worst when Lisa finds out that Michael still loves Jill. I hope you're ready this is just the beginning fo the drama ;)
Thank you for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2013 10:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Jayro is hot! At this point Jill needs to be like "Michael who?" and get up on that sexy man. I can't believe Michael thinks she wants to hear his explanations. Dumbass needs to realize there is no explanation other than he is a selfish prick. I hope Jill ignores his ass the rest of his life. And I hope Lisa cheats on him. Serves him right. He is overdue a truckload of misery for the bullshit he pulled.
I don't see how Jill could ever be with Michael again in this story. She can't trust a word coming from his mouth. I would NEVER forgive him if it were me. NEVER. He would be dead to me.
Author's Response:
HAHAHA! Let' see if Jayro can make Jill forget about everything else! And that will be interesting to see how Michael and Jill's relationship evolve through the story. You think there is no way they can be together again? Let's seee ;)
Date: Jul 19, 2013 10:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Ooh, Jayro is a cutie!!! Yasssss Jill needs to hop on that, and I do mean it in the literal sense too. Lol. I'm just saying, she will feel better and forget all about Michael if she gets her back blown out real good. And he looks younger too so I know he can probably do it. As for Michael, boooooo!!!! Gtfoh! I don't wanna hear his excuses anymore than Jill does. His ass know all this time he was married and was selfish and wanted to have his cake and eat it too. So fuck his feelings. I hope he stays miserable with Elvis face while Jill is happy with someone else. She is NO sideline chick! I don't care who the man is. She deserves way better, and I hope she gets it. You know, I would die laughing if Elvis face was having an affair of her own! Ha! Karma for his ass. I can't stand cheating ass men then have the audacity to want you to feel sorry for them by saying they love you and all this bs. Fool please! And then he thinks he can "fix" it?! You apple headed idiot, there is no way to fix that! You LIED! And on top of that, your punk ass is still married and notice he didn't mention he has any imminent plans to divorce Elvis in drag either. I just can't. So again I say fuck Michael and the Elvis show he's starring in!!!! Jill and Jayro please! Ooh, their names start with the same letter. Lol. J&J for the win!
Author's Response:
hahaha! There is nothing better than finding a man to forget about one LOL!
" if she gets her back blown out real good. And he looks younger too so I know he can probably do it"
LMAO! You're so crazy! hahahhahahha
The next chapter is up so you'll know why Michael did it.. Maybe you'll forgive him lol!
J&J foreverrrrrr!
Date: Jul 19, 2013 10:07 am Title: Chapter 4
woowww
more chapters =D
Author's Response:
New chapter up
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2013 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1
omg i guess daddy michael needs to show himself kali style ;)
Author's Response:
HAHA! I think Daddy Michael needs to stay in Your Love is King. We need another kind of Michael for Jill :)
Date: Jul 17, 2013 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
O:
more chapterss plz!!!
Author's Response:
New chapter soon :)
Date: Jul 17, 2013 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this story already! I honestly think Jill should let Michael talk first. I've been a silent reader on here for a while (sorry about that) but I absoutly love your stories. You're one of the best writers on here, you definitely have a special gift and I'm proud. Most of the authors on here (including you) inspired me to start writing more. Thank you for your amazing stories!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for liking my stories. I hope you won't be silent anymore because I really like to read your impressions on it :) I think Jill is too pissed to listen to Michael. And there is no "good" reason for cheating! Let's see what Jill does! :D Thank you for the review girl!
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2013 08:02 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow this is another great story Annie, your productivity and imagination scare me! I can barely keep up with one story and you have tons of them, they are all amazing, and you update all the time. You are inspiring and seriously talented girl.
I really like Jill she doesn't take any bullshit. I can't believe Michael's trifling ass smh. She needs to make him suffer when they get out of that hut. Time to find a hot guy, bring him back to her room, and have really loud sex so Michael can hear. I just realized that loud sex is my solution to everything, but its the best way to make him seethe. And she'd better not listen to a word he says. I can't conceive of a possible excuse for his behavior so she needs to tell him to go to hell.
Jill should tell Persia about Michael so she doesn't get put in any awkward moments again.
I'm curious about how Elvis-face is going to be in this story. In your other one she is a delusional bitch but so far in this one I don't get much sense of her character. If she's nice in this one then I feel really sorry for her. And is she really that stupid that she doesn't notice Michael undressing Jill with his eyes? Or does she know and not care? Maybe their marriage is all for show or something because if that was my husband I would have snatched his eyes out of his head and his penis off his body at least a chapter back.
Author's Response:
Hey Camilleian!!! I am happy that you are reading this story too!
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love writing here. But once I get a writer's block.. Let's not think about it lol
I love Jill too! I didn't want her to have the same personality as Harper or Kalliope! I think it's important to reinvente the character! So, no DM on this story lol! We will have a new kind of Michael :)! Desperate Michael maybe!
I did notic that this is your solution to everything LMAO! But hey, maybe that's the right one...
Like I said, the character will be different from my other one so Lisa won't be delusional on this one! Maybe you will like her in this story! Can't wait to see this haha!
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2013 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1
omg shit is for real
Author's Response:
YyYYyYYyYEESS! :)
Date: Jul 17, 2013 03:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Michael needs to suffer ! , Jill get out of there and find a goodlooking babe
kick him in the balls and bust the door down lol
Author's Response:
LMAOOO! I can totally imagine Jill do something like this!
Date: Jul 17, 2013 12:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Smh she needs to slap the fuck outta him!!!! Why is he so desperate to talk to her? He needs to be talkin to his Elvis face ass wife!!! Smh I just can't. I have no tolerance at all for lying cheating ass men, and it makes it worse because he's married. Fuck him and the horse he rode in on! Or shall I say the Elvis tour he came in with. Ugh. This is so nerve wrecking. Jill deserves much better! I really hope they can get outta that hut and she can meet some men. She could use some male company. I really hope she lets Michael's ass have it since they're stuck in that damn hut. I mean she needs to read his ass for complete and utter filth! He deserves a good read and dragging for this fuckery and bullshit. She needs to tell his ass off so he can leave her the hell alone. She will NOT be his sideline ho!
Author's Response:
Michael is desperate, indeed. He did something horrible but he doesn't want her to see him as an horrible man. I guess he wants to explain and her to forgive him so that he could feel better about himself and what he did. But Jill won't!
"Fuck him and the horse he rode in on! Or shall I say the Elvis tour he came in with"
You are killing me
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2013 12:13 am Title: Chapter 3
JEEZUS CRUST MICHAEL YOU STUBBORN ASS DONTCHA
Author's Response:
HAHA, he is!
Date: Jul 16, 2013 08:56 am Title: Chapter 2
AW i loveed it!!!!
Michael is not the good one... GREAT!
please keep updating!!
Author's Response:
Oops, double review lol :)