Date: Aug 07, 2013 02:14 am Title: PART 2
good challenge!:)
Author's Response:
Challenge?
Date: Aug 06, 2013 06:16 pm Title: PART 2
Lol but I still wanna say whatever, Annie!!!!!! Lol ok. But seriously, he looks pretty mysterious. Rugged, sexy type. Hmmm.. I say he's Jill's new piece of ass. Maybe she's gonna find out she's preggers, and this is the man who will raise the child as his own with her. Either way, I want him and Jill to be sexing. Lol
Author's Response:
HAHAHA! Well you may be right... or not? Already thining about a pregnancy? I don't know!
Date: Aug 06, 2013 05:26 pm Title: PART 2
You something else.
I say Jill. Maybe he is an friend with benefit's.
Author's Response:
Maybeeeeee :)
Date: Aug 06, 2013 05:26 pm Title: PART 1
gurlllllllllllllllll XD :D love it
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: Aug 06, 2013 09:06 am Title: Chapter 10
next chapter plz!!
O/
Author's Response:
Next chapter soon :)
Date: Aug 06, 2013 07:50 am Title: PART 1
This is a damn mess. Michael and Jill is like whatever to me now.
Author's Response:
NOOOO
lol
Date: Aug 06, 2013 04:35 am Title: Chapter 10
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Date: Aug 06, 2013 01:24 am Title: Chapter 10
Yep. I'm still saying whatever. Michael is still an idiot and coward. And blah to Jill. Whatever.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2013 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
(excuse me, pardon me, devil's advocate coming through....y'all know what time it is!)
So I've read this story all the way through, and I've decided I prefer Lisa and Michael to work things out.
They're both in the wrong for their bullshit. She cheated, then he cheated, then they stayed together while not being together.
I give Lisa mad props for wanting to work things out. But Trust me. Pregnancy don't change shit.
I know we all love Michael for his love of children and feel bad that Lisa didn't give him none in their marraige, but I've been around woman with children, married and single, and guess what--ONE CHILD is enough to make you want to take a lifelong vacation. Lisa had TWO. I know a woman who has FIVE. This mother shit ain't no fucking joke.The Mom gets stressed, the dad gets stressed, and the concept of sex becomes foreign for years. Trust me, kids TEST a marraige, and sometimes it ruins a marriage.
So don't use it as a way to fix the relationship, it'll only make it worse. Use this time to strengthen your fragile foundation, and THEN you can talk about children. You were right in thinking a dysfunctional relationship is no place for children. Make sure y'all are strong, and make sure YOUR MAN AINT STILL IN LOVE WITH HIS SIDE CHICK!
That is all. Love you Annie!
Author's Response:
Hey Lovely Rhythm Child :D
You're reading this story too?!
Lisa has her wrongs, Micahel has his wrongs and at this point the only thing they can do is "try" to make it work. If it works, great. If it doesn't, too bad. They would have tried! Lisa finally realizes what she has. Better late than never! I do think that's a baby won't help them at all. Let's hope that Lisa didn't completely lose her mind and won't give up until she feels like they are both ready for a baby.
Oh don't worry dear! There is room you devil's advocate too
lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2013 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
I don't see this "fresh start" lasting too long. His feelings for Jill won't just go away and I hope they don't. Time for him to feel all the pain that Jill already has. And smh at Michael thinking there is nothing he can do about his feelings for Jill. Divorce Lisa! He should have done this already. This whole situation is his doing. What an idiot and coward. I still have zero sympathy for him. He deserves to be shackled with his cheating slag of a wife for all of eternity. I think this is your only story Annie where I don't want Michael and the main girl to be together.
Author's Response:
I'll use my magic fingers to make you change your mind ^^
Date: Aug 04, 2013 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
awww so sweet that Michael and Lisa wil try it again!
but i'm so sorry for Jill :(
Author's Response:
Yes, they will try to save their wedding. And Jill will have to go one with her life :(
Date: Aug 04, 2013 02:14 am Title: Chapter 9
I am so over these shenanigans already. And I think Jill is foreshadowing. If her ass gets back to LA and finds out she's pregnant, I'm gonna be even more done with them than I already am. I don't even have the energy. I just say whatever to it all. I don't even care anymore. Michael and Elvis face are a complete joke, and Jill is starting to become one too. Whatever.
Author's Response:
I can already see the review you're going to left on the ne chapter
Lol
Date: Aug 02, 2013 07:46 am Title: Chapter 8
EXcellen, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
New chapter up :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2013 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
I wish I could say I feel bad for Lisa Marie but she encouraged Michael to sleep with another woman and look where it got him. Falling in love and sleeping with the same woman while on vacation trying to fix box his marriage, smh.
I think Michael needs to tell Jill the truth, divorce Lisa Marie and then figure out if he wants to work things out with Jill if she'll have him back. Jill don't want that Jyro guy so I don't think it's right that she's toying with his emotions the way she is cause it makes her no better than Michael.
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki :) I like your plan but I don't think Jill will want to get back with Michael, especially if he tells her the truth at the same time. I think he needs to tell her the truth, gives her some time and space and let her come to him whenever she feels ready. If she ever feels ready to take him back :S
And he defoo needs to divorce Lisa. Michael needs some time on his own too! Thank you for the review, new chapter up :)
Date: Aug 01, 2013 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh no the did it! :O
Author's Response:
THEY DID IT!