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Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 18

OH YOU DIDNT YOU FRIGGER FACE
DAMN why the clifhangrrrrr I think were all having the mikegasm of a lifetime right here XD
CANT WAIT FOR MORE :)

Author's Response:

Heheh, sorry, but I couldn't resists. Plust I hate looooong chapters. I try to keep them within some limits...

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 18

OMG!!!! I was so scared I thought Selina would run off and Michael would have to try for a long time to get her back!! I hope they aren't torn apart time and time again. I really hope Michael is able to be with Selina like he was unable to with Allison. I want them to have babies darn it!! :) Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 18

"I’d make you mine in the middle of Times Square with all the world and Uncle George looking on.”

AWWW YEAH!!! I love this chapter!!! I'm glad Michael just fessed up and told her, instead of having Selina hear it from an outsider (Such as George The Castrater or *cringe* Ciara) And how Selina set him straight, I love her so! She shows how amazing a person can be, diability or not. Excellent chapter!:-))))))

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2013 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 17

Michael needs to think it through a bit more and realize that his whole plan is likely to backfire horribly. At the very least he needs to tell Selena. I agree with one of the other reviewers in that this decision to deceive George isn't one he should be making alone. Selena has a stake in it too. She has no reason to get mad if he tells her immediately but she'll assume the worst and hate him if she hears it from someone else. And for all Michael knows, George could tell her as soon as she gets home. I know he means well but he'd be really dumb to let her leave his place without the truth. 

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2013 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 17

Bad ideal Michael, smh. He should just come clean to Selina and deal with George like a man.



Author's Response:

Michael is still fragile - a recovering alcoholic, trying to put back his career. He is not confident in his ability to deal with this situation...

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2013 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 17

No no no. Because since he already infomed Selina of Ciara's skanky ways, she's more likely to actually believe him. Keeping it from her will just backfire, because Selena will find out and be extremely sad, causing George to castrate Michael. At least if George finds out that he's actually with Selina(and he already told the truth about the whole office scene), Selina can at least attempt to convince George to accept their relationship. Great chapter!:-))



Author's Response:

Things get pretty complicated when you try hiding the truth, don't they?

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2013 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 17

Michael should tell what happened in George's office. This tactic could work but he should tell to Selina first ... He shouldnt take this decision alone, without the knowledge of Selina.Wrong,Mike!
Selina will not believe in Michael when she finds out... Selina will probably think because of her condition he can betray her and she will not find out ...Poor Selina!!I HATE CLARA!THAT B@#%&!!


Thanks for the update!!Love it!

Author's Response:

You made a good point here!

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2013 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 16

Selina and Michael are so cute!! I like the whole idea of Allison's spirit guiding Michael to move on and to a nice girl. I hope George stays away from them for a while and lets them enjoy their new happiness. Great chapter!! Didn't really like the whole thing with Clara but I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2013 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 17

Well as much as Michael means well, we all know he probably should have told Selina... :

Oh wellll

I LOVE THIS!!!!<3 Black Swan is the shittt <3



Author's Response:

We will see if Michael mans up to tell Selina the whole story...

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2013 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

“All girlfriends are manipulative. Usually in the man’s best interest, but he is just too stubborn to see it.”

BEST LINES EVER!! XDXDXD God I love Selina so much! She rocks so hard! I'm super siked her and Mike finally got togetherand are gonna be together no matter what, I can sense it! XD Mike, you have gotten yourself into the best thing that'll ever happen to you. Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2013 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 12

It surw will!! DARN. YOU MIKE! Selina only wanta to be there for you, for you NOT to treat her like an outcast and all you can think about is yourself. Such a punk. He better step to apologizig or I'll have a few choice words for him. Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2013 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

He's gotta face his fears. Running away from his thoughts of Allie and ignoring his love for Selina won't solve anything. He ahs to face them both, or else he'll never be happy. Wonderful chapter

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2013 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

Denial isn't just a river in Egypt Mike! You're wild about Selina and you know it! Love is love, no matter how much you try to deny it, its gonna make its way to you. Cupid's arrow has already been pointed Mike! Lol Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2013 08:36 am Title: Chapter 8

LololXD This promise will totally be brokenXDxD Face it Mikey! You'll be crazy about Selina in a few. xD I'm glad Mikey FINALLY came to his sense and is gonna be Selina's partner. The babies will come soon! XDXDX Jk, I know I'll have to wait but it'll be worth the wait. Great chapter!:-)))



Author's Response:

Wow wow! Hold your horses! Not so fast...there are lots and lots of things that could still go wrong between them...

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2013 08:22 am Title: Chapter 7

He better say yes!! I mean Selina is a darling, the ultimate darling! Its the least he can do for being so rude to Selina and constantly denying her. Its only fair for her to do so. Annnnywho, fantastic chapter! :-)))))

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