Date: Jun 28, 2013 05:53 am Title: Chapter 26: Cadi can I be your step mother?
Hey just because we in a fight does not mean that I will dis-continue reading your story. This was a fun but surprising chapter I like how Michael and Tori was fighting.
Author's Response:
Psh girl! That fight was petty! I was just confused and I was like "Erm squeeze me." but now I'm like "#YOLO!" yeah, like they always do =) thanks for reading =) love ya!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2013 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 25: Michael Jackson The King Of Sequins Bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Yeah, and Mike Jr. knows what to do in bed...Want to try him out?"
I laughed so loud on the bus people thought I was crazy, lol. He's gonna be star and his brothers are going to hating so hard.Author's Response:
Hmmm, you're gaining on me! Think about something and you might see the drama in the next chapters. I'm glad I could make you laugh! I was actually added that line at the last minuet. Thanks for reading! Love ya =)
Date: Jun 18, 2013 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Me, Myself, and I
That pic you responded with of Mike was too cute and funny. I swear his facial expression had me on the ground laughing. You are silly, lol.
Author's Response:
I love Michael's facial expressions! He's so cute! xD Thanks that's a compliment =) thank you for commenting.
Date: Jun 16, 2013 10:56 am Title: Chapter 24: Candy Shop
How lovely xxx You know I love this story so much, going to have to go back and comment on every chapter again.....hahahahaaa
Much Love Lizzy x
Ria x
Author's Response:
xD I know wasn't it! I'm a perv I know :( you don't have to do that. I should be going through and editing my chapters but I don't. You don't have to do that, just commenting once makes my day :) thanks for reading. I'll update when I can get out of bed. Love ya
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2013 08:41 am Title: Chapter 24: Candy Shop
That was pretty generous of Michael to give Arcadia pleasure with asking for her to return the favor. Most guys would have atleast expected a hand job, lol. But all Michael did was cuddle with her and then go to sleep. He's a very sweet guy with a wicked sense of humor and dirty mind, just what Arcadia needs in her life. This chapter was pretty good.
Author's Response:
I too have come to the realization that Michael is more dirty in his mind then in his actions. Obviously he was sexual with her but, he also loves her very much. I think that's what a lot of women need in their life. Thank you so much for reading, love ya.
Date: Jun 14, 2013 02:17 am Title: Chapter 24: Candy Shop
Still dangerousouly in love with this story... Aww Michael fingered and ate her, how cute,lol joking that was sexy... I swear Im such a perv, lol
Author's Response:
Me when reading this comment...
Anyways...I guess it was cute lol xD Becuase they are in love AWWWWWWWWWW... Anyways Thank you so much! It means so much to me! Lol, I'm a perv too, hence why I wrote that chapter. Thank you so much for reading! Love ya.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2013 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 23: It's all because of Barbie
I like Arcadia's firey temper. She let Michael know right from the start where he messed up and how, not like other females who get mad and won't tell you why and will make a guy guess what's wrong (who has time for that?).
Tori sounds like an interesting character and really sarcastic. Hopefully Michael will learn to like her. She sounds like she on his side about Arcadia, he just needs to get used to someone telling him like it is.
I'm wondering how far Michael and Arcadia will go? It seems like it got pretty hot and heavy towards the ending and Michael has been wanting it forever, lol. The chapter was pretty good to me, I liked it.
Author's Response:
I do too you know, like I said...Normally she's quiet and calm. Don't fuck with Michael or the oppisite of angel appears. Ain't nobody got time fo' 'dat! Yeah, I love Tori...She's actually based off of my friend Tori xD I know, I'm weird. Um, idk...I'm writing chapter 24 right now, it should be done by tomorrow but I wont promise anything. I'm sorry =/ I'll try harder this time. Thanks for reading! Love ya.
Date: Jun 11, 2013 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 23: It's all because of Barbie
Really LB you just blow me now we can say "She Want the dick" really Tori so when am I gonna pop up in this story - T
Author's Response:
I'm only adding Tori because she is a bitch to Michael xD and she's british and I love British people. Thanks for reading love ya!
Date: Jun 11, 2013 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1: Me, Myself, and I
Awww poor Mickey and ugh that hoe Lisa. I hope.Cadi listens to Mike and they don't break up they are such a cute couple.
Author's Response:
I know, what if Lisa is Dirty Diana, or Billie Jean, or Suzie 0.o Cadi is a pretty understanding girl I wouldn't doubt it (or would I ) I'm kidding! (Or am I) I love how everyone says that but do you guys realize we have a cute sweet girl who is so innocent (or is she) and then a boy who is sex crazy (or is he) I'm kidding thank you for reading! Updating right now. Love ya!
Author's Response:
I know, what if Lisa is Dirty Diana, or Billie Jean, or Suzie 0.o Cadi is a pretty understanding girl I wouldn't doubt it (or would I ) I'm kidding! (Or am I) I love how everyone says that but do you guys realize we have a cute sweet girl who is so innocent (or is she) and then a boy who is sex crazy (or is he) I'm kidding thank you for reading! Updating right now. Love ya!
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 22: Girl you can't get with me 'til you suck the 'D'
Love this story it has just the right amount of humor and drama that's why I give each chapter a 10. I hope Arcadia doesn't really think Michael was hooking up with Lisa. This will be their first argument as a couple so make it juicy.
Author's Response:
Thank you doll! I try *wipes sholder* just kidding. I will, I just finished chapter 23 and I don't want to ruin anything but soft spoken Arcadia comes out of her shell a bit.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Me, Myself, and I
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
You can't have them break up. You just can't. They're meant to be......
Author's Response:
Well Mike shouldn't have been messing with that heffa *Snaps fingers* Just kidding. Wait and see...Maybe he'll finally get some angry sex ;) I kid...Thank you so much for reading! I love ya...I just finished chapter 23 so I will just copy and paste it tomorrow.
Date: Jun 10, 2013 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: The New School
Eww Joeshp I love michael
Author's Response:
Yeah, he does suck. Michael's personality changes in the next few chapters...I hope you don't change your love for him. Thank you for reading, love ya.
Date: Jun 10, 2013 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: The New House
Joesph is a meanie no he a bitch real talk
Author's Response:
LOL he really is. A lot of people in this story are kind of *cough cough* ass holes. Thanks for reading =) Love ya
Date: Jun 10, 2013 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Me, Myself, and I
Wow this is a great story and I will enjoy the rest of the chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Like I've said I'm an idiot and deleted the other one but...I wipped my tears and started over xD. Thank you so much for reading! Love ya.