Hey, Shiniee!!! Lookin' good, girl! :D 

Yes, girlie, I'd love reading your story and I will. I won't be able to give you a professional opinion, but I'll give you a fan's opinion ... and I think that's more valuable. :P :))

You don't like Debbie? I thought you wouldn't like Lisa, but Debbie? Wow, that's a surprise! Actually, I tried to make her likeable because I like her in real life, too. :D Debbie's smitten with love. She's happy she is where she is now and she doesn't dare to get too involved in Michael's life. She feels like an interruption, I guess, simply because she's there. She won't be a threat, don't worry. I respect her too much. She's just happy she's close to him. She's a fan after all. At the end of the day, how many fans ended up in his arms? She was the chosen one. 

I, too, see these stories like scenes from a movie rolling in front of my eyes. It happens the same with every book I read. I understand where you're coming from. I had to make Lily forgive Michael, Shiniee. I had to make this whole thing credible. A young girl, infatuated with her idol like this, wouldn't have stayed angry for too long. I, too, love drama and things will get ugly from now on ... trust me. 

Now, maybe I'm too old, but what's a ... kik? I have no idea whether I have it or not. lol

Hugs and kisses,

Paula

Hi, SHINIEE!!! LOL (In my previous reply, I didn't notice you signed your name at the end of your comment, that's why I asked whether I can call you Jax. I only noticed AFTER I already posted my reply and these things can't be edited. I apologize and I will call you SHINIEE from now on. I promise!)

Let's clear one thing first - I DIDN'T believe you were uptight in any way, so you do not need to apologize about anything. I knew very well what you were talking about. I didn't try to read between the lines or misinterpret your words or anything. I knew exactly what you meant and I only explained my choice of characters and their age because I know this is a sensitive issue in our MJ world. Believe me, I did it because I thought it needed to be done not because I thought you were mean or anything. You were right to be asking questions. :)

You're right ... Michael is a dick and he doesn't own her ... yet. I'd love to be owned by Michael freaking Jackson ... wouldn't you? ;) Actually, Michael's using his experience and power over Lily quite a lot in this story. Sometimes, he acts like a father, sometimes like a controlling prick, but only because he doesn't know how to deal with her age. He's scared. He loves her, but he doesn't know how to show his love to such a young girl. It will happen though ... Bear with me and it'll happen.

Tight hugs,

Paula 

Oh man, I don't like Lisa either. Can you tell? lmao She's upset that she let Michael go out of stupidity and now she has no idea what to do to get him back. She's jealous of Lily. Will Michael see this about her? I don't know ... we'll see. ;)

Yup, Lily is disobeying Michael and there's serious trouble ahead. It's gonna be hell for a while. :)

Oh, but there's trouble ahead. lol It won't be easy. Things are just getting started now that Michael finally understood what he's actually feeling for Lily. With both Taryll and Lisa involved, I don't think Mike and Lily are gonna have the time of their lives together soon. ;)

I think we all wish we could have spoken on his behalf when they did what they did to him. We are doing it now, but at what cost ... :( 

Yay, Lisa! Welcome in my thread, sweetie! <3

Thank you for always being so supportive of me. I'm happy you're taking this ride with me again. :)

Much love and tight hugs,

Paula

Please, don't think you're forcing me into doing anything. I'd love to get to know you, so of course I'd love to talk to you. I want to give you my email, but not here. Do you have a Facebook account? If you don't, I'll try to send you a PM with my email. If you do have FB, I'll happily give you the link to my account. :)

OMG, ANIA!!! I've been to Cambridge. The summer before I took my Cambridge Exam in Advanced English, my parents allowed me to go to England to improve my English. I stayed in Great Yarmouth, even went to school there for a few weeks and the teachers took us on a trip to Cambridge. Oh, how I loved it!!!

Oh, you're from Poland? My best MJ friend lives in Poland. I'm in love with you, guys. You're such amazing people. <3 I must admit I envy you for living in England now. Oh, how I wish I lived there! I love that country. I fell in love with it at first sight. *sigh*

Thank you for your compliment regarding the English language. It means a lot to me because I simply love everything about it. There's no other language more beautiful to me than English. Wanna know how I started? One word - MICHAEL. I loved his voice so much that I wanted to understand his lyrics. Since I was only 9 at the time, I couldn't understand one word. So ... I started writing down the lyrics to his songs (I had no idea how to spell in English, so you can imagine how my note books looked like) and then used the dictionary trying to give some sense to all those poorly written words. I can't even tell you how long it used to take me to make sense of one song let alone all of them. This isn't even important. What's important is that I fell in love with the language. The sky was the limit from that moment on. The English language became my hobby. I asked my parents to pay for some private lessons for me so I could learn and understand the grammar. I used to read all the books I could find in English, even the ones I needed to read for school. My diaries were all written in English. I was (and still am) obsessed with this language. I can only write these stories in English. I haven't even tried doing it in Romanian. Long story short, hadn't it been for Michael, I wouldn't have probably taken such an interest in this beautiful language. 

I know about MJJU. I even started posting HIYG there, but eventually stopped because I'm more into MJJE. All my good friends are there, so I decided to stay loyal. :))

Much love,

Paula