[Report This]Date: May 08, 2021 05:25 am Title: Chapter 21/Part 1
Loved this. Please update soon. Would be a shame to leave this story hanging :)
Date: May 03, 2020 11:21 pm Title: Prologue
Awesome storyâ¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2015 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
Neat! :) Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. :) I like it, especially these parts:
He lowered his hands to her waist, pressing himself against her until he felt she ran out of breath struggling to support his weight with her body. "You said I don't own you," he spoke huskily close to her mouth, "You're wrong. I do own you. I own your mind. I own your heart. You shiver only by thinking of me. You tremble at the simple mentioning of my name. Your knees buckle when I look at you. Your heart starts racing when I touch you. Your body heats up when I kiss you. No other man will ever make you feel like this. I have the power to do anything to you. So yeah, I own you ..."
"You, self-centered bas ... Oh God," she gasped when she felt her lips crushed under his hungry mouth. He had power over her. He was able to make her beg for forgiveness even when he was the one who made every mistake known to man.
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"You have no idea what you just did," the old man hissed bringing his wheelchair in front of her, abruptly stopping her from her tracks.
"Oh God, dad," Isa gasped, surprised by his sudden appearance, "You scared me ... What are you talking about?"
"You know what I'm talking about, Isa. What the hell happened in there?" The angry look in his eyes told her he heard every word she told Michael only minutes earlier. She knew her father was Lily's biggest supporter, so she wasn't surprised that the man disagreed with her decision.
I hope that Lily's mother will see sense and realize that her father is absolutely right... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2015 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
Neat so far. I like it. :) Plus, I also like how Michael and Lily's grandfather enjoyed each other's company as well. It was as though Lily's grandfather looked at Michael and saw not only the young man he himself once was before he met, courted and married Lily's grandmother a long time ago, but also as the grandson he'd always wanted, but never got.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2015 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 21/Part 1
great story im looking forward to reading another great chapter keep up the great writing on this amazing story
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2014 09:43 am Title: Chapter 21/Part 1
I hope you come back & write again. this is perhaps one of my top fav fics ;-; I can feel every emotions, it's amazing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2014 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 21/Part 1
Neat so far. :) I like it. Can't wait to read the next chapter; it sounds pretty awesome... :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Prologue
I'm a new reader :) my name is Sammi, and I'm 18 years old from New Zealand. I just wanted to tell you that I love your storyline and how realistic and believable your fic is, it's so easy to get lost in your writing seriously. Keep it up girl, hope you update soon ♥ xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2013 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 21/Part 1
please i NEED another chapter! come back soon! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2013 01:16 am Title: Chapter 21/Part 1
Where are you girl?
Please come back!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 02:51 pm Title: Prologue
ITS ALMOST JUNE 25 I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER NOW OR I'LL DIE
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2013 07:28 pm Title: Prologue
WHERE ARE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU????? :(
Author's Response:
LOL Miriel
I'm here. I'm struggling with exams right now and I barely have time left for writing or for being online. As soon as I'm done with school, things will go back to normal. It's quite difficult to deal with both work and exams at the same time. I promise I'll update soon.
Hugs and kisses,
Paula
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2013 09:33 am Title: Prologue
Helloooo :) I am so sorry that i hadn't been able to review sooner, i've been very busy this week. But I'm back :). I can't believe LaToya reacted that way. Lily's right, how could she possibly think she's after Michael's money when she's been there for him since she was 12 years old? She was there when her sister wasn't. LaToya has no right to judge Lily at all. And also...they're having sex like 30 times per day and she's not pregnant yet? hum...hahahaha. I don't have anything in mind right now to write, like i said i've been pretty busy with the final exams and i haven't been able to be in peace or think about anything else for the last 8 days. I think we can talk about it in like two weeks when i get out of all this stuff, okay? I've missed you and your fanfic so much this week. Glad i can finally get some rest :) I'll be waiting for more and i'll try to read and review about how amazing your fanfic is as soon as i can, i promise <3.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 21/Part 1
Neat so far. :) I like it.
Keep up your super-neat, very awesome and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2013 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 20
LaToya had no right to speak to Lily the way she did. She was way out of line and I'm happy Lily stood up for herself against her. It's nice to know that most of Michael's family supports their relationship dispite their age difference. Now Joseph on the other hand kind of surprised me that he didn't out right attack Lily. But Lily is right he is not her father and he can't go around telling her what and how to treat his children especially when their wrong.
Lily gave up a lot to be with Michael and her needs to understand that not everyone will approve of their relationship.