[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2013 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
And this is what happens when you procrastinate. She should have told him over the phone. And then when he came over to her place. But now let's see if Michael can see be a good listener himself.
Author's Response:
*sigh* yup! But she's still learning. And it's not like they've been together for long so I'm sure he'll understand. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2013 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
Omg i can't believe Julian would do that i knew Julian was up to something...........
Author's Response:
When Victoria said he was an asshole, that's what she meant lol. He really doesn't know his boundaries. Thanks for reading!
Date: Dec 16, 2013 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 18
Seriously, I've had enough of forced kisses. If a woman doesn't want to get kissed, she doesn't get kissed. I saw plenty instances when the guy got kneed in the balls before he got too far. Really. I hope this story doesn't go down the predictable line, because I really enjoyed it so far...
Author's Response:
It's not going to go down a predictable line. If it bothers you that much I'll add a warning but it's a story... And this is the first time I've put something like this in my story. It's a sensitive issue but it happen and that's why I added it in there. I'm sorry you feel that way but that's just the way it is. And if you read the story, you'd know that Victoria DID mention that Julian was an asshole... So he pretty much did something an asshole would do. This is the first and last time I add something like this to my story but I'm just letting you know that stuff like this does happen. And really, most of the stories on this site go the "predictable route". Thanks for reading.
Date: Dec 16, 2013 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 18
Victoria is a dumb ass! Period. I knew that bullshit would happen, I predicted it like clockwork. I hope Michael won't be mad but I can't say I blame him if he does. Her stupid ass should've told him about Julian's thirsty ass from the JUMP. Don't do all that dumb ass cliche shit now, Victoria. I hate that "it's not what it looks like, I can explain" shit. Bitch better wipe the shock off her face and explain to Michael RIGHT NOW wtf just happened. To hell with stalling and all that fake nervous shit, this bitch better start talking now before she gets her ass dumped at this damn party.
Author's Response:
*sigh* your review are always something else... lol. What she did was stupid and she knows that but we're all a little dumb. We all do dumb shit and Vic is no stranger to that. She will explain to him what happened but really she just didn't want to tell him to make things awkward between him and Mike. But uh, you'll see how things unfold. LOL and she won't get dumped. Thanks for reading :)
Date: Dec 16, 2013 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh lawd. I hope Michael believes Victoria when she explains to him what happened. Julian is an asshole. He really thinks Victoria still has feelings for him.
Author's Response:
I'm sure Michael won't be so unfair about it. If she explains everything, then Victoria will be in the clear. Thanks for reading!
Date: Dec 16, 2013 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
Update soon, I love it.
Author's Response:
I will as soon as I can :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 17
Julian though. Like...people like him are the worst. Why in the world to ex boyfriends always feel so high and mighty like the girlfriend can't move on. Like...you cheated bruh! And twice at that. Why would you think that she would still want to go back to you. I mean it's understandable that she may have had a weak moment in that split second because it be like that sometimes but she quickly snapped back so he should have got a clue. Ugh. I can already tell that he's gonna be working my nerves.
I'm glad that Victoria didn't get too angry with Bethany though. Bethany should have pulled a girl code and beat around the bush with telling Julian what was up lol. I would have trolled so hard if I were her having that conversation with him.
But anyway, Victoria and Michael are just too cute. But noooooooo at Michael inviting Victoria to Julian's party. This is about to be a mess and a half. Hopefully Victoria will tell Michael what's up sooner than later.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
Victoria is a complete dumbass if she doesn't tell Michael about Julian. She really has no excuse I don't get what her problem is. It's like she's trying to create problems for herself.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 07:31 am Title: Chapter 17
She should had just told him the truth right there can't wait to see how this turns out.
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2013 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
Uuuuuuh....drama in the air. But maybe this is the way things will come to an end. Michael beats Julian's ass and Julian finally leaves Victoria alone.
Date: Nov 13, 2013 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ok Victoria needs to get off the bs and tell Michael about her lame ass boyfriend. It's obvious that this situation is not gonna just go away unless she handles it. And ignoring it like the shit don't exist is NOT handling it. She needs to tell Michael immediately. She will not take her goofy ass to that party and act oblivious like that asshole isn't her ex and like he didn't come to her house and try to force himself on her. Enough of the secret shit, she needs to get off the bs and tell Michael. Why doesn't she have some kinda security anyway? Her house is a damn free for all. Anybody can just show up and do what the hell they want. She needs to get it together. And there was no point in lying about not having a boyfriend, fuck him! Michael is her man and he is very much a real person. She thinks she can hide him? Furthermore why would she? Especially to this asshole. She needs to tell Michael. Period. And don't half ass it either. Tell him everything.
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2013 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 17
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was so funny when Julian was singing!
And Michael and Victoria are so cute!!!!!!!
And the endng, woooooooooo wow!!! :D
I love this chapter, can't wait for more!! <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2013 04:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Awww that was really sweet! Loved this chapter!
Author's Response:
it was so great ^_^ thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2013 03:36 am Title: Chapter 6
That was really nice. I guess Victoria needs let go of her act and start acknowledgeing what's really going on in her soul. She looks like she's blocked out her feelings for a long time and that's not healthy.
Author's Response:
yeah she has that problem throughout the fic I think. Thanks for reading! ^_^ She'll get better... maybe lmao
Date: Nov 04, 2013 02:47 am Title: Chapter 4
Brother said it best! Someone really needed to slap some common sense into that girl.
Author's Response:
lol yeah, she's a mess but she'll learn. Thanks for reading!