[Report This]Date: May 28, 2013 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 55
First of all, you quoted Lord of The Rings.
Second of all, Michael is pretty sexy, but he's also creeping me out with all this, "Daddy's gonna punish you if you're a bad girl" shit, since you know he's a new dad of a little girl, and he saying that to....the girl's mother...
I mean I'm working to get past Kalli's lil cheating stunt, now I'm just tryna understand Mike's sexual paternity complex. And the fact that Kalli's just going with it!!!
"Knowing that I can make him mad like this is so... kicky! Michael raises a brow and holds up his hand and makes a spank gesture with it. Oh yeah, that's right! Daddy will spank me? Get the fuck outta here. It’s my birthday!"
...dafuq?
lol cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Hey lovely RC! I thought you already knew we were soulmates :)!
HAHA, I knew you wanted me to make Kalli miserable during this trip but, you know it isn't over. Still 3 days to go. Dramaaaa!
Poor Kalli is too horny to think about paternity complex
That GIF is life. I love PriiIiIiIiiIiIiiiiiiiiCE *fangirling*
Next chapter soon :D
Date: May 28, 2013 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 55
I agree with kalli But at the same time michael is gonna beat that cooch up she better get ready when seem like mikey jr is on the way lol.
Author's Response:
LMAO, so true! Next chapter soon
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2013 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I also loved how everyone BUT Michael was dancing. He's the dancer! But he was like "oh no I don't do that" LOL.
Author's Response:
IKR! But he was even madder that Kalli was having fun with Willy lol! New chapter soon :D
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2013 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMAOOOOOO! I can't stop laughing girl. I can't believe you actually added the chastity belt ahahaha. When he gave her the necklace I was like "how sweet" and then kept reading and was like "maybe not" lol. Wow Michael is possessive. Though I can see why he's mad seeing as she didn't tell him it's her birthday but told Willie. I think if the shoe had been on the other foot and Naomi had known about Michael's birthday but not Kalli, she would have flipped! Even so, Daddy Michael is being a bad boy. He shouldn't be yelling at her in front of all those people. She needs to give him a spanking!
My favorite part was at the end when he made the spanking motion at her while she was dancing.
I can't wait to see what he does. Is he going to fuck her on the dance floor in front of everyone?
I love this story.
Author's Response:
Hey girl!! LMAO, I had to because when I read your review it made me laugh so hard!!! Yes, I agree. But when Kalli told Willy it kind of slipped out of her mouth. She wasn't planning on telling anyone. But yeah, she should have told Michael! And yes, screaming at Kalli was so disrespectfu. Daddy Michael was mad and didn't give two fuck the other guests.
I love this part too hihi :D
" Is he going to fuck her on the dance floor in front of everyone?" ROTFLLLLLLLL. You are so nasty lmao! Michael is mad but not mad enough to do that... Lol, that would be so great if he did lol!
Thank you for the review, the rate and the idea girl :D
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2013 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I can't believe she slapped his ass LMAOOOO. Although can't say I blame her. She needs to turn the tables on Daddy Michael. Time for him to scream "Mama Kalli" lol. Doesn't quite have the same ring to it.
Author's Response:
Yes she did LMAO! She yield to the temptation ;) Aww I love he nickname "Mama Kalli" lol! Next chapter soon ;)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Daddy Michael had better lock that down and lock it tight. A chastity belt, maybe? Cause I've got a feeling that Willie is going to be trying to break in. If Michael finds out he tried to pick the lock it isn't going to be pretty. Although I can't wait to see Daddy Michael fly into a sexy jealous rage.
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOO!!!!! Everybody want a taste of Kalliope!!!
" Although I can't wait to see Daddy Michael fly into a sexy jealous rage." It might happen earlier than you think ^^. Next chapter in a couple of minutes !!
Date: May 27, 2013 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 53
Mike you better get a move on it boyy. That gif is sexy to the damn core wooo looorrdd that just ......... lol im hot lol anybody else is you annie cause i know im not alone lol but the licking lips make me think of this song i will post it on this chapter later be on the look out ms.annie.
Author's Response:
I love ths gif too!!!! Which song? I can't wait to hear it :D
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 52
Kalli needs to have a deep conversation with Michael instead of all the ones she keeps having in her head with herself. Yes it was wrong that she cheated on Nathan with Michael but its not like she planned it happen and now she needs to move on. Michael loves that girl and she needs to realize it,accept it, and take it to the next level by loving him back. I mean they just made mind blowing love and she's feeing guilty! She should be glowing and walking funny not freaking out and going bipolar on Michael. I love that Michael has so much patience with Kalli because I would have went off on her already.
Author's Response:
Yes, Kalli needs to speak her mind. I wonder what would happen of Michael stop chasing... Lmao, Michael love the chase and this is why he is so patient with her! LOL, it's funny because one of my reviewer wants to get in the story to slap Kalli lmao!! Next chapter soon :)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 51
“Ok...” I take a deep breath “So what if I tell you that I won’t give you head like ever, that you will never go down on me, that if you think you’re going to take me from behind, you are high on ecstasy and that when it comes to sex I am lazy as fuck. I’m not kidding. I will probably spread my legs and let you do you thing”
Sounds like someone ate their words, Kalli? Finally a joining of the bodies and a damn hot one too! Its about time they tore up the sheets god knows they waited long enough. I pretty sure I know why he wouldn't take off his shirt but he should trust Kalli with his condition after all she is a doctor.
“Do you really think I will let you leave this bed until you come screaming ‘Daddy Michael’? Of course not, baby!” Michael is such a bedroom freak.
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO!! I know, Kalli did and let Michael did everything she said would never happen! Michael is a freak and he got her sprung! About his skin condition, yes he should talk about it with her. I guess he thinks it's too early too.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 50
His body pressed against mine. His hot breath on me. His hand on my neck. His other hand grabbing a handful of my hair. His blue balls. My purple ovaries.
I like where this is leading to, wink, wink 😉
Where do you get all you videos of Michael?
Author's Response:
I love it too haha 😉
Oh, it's not a video! It's a gif. It's like a video without the sound that has the side of an image. I got on Tumblr :D There is a lot of them on this site
Date: May 27, 2013 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 52
Sigh. They can make it right. It's obvious Michael cares for her, and it has nothin to do with the sex. She needs to talk to him, they need to talk to each other. They actually have potential to be a really good couple. They need to nurture that! Especially if Kalli is pregnant again. That note says that what Michael feels for her is real. He's enamored with her. Kalli needs to grow up and acknowledge his feelings!!!!!! She knows she wants him too. I want them in a happy loving relationship. Sex is just a small part of the equation.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Indeed, it can work if Kalli decides to TALK to Michael and if Michael keep it in his pants long enough to have a real conversation. They better work it out if Michael super sperm reached her ovum. I want them happy tooooooo! Next chapter soon :D
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 49
"Ladies and gentleman, my ovaries are purple."
Kalli is going to kill me! Now she knows how Michael feels everytime he gets blue balls. Funny how he used Naomi to get her out of bed. She got jealous too. But I don't think Michael gonna mess up this oppertunity to be her. Michael is so hot in this video so I can relate to she was say about not looking at him, lol.
“Spread your legs for Daddy” fans self while trying not to pass out
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki! LOL, Kalli will die from horniness. I'm happy you notice the way Michael used Naomi to get Kalli jealous! You always do ;-)
"Spread your legs for Daddy" ...
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 52
Kalli needs a good hard slap in the face. I wish I could teleport myself into the story and do it since Michael can't. Well, he shouldn't but I wouldn't blame him if he had the urge. It looks like Daddy Michael LITERALLY fucked her brains out. She's on the pill! If she takes it properly the odds of getting pregnant are supremely low. Almost all birth control pill failures are due to user error. As a doctor she should know this. If she wants to use condoms then she needs to TALK TO HIM. Not start acting like a rape victim. They need to have a conversation about their relationship anyways. And I don't get why she feels so guilty about giving in to him. She wouldn't have felt guilty about her one night stand with Elijah if she didn't get pregnant. And Michael isn't some just some random guy she picked up off the street. They've been working up to this moment for years. I know she feels like she doesn't know Michael as well as she should but if they start a relationship that will come with time. I mean for crying out loud the man was washing her hair for her! Obviously it is about a lot more than sex for him. He is obviously in love with her! It is very true that you can't control who you fall in love with and sometimes that chemistry is so strong that you don't take all the steps in perfect order. Ugh she makes me mad. She needs to stop pushing him away and start acting like a human being. She's lucky he seems to like a chase because otherwise he would have ditched her ass already.
On the other hand, I'm rooting for the Jackson super sperm. Swim little fishes, Swim!
Author's Response:
Hey Camilleian :D
LMAO! I love how passionate you are about the story! Poor Kalli is just scared to ruin it. She had sex with him, then thought about protection... Indeed, they need to DTR before Kalli change her mind again. Maybe if Michael stops chasing, she will reaize she loves him too... Just sayin!
LOL! Poor Kalli can't have sex without getting pregnant!
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 52
Nice resolution...but will it work? I have serious doubts about it...:)
Author's Response:
LMAO! Let's see if Kalli can resist Michael's sensual seduction ^^
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 48
How is that Michael is beautiful, handsome and sexy all while sleeping? Kalli is one lucky bitch! They were so close this time but birth control and sleep got them both before the fire works could happen. It will all the more sweeter when it finally does happen for both of them. I like the fact that Kalli wants to make love and not fuck. It means she wants and expects a lot from Michael and he better live up to it.
Favorite quotes:
I just want to get to know him better first. Is it a bad thing? I know Michael had been chasing me for the longest. I know he expressed his feelings for me a long time ago. I should have known better. Michael has needs and I have too. But I wished we could put them aside and do something else. Like talking and getting to know each other better.
I can already hear Marvin Gaye’s song “Let’s get it on”! I swear, this song was made for me. Marvin Gaye knew what he was doing with it. I tried to hold back the feeling too Marvin. And Michael feels it too. So yes, you are right, we should get it on! Michael and I are sensitive people and we need to give love too. I know Marvin, giving myself to Michael can never be wrong if my love is true. Yeah, I am ready for Michael to let the “spirit moves” me and “ groove me good”. God bless you Marvin Gaye.
What the hell is this? I ask myself feeling something on my leg. I lift the sheet and try my best not to gasp too loudly. There is no way cuddling feels better that the humongous thing he has between his legs! Oh my God, what am I doing? I quickly drop the sheet, surprised still obvious on my face.I turn to Michael and he is smirking on his sleep. That bastard is even cocky in his sleep.
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki :)!
Yes, Kalli is so lucky to have Michael chasing her. Michael needs to calm down his blue balls and make sweet passionate love to Kalli. Hahah! When I read your quote I see that Kalliope is bipolar lmao. First of all she doesn't want to give it to Michael, then she wants him and after she just want to wake him up and get it on! Kalli need to make up her damn mind.