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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Kalli NEVER should have agreed to stay at Nathan's place. She isn't helping anyone by doing that. She is hurting both Nathan and Michael, and stressing herself out unnecessarily in the process. God she's dumb sometimes. Are you sure she's a surgeon? I don't believe that she is. I was under the impression that you need a brain to do med school.

I never liked Nathan but I feel really sorry for him now. He can do so much better.

I see that DM has resorted to kidnapping. Can't he be arrested for that shit? Next he'll whip out a chloroform soaked rag and she'll wake up at Neverland. She'll have no memory of the preceeding week and she'll find out her IUD has been removed and she is mysteriously impregnated. Either that or he'll resort to some kind of kinky bondage fantasy where he is her master. The safe word will be "thirst"



Author's Response:

LMAO! I guess she is clever but not when it comes to relationship. Nathan is a good guy and it's too bad that he had to fall for Kalli while Michael had his eyes on her. She shouldn't have taken him back after the basket ball but at the same time she couldn't plan that she would have fallen for Michael!

YAS! DM is back lol!

"Next he'll whip out a chloroform soaked rag and she'll wake up at Neverland. She'll have no memory of the preceeding week and she'll find out her IUD has been removed and she is mysteriously impregnated" OH GIRL!

That would so nasty to have Abigail and pregnant and Kalli at the same time LMAO!

" Either that or he'll resort to some kind of kinky bondage fantasy where he is her master. The safe word will be "thirst""

You are on some 50 shades of Gey type of shit lmao! You're so crazy! Love you girl ;-)

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 70

If you're trying to get me to think Nathan secretly sold the photos....its not working.

Part of me knew the plan was foiled from the beginning. It woud be easy for the orignater of the photos to make hard-copies and then send the original to nathan, because he could get more money by selling the photos than by nathan paying him NOT to. 

While I do think he might try something in regard to having her stay over at his ouse...but then again, that may have nothing to do with the photo thing and more with his emotions coming to a head and making impulsive desicions.

Regardless of the problems with michael, kalli didn't dump him, so she better not cheat on him. When you d it twice.....you cannot be saved.

Oh, and welcome to the drama world that is being MJ's chick.



Author's Response:

I'm not trying to make you believe anything.... hihi

LMAO! I can't guarantee it for Kalli. She feels like she owes Nathan so if he tries something, she will probably give into him just because he saved her reputation... But I can't say more because the next chapter is coming :D

Thank you for the review gurrrll. I'm still wondering how I should picture you in this story lmao! Yes, you're still Lukas' girl and you need to be introduced t her family lol

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 69

Damn Michael you fucked up! I think you're asking Kalli too much right now. Give her some time to absorb the whole situation and let her get back to you about what she wants to do. Did Michael know about the pregnancy before hand or was he just as shocked as Kalli?

Favorite quote:

“You just don’t get it, do you?” Michael says “You are my woman. You are mine. We belong together! Damnit! You’ll be with me at the end. Just spare us the troubles and say yes”




Author's Response:

Exactly, Kalli is finding herserlf in Abigail's shoes. Abigail felt the same way and she left. If Michael doesn't want Kalli to left him he should give her time to think about it. Michael discovered it at the same time.

Aww, you ove control freak Michael lol! He is not letting his woman go

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 68

Please let this be tabloid gossip! Because Michael if left and wasn't man enough to confess to Kalli that he got Abigail pregnant than he is a asshole. Sounds like someone has some explaining to do and they had better do it quick.

Favorite quote: 

“I’m going to lend you money. You look so miserable without Michael. You’re not even glowing anymore!” Liu says “Is his dick that fabulous? Dang!” Liu says out loud causing everybody in the staff room to turn to us “It must be a magic stick”


I was missing Liu for a minute there she always smile my face.



Author's Response:

Michael needs to tell Kalli everything he knows before she begins to believe everything she hears on TV! When I saw "favorite quote" I knew it was one of Liu's one LMAO

Vicki; Liu's number one fan !

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 67

Why is Abigail back again? I thought we got rid of her! And she pregnant too? I guess miracles do happen to those who wait and pray for them. It's just too bad that it didn't happen both Michael.

Major points to Nathan for looking out for Kalli in the last chapter! Like he said he didn't have to but he did because he cares. I just hope that Michael is not right about her own Nathan a favor. 



Author's Response:

Hey Vicki :D Yes, she is back again and with a baby in her belly to keep her company lol! And Nathan is sch a sweetheart, too bad he had to end up with Kalliope. She shouldn' thave commited to him knowing that she would give into Michael sooner or later

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nathan is a dead man. He should skip town now because Daddy Michael is already on his way.



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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 70

I hope she gets back with Nathan. At least he won't have any random kids popping up. 



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Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 65

Once again you had me laughing out loud on the bus. Michael and his angry sex is something else and Kalli is such a freak now! But I like these changes in them because it helps them grow as a couple. I do believe Michael is going a bit over board with his jealousy but its cute too. I just hope he doesn't embarrass Kalli at her job.

P.S. I know it's been awhile since I have comment but I have been busy getting ready for my externship in hospital. So I will comment when I can and rate.



Author's Response:

Hey Vicki! You're on time for a new update :D! AHAH! I'm sorry! But your reviews have the same effect on me lol! Michael is turning our girl Kalli into a freak and I bet she doesn't mind! Oh it's ok! As long as you come back with your funny reviews :D Love ya :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 69

Yeah I'm done.. I just don't see this ending well. Unless Abigail is gonna sign over her parental rights to Michael, I don't see this ending well for my girl Kalli. She shouldn't have to be with someone who's parenting a child with their ex. If that's the damn case, she needs to get Jade and go be with Elijah then. This is a damn mess now. I'm done with Michael at this point. I don't see this ending well. 



Author's Response:

Well, every story doesn't have to end up with Michael and the originl girl together *shrug* but it isn't the end yet ;-)

"she needs to get Jade and go be with Elijah then"

OMG, that's not happening lmao!! I can't even imagine Kalli and Elijah together again LMAOOO

And Kalli wants to be in Jade's life. If she still wants it, she'll have to deal with Michael and preggo Abigail! So better get used to it now. But like Camilleain said "the Thirst is about to return"

Next chapter soon :D. Thank you for the review Love :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

LMAO WOW I think I'm the only reviewer on here who doesn't see the baby as that big of a deal. If they both love each other Abigail's pregnancy shouldn't matter. There wasn't any infidelity involved and I doubt Abigail is some psycho bitch intent on driving them apart. Kalli is more of a psycho than Abigail lol. The baby is just a test they need to pass. The fact that Michael still chooses Kalli after only one month of dating over retrying to be a family with a pregnant Abigail speaks volumes as to how much he truly cares for Kalli. If all he wanted was a mother for his babies he wouldn't bother with Kalli's drama queen ass. 



Author's Response:

Indeed, I think you're the only one thinking like this lol!It is obvious that Abigail didn't do it on purpose and that Kalli must be overracting about it but she didn't feel like being a mother to Jade 2 month ago and I don't think raising someone's child is in her plan too. Kalli is in Abigail's shoes but is she going to do like Abigail and leave or staying with Michael?

"If all he wanted was a mother for his babies he wouldn't bother with Kalli's drama queen ass"

Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 06:19 am Title: Chapter 69

"I knew I wouldn't be able to se another woman carrying my mans child."

 

Ex-fucking-actly. This is why Abigail left in the motherfucking first place! She was MARRIED to a man she couldn't give a child to, and womans intuition gels me she knew mike was into Kalli long before she left. Seein him hold kallis belly that day had to have ruined her.

But YOU as a surrogate mother yourself, you never had to deal with it because you were supposed to be the vessel that brought about the thing she always wanted and instead you took her place! An unfortunate turn of events led you to fall in love with a possessive jealous bipolar man who is legally the father to your biological child, a child that was essentially his last resort. Sorry to be blunt.

Now he finds out the woman who he initially had these dreams with is finally making an old dream come true, but it's too late to try again as a couple and it's too late to go back and make different desicions. Don't be fooled everybody. The way he treats Kelli tells me she was partly a rebound, a desperate substitute for the mother he wanted Abi to be.

Imagine if your dreams were shattered so you tried tO fulfill them with someone else, and then suddenly those shatterd dreams were fulfilled RIGHT at the inoppurtune moment. Kalli you cannot be so heartbroken. This was never your world to begin with. You were supposed to get in and get out. But you let yourself get dickmatized at so much risk. This piece is on you. If you choose to stay, you'll be where Abi once was, only abigail isn't a stranger. Like you, she will stick around forever. Like she did, you'll forever be pained to see the two of them fawn over a child that is not yours. 

This isnt anyone's fault...and at the same time it's everyone's fault. Lust and love got mixed too quickly. Foolish desicions were made under the guide of building a family. Kalli got in too deep for a girl unsure of her future. Michael put all his emotions and expectations and frustrations onto This girl when he shoulda known better. Abigail left way too early, way too soon. And now all this. 

Hence why I suggest to all surrogate mothers...be careful who you have a baby for. If the husband or wife is showing interest in YOU, run for it. Or you'll end up like Kalli. Cheating on boyfriends for the baggage extravaganza. 



Author's Response:

Hey you :D!! Yeah, funny how Kalliope is in Abigail's shoes now. I'm glad you noticed it!! People are quick to call Abigail a coward adn quiter because she left Michael with the baby, but deep down she knew that she couldn't do it. Michael had his eyes on Kalli and this marriage couldn't last long.

"The way he treats Kelli tells me she was partly a rebound, a desperate substitute for the mother he wanted Abi to be" TRUE and sad...

If Kalli decides to stay, she will know what Abi went through and maybe she needs it. But she will be around since she wants to be around Jade more

Thank you for the review and the rate babe :D

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2013 12:02 am Title: Chapter 69

OMG!Abgail is preggy....shit!
Please,Kalli!Dont leave MJ...


Thank u Annie for keeping updating this story...I'm still in shock about Paris...sad...angry...I'm not in a good mood but I need to be Strong for her.All MJFam needs to stay Strong...
Love u,girl!

Author's Response:

Yeessss!! Abigail is pregnant from Michael. And Kalli needs to stay with him if she really loves him.

I know, this is so sad. I hope she will ok and that people will realize that what they say can affect people. Praying for Paris

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2013 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 69

So it's his baby?? Yep. I'm done. I hope Kalli finds a man who will make her happy, who has NO baggage.  I'm out. 



Author's Response:

Yup, it is Michael's baby growing inside of Abigail's belly. You're done with Michael that easily lmao? C'mon it's just the beginning

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2013 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

OK Kalli, put on your big girl panties and take a deep breath. The guy divorced Abigail FOR YOU. He obviously doesn't want her back even if she's pregnant. He knocked her up over 2 months before they started dating. He is also raising YOUR child that you had with another man. No, the situation isnt ideal. I would actually be more angry that he didn't tell me up front than anything. The man wants lots of kids, well now that's one less kid he will expect Kalli to push out in the future. I can understand feeling upset about it but she shouldn't end their relationship over it. Well, I don't think Michael will let her anyways! I sense that the Thirst is about to return. 



Author's Response:

"well now that's one less kid he will expect Kalli to push out in the future" LMAO

And yes you're right, the thirst will be BACK! Thank you for the review Love :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2013 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

OK I see 2 possibilities for Michael's emotional state at dinner:

1) There is a possibility that the baby is his and he was shocked and angry at Abigail for not telling him. He is also afraid that when Kalli finds out she will flip. Not sure if I buy this because he seemed a bit too sad. I don't think he would be anything but happy to get another kid no matter where it came from. And he wasn't with Kalli 10 weeks ago so she can't really get too upset about the conception.

2) There is no way that the baby is Michael's and he was mad/jealous at Abigail for telling him she did not want kids or even lying to him about her fertility, and then going out and having a baby with someone else. It's a slap in his face and it would hurt. I would imagine it would be kind of emasculating for him. 

NOW.....that being said, Kalli has every right to put his balls in a vice and twist them off for being such a hypocrite. He can't expect to be able to act like a pitbull with roid rage when Kalli bumps into Nathan, and then have her be OK with him meeting Abigail whenever he wants. I'm not saying that his lunch date had any nefarious purpose on his part other than to get some answers from Abigail. But Kalli has a every right to hurt his narrow ass and make him suffer. Mama Kalli needs cause violent damage to his penis. 

I think the craziest scenario would be if Elijah is Abigail's babby daddy. Isn't he seeing someone that he refuses to tell Kalli about? Partner swap! 

Can't wait for the next one girl!



Author's Response:

Every possibilities are believable :D And you're right, Mama Kalli needs to make a grand entrance. And she needs to be as vicious as Daddy Michael haha!

"I think the craziest scenario would be if Elijah is Abigail's babby daddy. Isn't he seeing someone that he refuses to tell Kalli about? Partner swap! " OMG, that would be disgusting and confusing LMAO!!!! Elijah spreading his dna everywhere in the world LOL! Who's next for Elijah, Liu? LMAO

I am writing the next chapter :D

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