[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 74
there's only one idea passing through my mind now: that Abigail's baby is not Michael's...Should I bet 10 bucks on the idea?
Author's Response:
Should you...?
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
The only time I've seen Michael that angry is when Nathan is around so I was just wondering. Maybe he got in there and Nathan was all like "Surprise bro, the baby's mine." His revenge on Michael for stealing Kalli.
Author's Response:
AND I CAN IMAGINE MICHAEL SCREAMING " I AM NOT YOUR FUCKING BROTHER!!!!!" and then take the first thing he find and throw it on Nathan's face. LMAOOO, it's 7 am in France and I am waking every up with my laugh. HAHAH! Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 74
What just happened? You can't leave it like that!
Why would Michael be so angry after leaving Abigail's room? Was Nathan in there? I'm sure she didn't put herself in the hospital on purpose so there's no reason for Daddy Michael to come out. I hope she didn't do anything stupid that could hurt or kill the baby.
I NEED to see what happens next......
Author's Response:
Oops ...
Something happened in that room!
"Was Nathan in there?"
LMAO? Why would Nathan be here? Do you want him bck? I bet you do... hehe
Next chapter soon ;) Thank you for the review and the rate :D Love ya!
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 74
Girl I was just thinking about you and this story all I got to say is that abby better had not did some stupid shit. Point black simple . Like I said Annie gon with your bad self . Heyyyy lol.
Author's Response:
Abigail is not that evil, I bet she didn't end up in the hospital on purpose. Now, let's see why she is here :D
"Annie gon with your bad self"
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 09:56 am Title: Chapter 73
I love reading about Kalli spending time with Jade. It's just too bad that she's doing it under these circumstances. I reall do hope that Michael gets his shit together because if he doesn't be will lose Kalli. The two of them really need to work on communication and trust with each other in order to have a strong lasting relationship. Michael was so close to saying I love you this time but for obvious reasons it was not the right time.
I hope tha Abigail is ok.
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki! You're right, we need more Kalliope-Jade moment moment :D. More info about Abigail on the following chapters! Thank you for review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2013 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hopefully Abigail doesn't have a miscarriage. She had such a hard time getting pregnant in the first place. At least if they both lived at Neverland Kalli could be her doctor. Although Lesbogail may enjoy having Kalli examine between her legs a bit too much lol.
Such shitty timing with the knock on the door. Hope we find out soon what Michael was going to say.
Author's Response:
"Lesbogail may enjoy having Kalli examine between her legs a bit too much lol" GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
Next chapter soon ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
He can't kick her out now that he's already asked her to stay. You're right, it would make him look like a huge asshole if he were like "Kalli's here now, fuck off." Although really, that's kind of what he's done already in regards to his love life. My point is that he shouldn't have asked her to stay yet. She isn't at risk of going into labor anytime soon and has NO REASON to be there yet. Now all that's going to happen is DRAMA. Although I suppose that Neverland is not your typical home, there's a lot more space so they may not bump into each other much. But STILL. DM is not taking either woman's feelings into account.
Abigail seems like a nice enough person, so I doubt she will purposely cause problems. However, if she is still in love with Michael that IS a problem in and of itself.
Author's Response:
Yeah, too rude. That would look like this
"To the left. Everything you own, in a box to the L.E.F.T. See ya when you deliver my brown eyed with high cheekbones baby"
DM cannot be bothered with Abigail and Kalliope's female emotions! No! Dude has his ex wife and his future wifey delivering pretty babies! LMAO, now that I think about it it sounds so crazy! Yes, Neverland is not even house, it's a castle! But it wouldn't be fun if Kalliope and Abigail never see each other during their stay...
You know what is happening right? D-R-A-M-A
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 71
Annie girl! This chapter was amazing! I was laughing my ass off at Michael and Nathan! This is the drama I was asking for earlier when I made suggestions a while back. You were so close to giving me that fight I was asking for, lol. Why would Kalli think Michael can't fight? He has six brothers! What does she think they did all day? Drink tea and talk about the weather? And look at who their dad is, come on Joseph ain't no punk! I'm sure Michael could have handle himself in a fight never under estimate someone just because they don't believe in fighting. Anyway, Liu was right about Nathan wanting her back but Kalli feeling bad about what happen walked right into this mess. The universe like fucking with her cause she creates these situations! Hopefully she'll figure that out for herself and soon.
Favorite quotes:
“What the hell woman!” Liu screams through the phone “Pack your things, I’m coming to get you!"
“Oh bitch! Why would you do that?” Liu screams “Nathan still wants you, it’s obvious! Dude was asking every nurses, every kids, every janitor where you were” I gasp “Yeah! And you feel like you owe him. Nathan is going to use. Believe me! He wants you up in his sheets”
“Fortunately you have your IUD” Liu says “At least you won’t get pregnant when Nathan gets you”
Fuck! Shit! Holy cow! Lord! Damn! Why me? Maybe if I don’t move, he won’t see me. Oh the fuck I am kidding? I bet he smelt me from the airport.
“If you don’t want to grab your things, then you’ll be butt naked!”
“What about bon voyage, arrivederci, later, goodbye, peace out, hasta la vista baby, kick rocks?” Michael says behind the sassy motherfucker he can sometime be “Choose one”
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki babyy!! Haha, you asked for argument, passion and jealousy, you have it all my lady!
"Why would Kalli think Michael can't fight? He has six brothers! What does she think they did all day? Drink tea and talk about the weather?"
LMAOOOO, so true! She thought that because Michael is skinny he couldn't fight. He is high on the crack-pipe that's in her vagina, he is HAM, he will fight for his girl. LOL! I do agree that Kalliope is doing everything to create drama in her life. She should take a seat a think about her life lol!
Yeah! Go Liu! Liu for the win!
.... "Drink tea and talk about the weather?"
I AM STILL LAUGHING
Love ya girl!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hell yes he should kick pregnant Abigail out. She's pregnant, not dying. If she wants to stay during her last month or two that would be different but she's what, 3 months now? She doesn't need to be there yet. I can see why Kalli doesn't want to ask him to do it, that makes her into the bad guy. She shouldnt have to ask him he should have enough common sense not to do it in the first place.
Author's Response:
OH GIRL!
Ok, ok I get it. Abigail is the problem not the baby she is carying! Let's see if Michael has enough common sense to kick her out! That wuld be so nasty tho! Like "My woman is here so if you could leave my house" Oh God it reminds me of that scene in Diary of a Mad black Woman when the man drag his wife out LMAO! Horrible
Date: Jun 07, 2013 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 70
Why didn't Kalli stay with Liu? She could have had Nathan take her over there and I'm sure Liu wouldn't have a problem with her Bestfriend staying with her. Why create unnecessary drama for yourself?
Author's Response:
Go figure *shrug*
Date: Jun 07, 2013 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 72
Hey it superflysis I know your like why is she changing her account so much but anyway I belive Michael can change and that im glad that kalli is still with Michael and not pushing him away like she did before. I also think that him getting abby preggo was very harsh but who know what can happen with her so I guess I can just say that even though kalli is not paying attention to abby it is still some bad blood. Hhhuhhh Nat is just the third wheel I mean he need to find him a lady if only he can see that kalli is Michael "Lady" now. Lukas is so fucking sexy and Liu is my girl she is just so damn smart. Uhh you know your ass got me crushing miguel damn I just love that song How many drinks O god screw you Annie Im just playing gurl gon head with your bad self.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Love your new username, reminds me of a fanfiction I used to read :D
Well, keep the faith *MJ's voice* !! Michael needs it LOL, this is his last chance and he better both screw it up! I know the Suarez genes is amazing, Lukas is FOINE! I love me some Liu too.
Screw me? take this!!!
"Gurl gon head with your bad self"
Love it when you quote Lovely One for me ahha. You are forgiven! :-)
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 70
I hope Kalli doesn't do anything she will regret. I know she feels that she owes Nathan but there are other ways to show your appreciation. Just because things are chaotic with Michael right now doesn't mean you should run back to what was easy. She should know this working in the medical field. Work through your issues Kalli and stop running away when things get hard. Yes Michael is an ass but if she wants to be with him then the issues have to be delt with.
P.S I just found out about what happen with Paris Jackson. She needs a strong supportive system in life right now and people who care. Not all these people judging her and news outlets having doctors making clinical diagnosis about her and her family. None of us where there when it happen so no one can make the assumption that it was anything to do with her relatives. I'm praying for her and am hoping this brings her brothers closer to her. They need to be there for her.
When I say "they" I mean people making all these negative comments about her and her family.
Author's Response:
Kalli will always feel thankful. She will never be able to repay him the way he wants. He wants Kalli back and she already had Daddy Michael LOL!
Yeah, I saw it to... Poor Paris. Let's pray for her! :(
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
So let me get this straight.....Michael has both Kalli and Abigail staying at Neverland at the same time? That's some straight up bullshit. What is this, Sister Wives? I didn't realize that Michael was a practising member of the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Ladder Day Saints. There is no reason for Abigail to be there. If Michael is letting her stay it's to soothe his own guilt about the situation. The pregnancy is hardly the end of the world and nobody is to blame. If I were in Kalli's situation I would get over it. But there is no way I would be cool with Abigail staying there. No way in hell. And how awkward would that be for Abigail since that used to be her home? I don't see why she would ever agree to that arrangement either. Paparazzi be damned.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are both here...
"I didn't realize that Michael was a practising member of the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Ladder Day Saints"
LMAO! Kalli cannot get over Abi's pregnancy. She wiill probably stay in her room 24/7 not to see Abigail lol! I wouldn't be cool with Abi here but, hey, what can she do? Ask Michael to kick preggo Abi out? Not cool
"And how awkward would that be for Abigail since that used to be her home?"
Not cool LMAO! If the paparazzi find it out.. Don't wanna think about it! Thank you for the review and the rate love :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 72
"Just one chance, right?"
Maybe that's your problem, kalli! You keep giving chances when you should be running the FUCK away!
You gave nathan a second chance after he pulled the sexist COMMENT. You're actually gonna give this borderline-fatal-attraction guy ANOTHER chance?
YOu already gave him another chance! And he said he's try to change. This is the SAME SHIT!
(pulls hair out) why you damn ladies got to be so dickmatized you can't even see straight!
Author's Response:
Well....
Oh girl, take a breath or you're going to end up bald with the drama in this story. I am sorry but it is FAR from over. hehe ;-)
Thank you for the rate and the review girl :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 09:33 am Title: Chapter 71
(sigh)
Well, I knew part of that was going to happen.
Nathan clearly still had feelings for her, and we knew it the moment he went OUT OF HIS WAY to try and keep the photos from reaching the public. And I expected something to happen between them at his crib. I also expected kalli to gently reject him, which she did.
What I did NOT expect (not really) was Michael HYDE to burst through the door, finding Nathan in briefs and Kalli in his SHIRT, and then grab her by the arm commanding her to leave with him like this is some silver screen 40's romantic drama or something!
I get that he's angry, and hell, I'd be angry too if I saw the two of them like that, but I can't help but feel a vindictive satisfaction. Michael is originally "the other man," remember, you guys? Kalli betrayed Nathan for Michael! Michael was all, "tell your man he got to go, I'm the one making you feel hot every night!" Maybe that's why mike gets so jealous, cuz he knows he got this girl in a foul way, and he's scared another man's gonna do what HE did. Bet he never thought it would be with the man he helped screw over, huh?My reaction? "How does it feel, fucker? NOT SO HOT NOW IS IT??"
(breahte) but in all seriousness, male testosterone aside ("come at me bro?" really?), I think this scene perfectly describes what happens when you play the game dirty. It winds up biting you in the ass.
Stupidity for the surrogate and client to get involved. Dirtiness for the surrogate to cheat on a pretty decent guy. Asinine for the client to get so possesive to the point of near abuse. Fuckery that he'll go talk to his ex-wife who (surprise) is carrying his child. And now this.
Karma, baby. Hot and Fresh out the Karma Factory.
In other news, I'm addicted to this story. Just wanted to add that. :*
Author's Response:
Hey girl! Aw, poor dat! Nathan caught feelings very rapidly for Kali. He was introducing her to his mother and everything when it was obvious that she can't into this relationship. Nathan fell Kalli, Michael fell for Kalli and she played dirty.
"Michael HYDE"
Exactly. And it'sncrazy the way Nathan always keep his cool when Michael insult him. Michael needs to remember that he broke the home. That he is the one who pushed Kalli into cheating so he has no right to act like he was here first. Michael is scared because everytime he sees her with a man, he fears that she will cheat on him. The way you her is the way you lose her! I guess Michael just doesn't know how to react. He played dirty and he is afraid that Kalli will play dirty too.
" In other news, I'm addicted to this story. Just wanted to add that. :*" azghfoant *fangirling*
Thank you!!!! Love ya girl :D
