Date: Jun 13, 2013 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 77
Well Kalli all fair in love and war right?. Anywhooooo
My favorite lines is
“NOOOOO!” I scream putting my hands on my ears “I did not hear or see anything. I wasn’t here. I’m leaving now” I say looking around for my purse. and No, no, no, no” I protest “Just do your thing with that pregnancy and those future big brown eyed babies” I say finally finding my purse “Bye!” and the last two... “I need to tell you something” he says whispering in my ear “Don’t kick me” “Ouch! I asked you not to kick me” Michael grunts rolling off my body “You killed the Force” Gurl you popping these chapter out like Trinidad popping a molly. Gurl like I said you better work it work it real good gon with you bad self Annie.
Like I said WORK IT.Author's Response:
I WILL
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYY SHITY SHIT
YOU MY BAD GURL IS BBBAAAAADDDDD
I THINK I KNOW THE BABYDADDY WOOO LORD HE FINE TOO THO
BUT OMG ANNIE YOU PUT MY BRAIN TO SUICIDE.
OKAY NOW IS THIS WHERE LIU COME IN IM JUST WAITING FOR HER TO SAY "Daddy Mike back Kalli get ready girl and umm here is an icy hot patch for you crack pipe" lol.
BUT THE THIRST IS BACK AND 5 WORDS
SHIT's ABOUT TOO GO DOWN.......
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOOO! I bet Liu would take a plane jut to check Kalli lool
Date: Jun 13, 2013 09:06 am Title: Chapter 76
Ok for the record, I think Abigail is a very attractive woman, but I think Kalli brings that 'Edge'. There are a million women who look like and are even more beautiful than Abi is in Brazil. Kalli is gorgeous. She's unique, stunning, all of the above. Idk why she thinks she's not more beautiful than Abigail because she is. Abi is only really striking when she's all made up with makeup. Other than that, there isn't anything special about her. So stop putting yourself down Kalli! You look better. One of the reasons why Michael left her for you. Anyway, I had a feeling Michael wasn't that baby's father. Furthermore, she basically is dropping hints on who it is. That baby will be a Jackson, just not Michael's child. Abigail pulled an Alejandra! Her baby's dad is JACKIE! Now I love Mike, but his big brother is FINE! Jackie has always been fine as hell. Even now in his 60's. Michael will be a little sad but I think he will get over it. He has Kalli now and she's young and ripe. They'll have kids eventually.
Lastly, I wish she'd stop acting like she's scared of Michael. So she went to see Abigail. No big deal. He doesn't need to know her every damn move. I'm just wondering now does Michael know his ex wife been gettin it on with is fine ass big brother. Lol that's what I'm waiting to see. As soon as she said "Jac--.." And when she can't guarantee that he won't have the high cheekbones, etc. I started adding shit up. That is Sigmund's baby. Aka Jackie Jackson. Can we say drama???? Kalli better get that crack between her legs ready cuz Michael is gon blow his top and need her more than ever when he hears this one.
Author's Response:
"Abigail pulled an Alejandra" OFMG I thought the exact same thing when I wrote this lmao. This Alejandra, fucking with 2 brothers....
GIRL
"Now I love Mike, but his big brother is FINE" YASSSSSSSSSSSS, God those Jackson genes are killing me
*faints*
And yes we can say Dramaaaaaaa! All your question will be cleared up on the following chapters!
"Kalli better get that crack between her legs ready cuz Michael is gon blow his top and need her more than ever when he hears this one" WOMAN
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 08:53 am Title: Chapter 76
Holy crap did she just about blurt out that Jackie was the baby daddy? That is so wrong. Between Michael, her probable lesbian affair with Janet, and Jackie it seems like the whole family has had a ride. Abigail sees more Jackson action than Michael's ferris wheel! I wonder if Michael knew she is banging his brother or if he just found out in the hospital room? That would explain why he was so mad and I don't blame him!
Can you imagine the awkwardness that will ensue the first time Michael brings Kalli to a family gathering as his woman? Abigail will be there with Jackie and NOT Michael's baby, and Michael will likely beat up any of his brothers that even look in Kalli's direction as they will undoubtedly be sizing her up for themselves. Not to mention the fact that Janet is a bitch in this story and will probably say something rude to Kalli and then try setting up Abi and Michael again.
I wonder though, if Abi got knocked up so easily by Jackie maybe Michael is the infertile one? I would think with how badly he wants kids he would have already had his sperm tested but who knows.
Author's Response:
"Between Michael, her probable lesbian affair with Janet, and Jackie it seems like the whole family has had a ride" WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
AZDHGLRKAPJAO¨Z!!! Youy are too funny... I can't even type a response LMAOOOOOO, I'm deaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
Aww, I can bring so much drama in this story but Michael being sterile would be too sad. But you know when they got married Michael and Abi, he wanted children so bad and because of the pressure, maybe she couldn't get pregnant. Maybe she feels more at ease with Jackie and that's why he knocked up so easily.
Thank you for the review and the rate!!Love yaaa
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 08:39 am Title: Chapter 76
I KNOW I KNOW I KNOW I KNOW I KNOW I SWEAR TO GOD I KNOW!!!! I CAUGHT THE HINTS! I CAUGHT IT!!!!!!
DAMN ANNIE YOU CRAZY FOR THIS ONE!!!!!!!!
OH MAH GAAAAAH!
THIS SOME JERRY SPRINGER SHIT!
HOLY FUCK!
AHHHHH!
Author's Response:
I KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW, I'M SO EXCITED TOOOOOOOOOO; AFNAIOZMFJZGHQAZLN
dramaaaaa
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 08:29 am Title: Chapter 76
Is she serious??? Cheating Michael with his brother???? I am pretty sure who the baby daddy is!
Author's Response:
Well, they were divorced so calling it cheating is fat-fetched... Brother? hihi
Date: Jun 12, 2013 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Annie.........I'm feening for some Daddy Michael. He's been gone for a few days and I miss him. Please update again soon. Not to be demanding or anything lmao.
Author's Response:
You're talking about Kalli vagina crack pipe but I think we should talk about your addiction for Daddy Michael haha! I'll be back soon :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 75
Well at least we now know why Michael walked all angry now. Can't wait for the results to come back! Some in the future I'm hoping Michael will say those three words Kalli wants to hear from him. Hopefully he does it over a super romantic dinner too. I know Kali will like that. Of he should do this once everything is clear with Abigail.
Author's Response:
YES, Michael needs to tell Kalli he loves her. Even if she knows it, she needs to hear the words.
"Hopefully he does it over a super romantic dinner too" OOOH, nice idea ;))
Thank you for the review :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 75
I'm makingit 100 bucks, not 10, that the baby is NOT Michael's. And it's my last 100 bucks, so this better be good!
Author's Response:
Then, it's a BET! ;D
Date: Jun 10, 2013 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 75
Meh. Probably ain't even his baby. I still say its Willy's or Nathan's or some fine Brazilian man. Whatev. Where's Kalli's pretty baby Jade at? The only innocent being in this story.
Author's Response:
HEY YOUUUUUUUUUUUU :D Whare have you been? I started to belive you were mad at me or something... This story definitely needs more Kalliope and Jade moment! LMAO! She is too young to understand the fuckery around her!
" I still say its Willy's or Nathan's or some fine Brazilian man"
I swear y'all want Nathan to come back lool! I'm trying my best to make this story less dramatic but I guess y'all love the drama, so don't worry. The drama is near! ;-)
Thank you for the review ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 75
There's no way Michael was that pissed just because Abigail slept with another man. I don't buy it. They weren't technically together anymore at that point. Abigail obviously does not have a narcotic vagina to induce a rage-filled Daddy Michael reaction. I'm sure that when they did have sex he was visualizing Kalli's face on Abigail's body the whole time anyways. So I don't see that he would get mad about that. He may be disappointed about the baby but he was also acting disappointed when he found out she was pregnant. Something doesn't add up.
Maybe she slept with one of his brothers? Or with multiple brothers? Or Joseph? My Nathan theory is still viable too.
This visit between Kalli and Abi should be interesting to say the least.
Michael seems to be trying so hard to tell her "I love you" but can't get the words out. I was kind of pissed at him but that drawing was so sweet that he totally made up for it. He basically said it with the drawing. Hopefully he can get over whatever is holding him back soon.
Author's Response:
Hey! Michael isn't mad because she had sex with someone else. He doesn't even care. Michael is mad because he was getting used to the idea of having another child, planning his life etc... And now he realizes that the baby isn't his and that it won't happen *shrug*
" Abigail obviously does not have a narcotic vagina to induce a rage-filled Daddy Michael reaction." WHAT IN THE WORLD
"I'm sure that when they did have sex he was visualizing Kalli's face on Abigail's body the whole time anyways"
I love the theory that Abigail opened her legs to one of Michael's siblings lol. But Nathan? You want him back, I know it!!!!
And about Michael not being able to say he loves her...
Thank you for the funny review and the rate! Love
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 75
.....so that's why Michael is pissed?
Really? Abigail's been gone and doing her own fucking thing, at least she waited till they were divorced, and maybe when the baby was born, she saw that it didn't look like Mike, so she was upfront that a paternity test would be needed to make sure!
And Michael, the WHORE, is mad?? He feels betrayed and played?
Well, you know what they say..KARMA IS A MOTHERFUCKING BITCH!
In conclusion, Michael...
I now eagerly await this MJ maury episode!
Author's Response:
LMAO! Let's see if Abigail's baby is Michael's or not... On the next chapter :D
Date: Jun 10, 2013 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 75
DDDDAAAAMMMMMNNNNNNN that just brust my damn bubble.
You my child is one sick writter making people jump on the edge of they seat craving for more information let me tell you I will reread this whole damn story man just for you but mostly because this story blow my damn mind girl.
Author's Response:
Aww you're s sweet
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 06:04 am Title: Chapter 74
I feel terrible, but while those assholes were gossiping about Kalli, I kept thinking,
"They got it wrong. MICHAEL was the cheap whore!"
...Is that bad?
Anyway, I really do hope Abigail is alright. She, in fact, is the only person who hasn't totally pissed me off during this story. Nathan comes in second only because he made thatsexist comment. Remember that? You know, when Kalli dumped him that time, and should have STAYED dumping him? But instead cheated on him?
...Then again, the way Michael reacted, I bet you have a twist in store for us. Like, Maury came in as the form of a doctor and said, "Michael...you are NOT the father!"
Author's Response:
Hey girl! Well I am happy that you think Michael is the cheap whore since everybody shipped Kalli and Michael so hard that they forget about everything else he did in order to have her. Indeed, not a good look! Abigail is sweet. She couldn't plan that Michael would fall in love with Kalli. Abigail is better off without Michael in her life
"Then again, the way Michael reacted, I bet you have a twist in store for us. Like, Maury came in as the form of a doctor and said, "Michael...you are NOT the father!" dbaklfhqla. I KNOOOOOWWW! Michael be like
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 74
I really hope everything is going to be alright with Abigail. Michael seemed really pissed after seeing her so it was either bed news or she said something stupid to him. Hopefully when they get home they'll talk about everything and work things out. Kalli needs more time with Jade.
Favorite quote:
“Yes, this is the cheap whore talking to you” I say “You suffer from a very rare disease. It's called full-of-shit-itis” I add “You belong on a curb ready for the trash man to pick you up”
Author's Response:
Yes, communication is everything and Kalli and Michael needs to do it if they want it to work! And yes, more moment with Jade hihi.
Thank you for the review and the rate :D