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Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2013 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 61

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!



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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2013 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 88

Sigh. Kalli is feeling what us ladies call woman's intuition. She knows June ain't shit. She can sense that. Michael is too damn nice and naive, which is his downfall unfortunately. He is not good at reading people nor does he have the ability to read... I mean REEEAAADDD HONEY, as Nene would say. Lol but seriously. I'm scared for him. He surrounds himself with these people that he doesn't know and he trusts them way too easily, and it makes it very easy for them to fuck him over. I'm really glad Kalli is sticking around because she has some damn sense. Michael needs to listen to Kalli when she voices her concerns about June! And I'm pretty sure she made up some sob story or it was late, so Michael let her stay and he let her borrow some of his pjs to sleep in. Either way, Kalli needs to talk to Michael. For real. Cuz this is NOT going to end well. Big ass sigh. 



Author's Response:

June is bad news! Let's hope Kalliope will be able to avoid Michael getting hurt by those people.

" I mean REEEAAADDD HONEY, as Nene would say."

YYEEESS Mama! LOL

Kalli needs to talk to Michael before this witch June make something. GO KALLI!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2013 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 87

Damn first Michael gets shot in your other story Poetic Justice and now you're bringing the Chandlers into this one. Annie, are you trying to give me a heart attack? Smh. Kalli had better kick their asses.  



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Probably lol! Well, unfortunately the Chandlers appeared during this period and indeed, Kalli needs to protect Michael from their evilness! New chapter online :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2013 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 87

I'm glad he's gonna let Kalli be Kalli! Let her help you, stubborn man! And lol at them yet again getting caught. Smh they need to be more careful. Freaky asses. Lol. This was a fun chapter but lawd whyyyyy at the end!!! Why are the lying ass Chandlers being included in this? Lawd I can't. Kalli better keep her eye on those lying conniving ass people. I can't. 



Author's Response:

YYYASS, he gotta let Kalli take care of him and Jade! And indeed theyy need to keep it in their pants when they are not in their room! Well, they were here around this time... Let's see if Kalli can avoid a drama! New chapter online :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2013 01:07 am Title: Chapter 86

Omg yes!!!!! That's exactly what he needs! I was about to get mad because Michael was not making any sense! How the hell can you have people depend on you if you aren't well? If you aren't taking care of yourself and your body, you won't be able to help any damn body. Especially if you're not healthy or God forbid, if you're even around. Sad to say but Michael needs somebody who will kinda be that figure to look after him. Because the people he surrounds himself with dont give a damn about him, just what he can do for them. They don't care about his health, his well being, none of that. The man needs proper meals and proper rest. And at the route he's going, he won't survive touring without taking care of himself. And since my girl Kalli just so happens to be a doctor.. I mean it's perfect! She's so much more than beauty and a good roll in between the sheets, she's actually smart as well. And she won't screw your friends or brothers. And yes, that was shade. Lol. Above all else, Jade gets to bond with her more! It's a win for everybody. I think this tour will do Kalli some good. They'll really be able to bond as a family now and she'll get to do what she loves. Who knows, maybe even while they're on tour, I know Michael likes to visit hospitals and orphanages of children, maybe Kalli may even wanna volunteer at those places and help take care of sick children. I can see it now.. Kalli helping heal the world with her gifts by day, and healing Michael with her love and that piña colada at night. Lmao. This is good though. Yay Kalli is going on tour!! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :D! Yesss, Kalli is going on tour!! You're right, only someone like Kalli will be here to take care of his health and not of his money! He needs someone who truly loves him aound. And she will bound with Jade!

"And she won't screw your friends or brothers"

"Kalli helping heal the world with her gifts by day, and healing Michael with her love and that piña colada at night. Lmao" Awww that was so beautiful and I laugh so hard at the end LMAO

Next chapter already online :D Thank you for the review girl!

 

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 86

I know Kalli's family is going to have something to say about her going on tour with Michael. Atleast Jade will have one parent with her most of the time.



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I swear her twin Lukas won't be happy at all. It is something spending some time in LA but going on tour with her? I need to write a scene about it

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 86

So she's going to be a tour doctor! I didn't think of that possible solution. Is she going to treat all the dancers or just Daddy Michael? Injuries are common in dancers, so there probably needs to be some kind of medical care along on a tour of that scale. 

Speaking of large scale, I can just see her prescribing "medication" for The Force: "Have one blow job three times daily until cessation of tour, preferably with food. DO NOT mix with alcohol."

She's going to be a very busy woman.



Author's Response:

YASSS, Kalli will be with Michael, Jade and continue to work. Now she has to break the news to her family

"Have one blow job three times daily until cessation of tour, preferably with food. DO NOT mix with alcohol."

GOOOORL! You know with DM around Kalli ain't talking to another man! So cure other dancers? Male dancers? No way in hell lmao. Michael won't let it happen.

Thank you for the review! New chapter online :D

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 85

All I got to say is that they better spend every second with eachother cause it gonna be hard to let go when MJ go on tour. Will Jade be sticking with Kalli or what.

 



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Oh you know Michael won't go on tour without his baby Jade! And he will probably convince Kalli too ;)

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 85

Now it all be ones clear as why Michael wants Kalli to stay with him. She won't be able to see him or Jade for along time while he's on tour. It's going to be even harder once he leaves next month. They need all time they can spare to spend together as a family. 



Author's Response:

They shoudl spend every secodns together indeed... Unless she decided to go on tour with him ;)

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 84

Jade loves her mommy! So cute! I don't know what Kalli is going to do now. Her friends and family are in Seattle so I can understand why she doesn't want to leave them behind. Plus she knows everybody at her hopital so they're like her family too. For her to have to start all over at another hospital in LA as Michael Jackson's girlfriend/baby mama is not ideal for her. She going to have to make the choice someday of moving to LA and leaving everything she knew behind but it's not like she can't go back and visit often. 

Michael should let Jade stay with her in Seattle for a while so she knows what it's like to have to be with her constantly. He could send the nanny too so there's somebody watching her while she's at work and jade will have someone she recognizes around her. It all teach Kalli to compromise with her hours at work and Michael to trust her more around they're daughter. Also this will give Kalli's family a chance to get to know Jade. 

I think that by doing this Kalli will then be able to choose if she would want be with Michael in LA raising their child or keep going back and forth.



Author's Response:

Yes, more Kalli and Jade moment on the following chapters :D. Kalli needs to make a choice but whatever she choose she will be hurt. She has family on both sides. And indeed, it would be nice for Jade to know Kalli's family since Tae ( her niece so Jade's cousin) is around the same age. Let's see what she decides on the next chapter :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 10:16 am Title: Chapter 85

Wow.. Michael is going on tour in a month, and Kalli will be back in Seattle.. Where does that leave my sweet baby Jade? Sigh. I really hope something will happen where these two don't have to leave each other. I just don't know.. I'm sad now. But I have a feeling after this month together, Kalli might just realize what she has. She'll finally notice what her life has been missing. Maybe she will go with him on tour, maybe she will visit him frequently.. I just don't know. It's depressing. 



Author's Response:

Hey girl! Yes, this is so sad that when things begin to be great, Michael needs to leve with his tour... Leaving baby Jade with only one parent :(. I'm sorry you are depressed, I hope the new chapter will put a smile on my face :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2013 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 84

Kalli needs to stay in Los Angeles for Jade. Daddy Michael can survive without her he's just being a big baby about it. His Sahara ass would be flying out to visit her and her vagina no matter what. But Jade needs her to be around on a more consistent basis. If she wants to deserve  the title of Mommy she needs to start putting Jade first. She's heading in the right direction but she hasn't earned it yet.

It's just logistics! She could easily transfer to a hospital in Los Angeles. They need surgeons everywhere. She doesn't have to give up her career. She doesn't have to sit at home all day decorating the house and banging Jackson brothers like Slutbogail. Doesn't Michael have a condo in LA? I'm sure his condo is closer to the hospital and she could stay there during her shifts. DM and Jade could stay there with her on some days and when she's off work she could either stay at Neverland or spend time in Seattle with her friends and family. That way she could afford to keep her place in Seattle and she won't be completely dependent on DM. She will still have her freedom, her own income and her own place. There, I've figured it all out LOL!

I do agree with Kalli's line of thinking at times. It's never a good idea to be completely dependent on a man. My mother taught me this as a little girl and she was right! You know the saying that men are like dogs? It's true! You can teach them so much through both positive and negative reinforcement. Positive reinforcement is sex and food. Negative reinforcement is the fear that you will leave them if they fuck up. The more independence you have, the easier it is for you to leave and thus the less likely they are to fuck up in the first place.

 



Author's Response:

Hey girl! Indeed, if Kalli wants a real realationship with Jade she needs to stick around.

"His Sahara ass would be flying out to visit her and her vagina no matter what"

Yup, she could do that but Kalliope is sadder to leave her family and Liu behind than her job at the hospital. But she needs to stay independent and around Jade so it may be the only thing to do. Let's see what she decides to do :D. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2013 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 84

Okay last chapter THEY GOT IT IN LIKE A MOTHER FUCKER and Janet just popping up made me laugh so hard that my brother heard it with the head phones on. He had the nerve to even ask for head lol. The names was cute PYT and TLC and for kitty Pina colada. Michael had to be so drunk.

Jade called her mommy YAY I'm so happy but sad because she leaving again.

Michael is so cute him saying I love you is just out of this world to me.

Randy got burn hey got to give that one to Kalli.



Author's Response:

Yup, Kalli is not ready to kiss her life goodbye yet :S . Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2013 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 84

Awwwww!!!! I went from laughing at the beginning of this chapter to feeling sad as hell at the ending! They're like a little family now. Kalli can't just leave her man and her baby like that. Jade is getting attached to her. Maybe she can transfer to a hospital in LA. There are a TON of them there. She just can't leave.. Man I'm sad now. Something has to be done because she cannot just leave like that. There has to be a way where she can still be with Michael and her daughter, and work. She's dating Michael fuckin Jackson! When there is a will, there is a way. Michael has crazy connections. 

As far as the beginning of the chapter, it was so cute and funny of Michael to be singing that Olivia Newton John song. I find myself randomly singing that song sometimes too. Lol. And I know Janet went and told! Lmao at marlon! I'm glad she played back with them though and just joked about it. No big deal. Sex can't be taboo for that family with all them damn kids everybody got! Lol. But back to what I was saying before, Kalliope cannot leave!!!! She just can't. Jade is the cutest little girl ever! And she said she loves Kalli and called her mommy. Omg!!! Kalli girl I will snatch your ass bald if you leave Michael and Jade to go back to dry ass Seattle. 



Author's Response:

Hey you! Yes, the inevitable is happening. Kalli has to choose between her career and staying with Michael a little bit more.

"Sex can't be taboo for that family with all them damn kids everybody got!" GOOOORRRRRLLLL

I understand her, she studied for 8 years to be a surgeon and she loves it. Indeed she could ask Michael to make sure she is tranferred in Los Angeles but she will be away from Liu and her family. Must be hard for her! If I was her, I would think about it harder. Her family and Liu ain't going nowhere and Michael needs her... But who knows what could happen ^^. Next chapter tomorrow :D

"Kalli girl I will snatch your ass bald if you leave Michael and Jade to go back to dry ass Seattle. "

You scared her!!

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2013 09:18 am Title: Chapter 83

That was some sexy love making they just had. But how funny was it when Janet just walks in on Michael going down on Kalli, lmao! I don't think any sister wants to see her brother in that position, lol. And Michael asking Kalli to say hello to the Force, smh. Well atleast for now on Janet knows to knock whenever these two are in a room together with the door closed.



Author's Response:

I bet Janet will be laughign all loud all day long. The Thirst is back, ladies and gentlemen! Thank you for the review girl :D

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