Date: May 24, 2013 09:20 am Title: Road to Recovery pt.1/The Truth
Continue please
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2013 06:33 am Title: Prologue
i made this for you XD i hope you like it :-)
its not that good but i tried :-)
Much Love
Shiniee
Author's Response:
Omg I love it!! I am going to use for sure. Thank you so much.
Date: May 24, 2013 05:06 am Title: Road to Recovery pt.1/The Truth
Update!
Date: May 24, 2013 03:39 am Title: Road to Recovery pt.1/The Truth
Oh shewt!!!! She a dummy! Who would want to cheat on Michael Jackson?!
Date: May 24, 2013 12:01 am Title: Road to Recovery pt.1/The Truth
Just hell no. Lisa's a hoe! Smh.
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2013 11:49 pm Title: Road to Recovery pt.1/The Truth
Girl! lol. You are giving me LIFE with these updates! ;)
wow, Kasey and Brian have a lil son, Brian Jr.! too cute! Now, we gotta get Jasmine somebody, lol.
LMP...See, I knew that hoe was a snake! How you cancel a date, then call from a damn payphone! ? That's hoe shit. Now, Mike will see how it feels, and now Bee is in a tricky situation...to tell or not to tell? If she tells MJ, LMP may tell Mike she lieing cause she jealous and it ain't true, then again, Mike may claim it's a lie too. Also, Bee may not want to be the bearer of bad news...girl, too ratchet for that hoe!
Oh man, this meeting at the birthday party should be interesting! Lol. The drama is a coming....Bee going back to Shawn, girl I can see the drama.
P.S. aww...I know Erin is so damn cute! Tell her to leave the mouse alone! lol. Before she slobbers in it, and us, your loyal subjects, can't get anymore updates, lol. I'm loving the timely updates, btw girl. :)
Date: May 23, 2013 11:13 pm Title: Road to Recovery pt.1/The Truth
Ooooh, Lisa cheating. Lolz, can't wait for more.
Date: May 22, 2013 03:48 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 4
Continue please
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2013 12:10 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 4
Girl....oh no he didn't put his mangy ass hands on Michaela! Girl, Mike did what he should have done, and that's stomp a mudwhole in his ass!
Bianca has all the signs of Battered Woman Syndrome. Unfortunately, she's going to go back to Shawn and the violence will continue. Mike's being understanding, but he's going to get tired of this mess, and take custody of his daughter. I can't fault him for it. Why allow your child to be terrorized like that?
It seems Jaylen likes Lisa, which is a good thing. I need Brian and Eugene to rise up, and tag team Shawns ass! That was just sad. That poor child was traumatized.
I think Bee losing that baby, may have been a good thing, though I hate saying that. She would have been trapped with Shawn, had she carried to term.
Girl, keep these updates coming, cause you got me all up in my feelings , lol.
Date: May 22, 2013 11:49 am Title: Turning Points Pt. 4
Update!
Date: May 22, 2013 11:31 am Title: Turning Points Pt. 4
Damn! Poor Bee. I feel bad that she lost her baby. I was pissed when Shawn's crazy ass decided to put his hands on Michaela! Like ooh! Smh. I hope his ass stays in jail for a long ass time!
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2013 10:06 pm Title: Prologue
You should make LMP cheat on Michael so he can have a taste of his own medicine. He probably doesnt truly love LMP so I dont know how hurt he would actually be but she should do it in a public way. That way he can get a sense of some of the humiliation that Bianca must have felt when he did that to her. I think that would really bother him the most. And he should find out that Jermaine fathered Jaylen. Or maybe even Joseph lol.
I don't know how true to life you are trying to be but I'm not sure if you should have Mike marry LMP because there is no way that nigga should be getting remarried. He should be spending the rest of his life pining for Bianca after the shit he's done to her. And Bianca has suffered so much already I really can't bare to see her marry Shawn. I'm kind of hoping you'll stop it before it gets to that point. But I'm sure whatever you decide will be awesome, this story is great.
I hope that Michael can keep changing in a positive direction and Bianca will eventually forgive him and they can be together.
Date: May 21, 2013 08:42 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
@HumanNature: lol, thank you. I am so glad to see you're back inspired, I knew you could do it! You can see I bring the drama, lol. You were thinking what I was!? Girl...we could have a whole conversation and you'd be howling at some of the stuff that goes on in my head, lol. You teasing me, but I know this is gonne be GOOD! *rubs hands together*
I'm glad you love my reviews, and I am definitely your loyal fan, lol. I get all uptight when we get no update, lol, just cause I love your writing so much! ;) Keep it coming girl!
P.S. How's the baby? She's what, 3-4 months now?
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2013 08:40 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Oh HEEEEEEECK NAWWWWW!!!!!
Date: May 21, 2013 03:50 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Suggestions: I think maybe you could let Bianca and Shawns relationship and business play out. Also, I think you can bring the drama with LMP and Kelly with MJ. We know Kelly is crazy, so bring it on!! LMP, you could track her and Mikes relationship, and throw in the drama of her momma, ex-husband, etc. Also, LMP has a reputation as a hoe and cheater, so that would be interesting. overall, I say make them all suffer, as there's no perfect people here.
Regarding Jaylen, we talked about this before, but I think, he may get ill, and need some blood, and the drama ensues from there, especially if one of his uncle's is his real father. We know Kelly is crazy and would do anything to try and stay connected to Mike, so why not?
I think it's time Eugene found him someone and Casey and Brian perhaps can start a family or have some problems.
Mike crawls before he walks, and works his ass off, and Bianca finally sees it and can find forgiveness. Ms. Diva, I say she starts having problems because of the Domestic violence in her mom's home.
All suggestions, but I'm sure you'll do what's best. You have great ideas, so I see no shortage of ways to go. ;)
P.S. I know it's hard to reply to us, since this thing acts crazy, but maybe you could read our reviews and leave us a little feedback. It's fun to see what the author is thinking of his/her comments, lol.
Author's Response:
OMG, you are a flipping genius! And it's like you were reading my mind because some of the things you mentioned I was thinking about Doing it myself. What, I am not going to tell lol. I love your reviews and That you Are a royal Fan lol. Thanks again