Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 08:56 am Title: Birthday Party/The Truth Pt. 2

IN the case of Jaylen, Michael ...... you ARE NOT the father

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I knew that Kelly was a liar!! dammit *starts twerking* Michael bout to moonwalk all up and down people's asses. Hide your kids and hide your wife and your husbands and baby daddies too cuz Michael bout to be on a rampage.

Your girlfriend cheating and your son ain't yours and you found out basically all on the same day ??? chile I pray for Michael.

Sis I'll be needing a new chapter soon. The shade and debauchery has me all up in my ratchet feels.

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2013 10:44 am Title: Turning Points Pt. 2

My guess was right about the French man. It was a trap man! Bee should have listened! Man, I'm mad I can't even leave a long review lol. Ugh!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2013 09:53 am Title: Emotional Rollercoaster

I was so done at Katherine swearing lol. Momma K ain't as innocent as everyone thinks tsk tsk. I'm jk. But hmmm I wonder how Mike is going to react to Kelly if he goes down to the prison. And oh lawd at Bee comparing Shawn to Mike and now she's pregnant too?! This is crazy. I can't wait to see Shawn and Mike's reactions.

Reviewer: Amt07 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2013 04:06 am Title: Birthday Party/The Truth Pt. 2

Ohh Lord!!!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2013 12:41 am Title: Moving On

Oh goodness between Shawn talking about marriage and Mike having sex on the first date I don't even know where to start! lol lawd this is a mess!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 11:36 pm Title: Prologue

OK I totally missed the blood thing at the end and there is a good reason why. All you need for a blood transfusion is compatible ABO and RhD antigens on the erythrocytes. You can't tell paternity from this which is why I missed it. So even if Jaylens blood type makes sense with Kelly and Michaels given types, it doesnt mean Mike is the Daddy. And Mike can have a different blood type from his kids. In fact it is likely. Though I suppose if Kelly were type OO and Mike were AB or AA or something, there is no way Jaylen could be an OO and have Mike as a dad. But they wouldnt tell him this at the hospital it would actually violate health privacy laws. They would just tell him he isn't a compatible donor which says nothing about Jaylens paternity. OK I am a huge nerd. But I thought I would just point it out for the sake of accuracy. 

There is so much drama in this chapter it is a dramatic masterpiece! Can't wait for the next one. 

Author's Response:

Hahahaha I feel so stupid lol. I come from a family of doctors and I had no idea about that. Okay, for 

the sake of the story lets *like spongebob* use our imagination lol. And don't worry, I am a nerd too. My head is always inside of a book....apparentlybI need to read a medical book lol. 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 09:57 pm Title: Birthday Party/The Truth Pt. 2

Lord, the shade of it All! The drama is GLORIOUS! This chapter made me pull out my Chinese fan and whip it open to fan myself with!

I knew that hoe was ratchet. See, Bee wasn't going to say anything at first, till this hoe popped off at the mouth. Janet don't like her, I can tell. Mike is not wanting to believe this news, but it's true.

Yes Lord!...Now we getting ready to see all kinds of shit hit the fan now, since Mike and Jaylens blood don't match! Mike's going to rue the day he ever met that crazy hoe Kelly.

Michael knows he wants Bee back, but he is just trying to move on like his mother told him to, and since he doesn't think he has a chance again with Bianca...looking at her ass, while your current hoe is there, is a no go. Bee fronting too, and let her feelings slip, when she told ol' Lisa Marie that she better watch before Mike leaves her ass.

Sis, we beg you for another update! *Down on my knees with Holy Water at your feet*

OMG....I am glad Erin is alright! They can fall and bounce back up like a damn float! I always get freaked out when a kid hits their head, so it ain't just you. :)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 09:05 pm Title: Birthday Party/The Truth Pt. 2

Omg poor jaylen!!! But Lisa's POV " oh fuck" had me rollin