Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 06:21 am Title: The Fuckery

I knew that family was trifling as fuck, I knew that Jesse's story had more to it than they told, I knew that Michael was refusing to take some kinda pills, but JEFFEREY AS JESSE'S HUSBAND?

That means not only did Jeffery have Lola's best interest at heart when he asked her to come away with him and she fucking BLEW IT, but he also was purposefully targeted by Michael, which means Michael is still involved in Jesse's life (whether he knows or not) and that means he's gone Fatal Attraction on TWO GILS AT THE SAME TIME.

I need a drink.

Author's Response:

LOL I love Kingsley and Superman you can't be getting drunk mannn. Damn I swear reviewers like you always fingure shit out...i need to work on that like for real

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 12:28 am Title: The Fuckery

LAWDDD JESUUUSSSS

Author's Response:

Bless you child. Take a minute to concieve everything you have because the fuckery is all up in it

Reviewer: _musicSexPoetry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 11:14 pm Title: Prologue

Im usually a silent reader, but DAMN thats some shit.

Author's Response:

Well thank you for reviewing and becoming vocal about the story! And you already know i gotta keep the fuckery continuing throughout the story

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 10:19 pm Title: The Fuckery

Lawd hammercy GAWD!!!!! I am thru!! Lmao this is completely insane! How is Jeffrey her husband?! What in the hell is happening? First off I died on the part about her eating peppermints. Lmfaoooo omg. And I'm surprised Michael actually let her go for the night. And she actually went to see Jessie. I'm convinced, Michael's family are completely enablers. That shit is crazy for real. I am intrigued and hell yeah the fuckery is real!!!! 

Author's Response:

LOL! All of the fuckery will be explained in the next chapter

Reviewer: LavJacksonx Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 10:02 pm Title: The Fuckery

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

DA

FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWK ?

Laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawdy LAWD LAWD LAWD LORDT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW

I cant even concieve what I just read

 

 

YOU GOTTTTTA UPDAAAAAAAAAAATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON

 

Author's Response:

Lawd Lordt! You sound like Madea and update is coming shortly i'm going to try to get two chapters up today

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 09:57 pm Title: The Fuckery

Wooooowwwww! 0.0 I'm seriously blown away dude wtf is up with Michael & his family??? & u said the michael in my story takes the cake lmao shit this takes the cake omg him & his whole family is in on this????!???!!! 0.0 this is unbelievebile omg! This takes the whole bakery if ya ask me im glad Jess gave her this info & again omg 0.0 Jeff is Married to Jess is this forreal?? Wow this story flipping insane girl!!!! Lool I love & continue when u can.

Author's Response:

LMAO! Thank you so much

Reviewer: BanananCreamPie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 02:38 am Title: Tell Me Everything

This is all so scarey and crazy i feel bad for Lola and Jessie there lives are in danger with the Jackson's i never knew the whole family could not be trusted is very bad and no good very mean Michael how could he put poor jess and lola through torture like that and then his family sit around and alow this things to happen. Is not good how dare THEM

i don't understand any of them why is allowing to do so?

This is getting very very very very very scary i wanna hide cause i feel like im in lola's postion call the police please do retraining order on them something to stop him before things get really ugly. Continue.

Author's Response:

Sometimes when you're famous you don't learn how to love someone in a romatic way so you act on emotions rather than logic.