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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Glad they admitted their feelings. I hope Mariah doesn't wind up pregnant from getting raped. That would be just too sad. They need to catch that asshole who drugged her. Michael is going to go gangster when they do. 

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 20

They finally got their feelings out.

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 19

Love it, update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Will do!

 

Reviewer: SuperflySis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 19

AWWWWWW sne did not deserve that man that is just low.down and dirty I hope.she take the rape kit smh niggas these days

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 19

Noooooooooooo! Please don't let her have been raped. Poor Marian.



Author's Response:

I know, I was debating whether or not to make it this sad, but Michael's with her. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SuperflySis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 08:08 am Title: Chapter 18

Come.on man you are blowing me off hear please tell me.your going to.update again today plz



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm sorry I had to. But I will be updating really soon I promise, probably tonight.

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 04:48 am Title: Chapter 18

So basically the big guard dude was gne stand there n let ha get raped in one of them rooms, smh PATHETIC.

Author's Response:

Basically, thats why she had to bring him down, lol. thanks for reading

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2013 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay he dumped Kim!!!!!!!! Long overdue. Fighting in a club is so ratchet. I just hope they can find Mariah before she gets hurt. 

Reviewer: SuperflySis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2013 06:27 am Title: Chapter 17

I need the next chapter plz



Author's Response:

It's here! thanks for reading

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2013 03:29 am Title: Chapter 17

How typical, u slip some n ha drink while she n da restroom. Plz update soon.

Reviewer: Cali_Santana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2013 03:21 am Title: Chapter 17

He about to rape her...MICHAEL HELP HER!!!!!!!

Please dont rape her

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2013 01:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Michael! You'd better ditch the bitch and come and rescue her!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2013 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like this story! Michael is so deep in denial he may as well be in Egypt LOL. Can't wait for him to wake up, smell the coffee, and ditch the ho. 

Can't wait to see what happens next. Kim and Emanuel should be together I think they deserve each other lol.



Author's Response:

Lol, I never thought of that, you're right they're both snakes. thanks for reading

 

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2013 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

Somethings finna happen!

Author's Response:

you know it, somethings always happening, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2013 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 15

Keep updatin plz.!

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