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Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2013 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 24

Awwww that was too cute lol. I wish I had a guy best friend like that

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2013 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

:O THATS WHAT I AM GOING TO SCHOOL TO BE! A MARINE BIOLOGIST! And I talked to sea world for an internship to help care for their dolphins and other animals! :D Great chapter BTW..I hope this turns out to be an adventurest love story lol. :) 



Author's Response:

Oh, Thank you I really hope you enjoy it. I love seeing new readers come check out the story :)

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2013 08:34 am Title: Chapter 23

ooooh they gone do the nasty, lol No I am joking. I am so glad Mike took her in for her Safety its such a sweet gesture. He really loves her. I like this story.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah he does, more then he realizes. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

They had better kiss soon!

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 23

"I gotta change my number." Lol Mike is retarded!

Reviewer: SuperflySis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 23

Kisses and love making but we never know it could be movies and hugs lol



Author's Response:

Hey it could be, you never know. But it might not be lol thanks for reading

Reviewer: SparklyBubbles Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 01:44 am Title: Chapter 22

she should have called michael. he could be there protecting her

Reviewer: Bunnyears24 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2013 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

And also VickiJ He left Brazil because police were on his trail their, he had to get away.

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2013 08:50 am Title: Chapter 22

Your telling me Samual came all the way from Brazil so he can rape Mariah? That's pretty damn obsessive of him. She needs to report his stalking ass to the police and tell Michael. Sitting up in her room being scared and freaked out is not going to help her. Most likely he would want to hire a bodyguard for her protection. 



Author's Response:

Well she's really the first case where special detectives have been after him, he's pretty mad and wants to do more then rape her. He wants to shut her up. thanks for reading

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2013 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 22

If it was me it would of been no more of being scared, we woulda had to duke it out. Haha... dat negro just like f@#kin wit her lol.

Reviewer: SparklyBubbles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2013 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 21

YAY! hopefully things will be a bit happier now? :)

Reviewer: MsBillieJean Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2013 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

One of my fav stories on here. :) I'm new here btw so this is my first review haha.



Author's Response:

*Pumps fist* First review, yes! I'm glad you like it, thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Bunnyears24 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm sorry SuperFlysis, I accidently dleted your review trying to revise my commnet. Thanks for the reviews everyone.

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 04:27 am Title: Chapter 21

Lol, they found nothin that hinted a condom, but wat if he didn't use 1, hmmmmm!

Author's Response:

They didn't find any DNA either, like sperm. 

Reviewer: Cali_Santana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2013 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 20

Finally!!! *leans back in chair with feet crossed on desk and hands behind my head with a smile on my face* they finally confessed their love



Author's Response:

I know, It took them a while. But it's out there now, believe me this just the beginning of their feelings. thanks for reading :)

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