Holy fuck balls! This chapter was far from boring! Michael mentally lost his mind for a moment there in the hospital. He actually was trying to cut the spots off his body, holy crap! I'd have to say Michael was beyond shock and logic at this point. But for him to blame Nita for all his pain and suffering is just foolish. All she's trying to do is help and be there for him. She's trying to be that one person he can trust and he just keeps pushing her away.

When I saw the photo for this chapter I thought I was going to be reading some steamy make up sex between Michael and Nita. I should have known it wouldn't be that simple between these two, smh. Nita is trying so hard to help Michael but he doesn't want to be helped. Instead he's being a complete jackass and taking all his anger out on her. What the fuck Mike! Stop being an asshole! It ain't Nita's fault this is happening to him and he needs to stop making her suffer. 

If its one thing I can't forgive a man for doing its rape. He raped Nita and its unforgivable. His intention was to hurt her and make her feel his pain because he was mad at her for doing what he wanted which was to be left alone. At this point all respect has been lost for Michael. How could he do this to the woman that he loves? What was the point? I know it didn't make him feel better and it sure as hell didn't solve his problems. At this point I feel Nita needs to make decision if being with Michael is right thing to do right now. Yes she's bound to by her medical duties to take care of him but no way does she have to be physically abused by someone she trusted. 

Speaking of trust this seems to a huge issue between these two. It's seems as if they gain it only to lose it when things get to hard between them. That is not the way to build a strong relationship. A break between the two is strongly needed at point but not before Nita kicks Michael's ass for hurting her and giving him a piece of her mind. He fucked up and this time it may take longer than three months before things are right between these two again.

Once again the raw emotion that you have written to describe what Michael Jackson must have felt at that time in his life is done beautifully. His pain was diffidently felt by me and I was truely moved by it. Looking forward to the next chapter. Sorry for all the cursing but I had to express what was on my mind. 

And I liked the flashback part with Joseph and everything! I guess we need to know more about this Yatza girl!

OMG Michael!!!I feel so sorry for him!

I feel sorry for Nita as well but I could really feel Michael here! He's so sad! How much one person could really take!? But I hope he will realize what he done to the person he love most and trust most and make it up to her!!

Alright michael is really getting on my nerves right now.HE GOT NO RIGHT TO TREAT HER THAT WAY!!!! Nita needs to slap right across his face thats what she should do. And that intro about Michael's best friend was nice. We need to know more about this Yatzabamizi LOL never heard of a name like that before!!But I know you are upto something ;)

thus story is amazing, wow Michael just fucked her and left her there to cry, poor Nita, I feel sorry for both of them

Ohhhh Yeeaaahhh I Forgot To Go In On Frank. I Understand You Wanna Keep Michael Stress Free Bhudd You Dont Supposed To Not Let Calls From His Sisters Thru. T'f You Mean, When Is This Man Gone Get Fired. Like FrFr

Nita is fucking weak. I can't and will not. She needs to grow a damn backbone. Michael is talking to her any kind of way, taking his problems out on her, and now he's basically raping her? She's weak. Period. Ain't no way in hell it could be me. He has treated her like complete shit the last few chapters. I'm losing respect for her. I know she loves him but you need to have love for SELF first! Michael is going thru his woe is me, fuck the world phase because he's not happy with himself right now. I understand that having these diseases can be extremely hard on the psyche and add to it his level of fame, and the tabloids, but the one person who's been in his corner this entire time and never has truly turned her back on him the way others have and he is treating her like SHIT! And she's allowing it. Nita is a damn fool. Period. She has no voice or backbone. Instead of telling Michael's ass off and leaving him alone for awhile, she's gonna chase behind him, pet him, and cry like a fuckin coward. No ma'am. That's part of the problem. Michael is a fucking spoiled brat and thinks the world is supposed to be served to him on a damn platter. She can't even sleep in a separate room. Lmao smh! He's treating and berating her like she's his damn child. And like the cowardly simp she is, she's allowing this behavior by not standing up for herself. I just can't. She might as well stay her ass on the floor crying because that's all she knows how to do. Michael is on my shit list big time right now. 

Author's Response:

HEY KAT!!! Girl I MISSED YOU!! And Your HONEST reviews!! How are you? And here I go, reading your one hundred percent honest opinion, enjoying every bit of it! I know she is weak, you know she's weak and she knows she's weak and stupid lol! But I agree with you she really needs to grow a backbone and stand up against this man! omg so you have been reading? WOW I thought you lost interest or something and just havent been reading! YAY You are still reading!! I know and I really appreciate the way you see Michael and the whole thing, but then as well you know Michael! ;) YOU ARE RIGHT! EXACTLY! She's been allowing him and that's the problem! She's been trying get him to forgive her but now he had done something she's not going to forget! Isn't that Michael?! Fool? LOL she been a fool... yeah love does that to people :P Yeah apparantly the woman got a THING for him and unfortunately the thing is LOVE, a strong stupid emotion that drives people insane, especially the girls and make them do everything for their man! I think this is where woman grow weak... even the strong ones, you know... to save their relationship... woman let the man control them! I see your point Kat! Haha Spoiled brat!! LMAO! LOVE THAT ONE! Girl you got some wisdom I have never seen in a girl before! Seriously, every girl need a friend like you by their side to knock some sense into their minds whenever they need one lol! As always, Kat, your review not just made my day, but also made me laugh lol! Thanks a lot chicka! :P I'm really glad you are back! And your smart mouth lol :P Thanks a lot again!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx