Date: Sep 26, 2016 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1:I don't know why I like him; I just do
I'm so excited to begin this story! It looks wonderful and interesting and the fact that the face claim is Taylor Swift makes me so happy haha
Date: Aug 23, 2016 07:51 am Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Man I'm enjoying this twist! I hope you will be able to continue your story sometime soon!
Date: Sep 27, 2015 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Hey girl, long time no hear. How is the good ole college life? Is it harder than high school, better than high school or about the same? What college/university are you enrolled in?
Just wanted to let you know, asking how you're doing was not the only reason why I came here :)
Date: Mar 15, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Something I should have said in the beginning. But it is reall nice to read a squeaky-clean story such as this one on this website. I have seen millions of stories on here that are R rated for explicit sexual content and strong language. I'm mean really? That's the only thing these writers can do is format a hardcore sex story to get the most readers and reviews? Frickin pathethic.
Anyway, how'd you come up with this story btw? It almost reminds me of the move The Secret Life of the Bees. Only for this story, in stead of bees...we have flowers :)
Please continue and update asap when you have the chance. I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I agree with you about all the explicit stories. It's so sad. I actually was inspired to write this story from reading Secret Life of Bees. It's really one of my favorite books as I thought it would inspire a great MJ Fanfic. In the first version of this story that I wrote (Eons ago!0, there were bees involved. Farrah's family were beekeepers and Michael was their apprentice. I changed it to followers because I thought it would make the story more orginal
Date: Feb 08, 2015 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Farrah: It felt so good to be Michael's girlfriend. I can honestly say that I have never been truly happy than I am now. Tonight I'm going to visit my Michael back at the cottage. I knock and wait for him to open the door, which doesn't take very long. He smiles when he sees me. I smile too. I step inside and turn around just as he closes the door. Walking up to him...I throw my arms around his neck as he throws his around my waist. We stand there kissing like there's no tomorrow. Something inside me becomes bold as I was suddenly unbuttoning Michael's shirt. I stopped and waited for him to react; he didn't. So I resumed. I don't know why I was acting this way. Maybe it was because when I saw him shirtless down by the lake...his upper body and his slight muscles enticed me. Together, we manage to take off his shirt as I toss it on the bed. My hands roam gracefully all over his chest, which makes me shiver with excitement. I heard him hiss. "Michael, I'm sorry if I'm being too forward."
Michael: He looks at me with those pretty brown eyes of his. "Don't be Farrah," he says cupping my cheek, "you're my girl now remember? Besides I like what you're doing. Your hands feel nice and warm."
How was that MichaelManiac? Was it sexy in a sensual way or what? LOL
Author's Response: Lol! You're right!
Date: Jan 30, 2015 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Don't worry girl, I am not here to pester you on updating. I just wanted to get another thing off my chest. Now as I begin to explain...you might think it strange afterwards lol. But I consider it really sexy when a woman unbuttons/or tears open a man's shirt and begins to rub his chest. Actually it is way better than sex itself. That's why I was sort of hinting at you to throw in a "chest part" for this story :D Having a woman rub the chest of a man is another way to be romantic working bypassing the sex part.
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion! I've never written a sex scene before. It's too embarrassing. If my characters have sex it's always implied but never described. This could go a long way. Thanks!!
Date: Jan 25, 2015 10:34 am Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
YAAAAAY!!!!! They are official now, so happy for both of them :)
The part where Charles (aka Mr. Dipsh*t) referred to women as madis and copulatory objects irked me. There's no doubt that comes to mind that if Farrah were to stand her ground a little more agressive, then he would hit her. I know for a fact that once they marry, Charles will not have conjugal loyalty...heck he doesn't even have loyalty right now.
Thank you so much for updating girl. When I saw the 8th chapter, I thought Omg she updated FINALLY! And thanks again for adding the kissing part. I can't wait to see how their relationship will flow now that they are boyfriend and girlfriend.
Lovely chapter, I want more!!!!
Author's Response: Lol!!! That gif is killing me!!! Yes, Charles has major potential to be really abusive and the loyalty part... well, we'll see. I thought to myself: "Today, I will update." And I did!!! Lol, you're welcome. The chest part will come very soon. There will be more! Thanks for being a faithful reader!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2015 05:50 am Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Great!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
I missed this story thanks for updating it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1:I don't know why I like him; I just do
Heeeyy, honey! Glad to see this story back on the market! Also, I have some choice words on my beloved Me Against The World. Go take a looksies. Ha. Btw, my email is sheppardlachantay@yahoo.com. Email me, so we can get to work on WPCTS!
That is all. Lols.
Author's Response: Hey! Lol! I may have to rewrite that one too. I'm kind of embarrassed about it. Thanks for letting me know! I can't wait to get back to WPCTS!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 6: Random acts of kindness
Hey, girlie. I figured I'd do you the favor you've been doing me all these years and review. Charles reminds me a bit of my DOnny. He just gets in the way. Aha. Anyways, what ever happend to You and Me Agaisnt The World?
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!! Yeah, Charles whole existence is to be hated and get in the way. Well, You and Me Against The World is still around MJfiction. I just haven't updated in forever. I doubt anybody would be interested in reading it now anyway, besides you. Thanks for taking the time to read my work!! It's greatly appreciated!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 7: Let me be the one
HEY CHARLES THIS GIF IS FOR YOU!!!!
I'm so happy that they finally kissed .-) For a minute you actually had me there. I seriously thought what Charles was doing to poor Farrah was in fact real. Got a funny feeling this may take place later on in the story. Lovely chapter, thank you for updating. But you do realize that I will continue to bug you right? LOL
Author's Response: OMG your gifs are killing me!! Yep, I intended to make it seem real just so you all can stay on the edge. And yes, they finally kissed!!!! I want you to continue bugging me so I can continue to write. Thanks for being a faithful reader!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 7: Let me be the one
Aww that was cute I loved it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2014 07:13 am Title: Chapter 6: Random acts of kindness
MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: More is to come!
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2014 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 6: Random acts of kindness
"You let him do whatever he wants to you" Hmm, so if Charles wants to rape, beat, torture Farrah--then she has to give in willingly? Yeah that makes sense. Her mother is frickin dumb. And that KKK White Supremacist Charles is a prick.
Anyway, aww that was so sweet! Bet we know who the "person" was *wink*
Lovely chapter (well the part with the journel) Thanks for updating girl, please update another chappy asap. Just don't take too long in doing so. Btw, when they share a kiss...who will be the one to make the move first? Or do I have to wait and see? 8)
Author's Response: Haha! Your review had me laughing! I actually laugh at some of the things I make her mother say. She wishes she could be as smart as Farrah. Actually this update was rather refreshing. Now I feel as if I can move on to more important thing like the kiss that's soon to come. If I tell you who will make the first move then I'll spoil it!! An update should be coming sooner than you think! Thanks for being a loyal reader and reviewer!!