[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 05:48 am Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
This is story is very good!I think your writing is great!
Please keep going!
Thank you!
Author's Response: No, thank you!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 12:06 am Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
I almost intstantly fell in love withthis story the moment I saw the banner, and when I laid eyes on the story itself, I was a shoe-in. One thing I hope you do fufill is making your chapter a little lonher, just to be more satistfying, otherwise, you're on the right path! Keep. It. Up!
Author's Response: The banner is beautiful, it's made by leahluv21 so if you need a banner she's the lady. I will try to make the chapters longer. Thanks for the encouragement and thank for the review!
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2012 06:05 am Title: Chapter 2: Call me Farrah
I really love it n can't wait for more! It's great how he'll bring about a change here n there will be loads of obstacles along the way! Loads to tell! Promising story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: May 30, 2012 01:11 am Title: Chapter 2: Call me Farrah
Nope not at all too soon dear
Just keep writing you're doing great!
I thought it was rlly adorable how they first met and the mystery behind Michael has me intrigued
I can tell their gonna form a strong emotional bond soon and theres definitly chemistry there!
hoping you'll update soon!
Thnx, Ash ;^)
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm suprised Michael seemes to be a mystery. Yes they will have chemistry! Thank you!
Date: May 29, 2012 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1:I don't know why I like him; I just do
Hello there!
I rlly like the concept of this story. I just know it's gonna be great already!
I'm lookin forward to reading more soon
Thnx, Ash ;^)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1:I don't know why I like him; I just do
Hi. Haha, I thought I'd repay you for al the wonderful reviews.(Though a simple review can't express how thankful I am) Awww, Farrah OBVIOUSLY enjoys Michael's mesmerizing looks, so society can BACK off! Aha, Continue.
Author's Response: Aww! You deserve all of them! Who wouldn't enjoy Michael's looks??? Your are not human if you don't! Thanks for the review. I will continue!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1:I don't know why I like him; I just do
WHY STOP NOW?!?
Author's Response: I'll try to get more posted! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1:I don't know why I like him; I just do
This is such a good story. Please continue writing it. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I will do that!