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Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 32

Awesome... :) I like it, especially these parts:

"I look forward to our next dance, Alexis," he smiles devilishly.

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"We got it," Richard chuckles. His smile was gone when he heard the sound of slow clapping. He turns seeing Michael with a whole body. "Outstanding. You slayers have simply outdone yourselves this time. I mean, it's not everyday that I get sliced in half. That's a first for me," he laughs. He was starting to like this new game.

When will Richard and the others learn that messing with a pureblood vampire like Michael is never a good idea at all...?

Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally brilliant writing! :)

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very awesome, as well as very neat, too. I like it. :)

That is how I imagine Michael to look in this story (since he has the Dangerous era look). :)

Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 04:08 am Title: Chapter 30

YEAH I NEED MORE OF THIS AWESOMENESS!!!

Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 08:19 am Title: Chapter 1

AAAAAAAH PLEASE UPDATE I WANT MORE

Reviewer: MJJLUVU Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2014 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 29

I don't think i wanna know how pissed he is now.

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2014 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 27

Neat so far. :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very inspiring, too. And I can't wait to read the next chapter, too. :)

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2014 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 24

Very awesome chapter! :) I like it - especially the part where Michael mentions being shot, hanged and burned to a crisp. It reminds me of the quote by Max, the title character from Vampire in Brooklyn:

“Interesting. I’ve been stabbed, and I’ve been hanged, and I’ve been burned. Even broken on the rack once, but I’ve never been shot before. Kind of itches a little.” 

Pretty awesome, of course. :)

 

Reviewer: jruby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2014 05:40 am Title: Chapter 27

dont make me make a mj holigram for personal use you sex maniac.

i will do it. Respect MJ Legacy!!

Reviewer: Cherry101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2013 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 26

Loved it

Reviewer: Made15 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2013 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 25

I love this story. Please please please write more chapters 

Reviewer: MJJLUVU Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2013 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 25

No doubt he's out there. Now maybe she'll get to know him better without having to try to kill him all the time.

Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2013 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 24

Aaah thats it? NO I want more

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2013 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 23

Awesome so far. :) I like it. Very neat, as well as very well-written, too. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2013 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh my god you're updated! :DD but it's so short LMAO

Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry about that. I might add more to it when it comes to me.

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2013 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 21

I swear I love Michael in this story!!!! keep it up!!!

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