Date: May 21, 2013 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 46: Beautiful Girl
Great update. Thank you so much....Whe did you decide to change the plot?
Author's Response: Well when I considered the story as a whole, the progress of the story sounded unnatural. Wendy and Michael got to meet each other only four times in person and how can things get serious just like that? No one would pick a fight with someone just because they keep quiet for a while in a ten minute car ride. And I inserted that scene between them just because I couldn't think of a way to make the conversation progress. It is not right for the characters. So yeah. That's why. Sorry about it. Much L.O.V.E
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2013 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 45: Wings Of My Love
I'm curious to see where you are going with the rewrite! Are they still going to have the fight?
Author's Response: I'm not really sure. Sorry. But at some point, yes, definitely.
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2013 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 52
Wow what a kiss!
I hope Wendy can open up more to Michael from now on. Although she is completely right to remain guarded if he's still banging Krystal's mean ass. He needs to permanently remove that ho from his speed dial. Simply admitting that he sees Krystal as no more than a fuckbuddy isn't enough. I'm not saying that Michael should join a monastery and forever pine for Wendy, but if he wants her to trust him and give him a fair shot he needs to keep his dick in check.
Author's Response: Permanently remove that ho from his speed dial....! Mwahahahahahaha.... You are so funny! Really, reading your review got me laughing so hard! And I was in the middle of a lecture in med school! Imagine that??? I know this whole issue with Krystal in it messes up what's between Wendy and Michael pretty bad. But no love story is perfect right? I promise I'll do something about it. Thank you so much reviewing! Your opinions really matter so much to me! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2013 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 52
That kiss was HOT! XD
Finally!!!
Soo... I guess Michael's feelings are clear by now. There is no doubt he wants Wendy <3
But Wendy...? I understand her point of view... though I really wish she will let Michael show her that things could work between them :(
I like how realistic all this sounds... in any other fanfiction, the female character (included me HAHAHHA) would have jumped all over his sexy self... but she was rational and realistic, I like this. Good job sweetheart <3
“You can choose for us to be this…” he said placing a kiss on her forehead, “or this…” he placed a kiss on the tip of her nose, “or this…” he kissed her on the cheek, “or this…” he kissed her on the lips once again."
Sweet *-*
Wendy is soooo confused right now.... I wonder if she'll tell something about what happened with Michael to some of his friends... though I doubt any of them would understand the whole situation.
And what about Krystal? What if she finds out? I'm sure she will be mad at Wendy O_O
Can't wait to see what you got for us under your sleeve honey <3 Kisses!!
Author's Response: MAGGIE!!!! Oh my cute little honey bun, I'm so thrilled to read your review!!!!! I had the time of my life writing that kiss! Mwahahahahaha..... I'm so happy it came out so fine. I don't know if I was wrong to have Michael express his feelings first. Wendy being the crazy teenager, she should have gone there first. Oh well... I don't know. At least you guys seem to like this update. Michael would make her see all that she's got see in due time. Don't you worry about that one bit! (If you know what I mean) mwahahahahaha...... I want so badly to make this story sound as realistic as I can... I want to create something that can happen to anyone if given the chance. Wendy so needs a third person opinion about this. I know. I just can't seem to choose a character for such a conversation. Everyone here is flawed in their own way. As for Krystal... I don't know what I can do with her character. Not with regards to Wendy and Michael's relationship anyway. I would update this story as soon as I can! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: May 14, 2013 11:44 am Title: Chapter 52
I love the way this story is unfolding. Wendy is slowly discovering what's going on with her, with her feelings. Michael was so loving, sweet and sensual....(I would get crazy in that car with him)....No wonder that she is confused...she's so young and she's never experienced all these feelings. But I really hope that one day she understands fully that the feeling inside her is LOVE....And I hope Michael will be patient enough to wait for her realisation. Very beautiful. Real LOVE can wait....If Michael really loves her...he'll wait. The only thing I dont like here and don't accept is Krystal. If Michael means what he said, he should let her go....break with her as this can be really confusing for Wendy...How can that be?...To love one woman and f!!!ck another...Weird....Too complicated....Let Michael change that...he's not a child anymore so make him behave like a responsible adult.....Otherwise If I was Wendy and he would still meet and f!!!ck Krystal, I would simply kick his shapely a!s. That's all. And one more thing...let Wendy grow up. She's not a 12 year old girl anymore, but a young woman.
Author's Response: I know... Wendy as a character is too immature, especially fr an eighteen year old... I'll work on it. The thing is she has never been put to a position like that before. As you might remember this is first thing she has had close to a romantic encounter. Cut the girl some slack. Lol! As for Krystal and Michael, you think life is always that simple? And I just can't imagine Michael ditching a girl just like that. He was never one for confrontations. Or may be not so much so with women if you can give Lisa's public statements any credit. I hope I manage to come up with something equally entertaining for the next chapter. Thank you for the review darling. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2013 09:06 am Title: Chapter 51
Okay, so... *-*
Thank you, thank you so much for the last part of this chapter!!! XD It was very much needed!!!! It made me melt <3
Michael, you charmer... now I bet Wendy, considering her good heart, will accept his apologize... right? RIGHT? ;__; haha anyways, I can't wait to see what will happen.
I loved the way he threatened her that he would follow her without the mask and anything XD
"And when he patted her head almost habitually when he saw her off, the spell of attraction Renee tried so hard create between them got broken. He felt responsible for her, Wendy knew, may be even possessive, and protective. It probably came instinctively considering they were raised together more or less like siblings. And she knew whatever it was that he felt stopped right at that. There was not a trace of what Renee dared to hope for them."
You know I don't want Austin and Wendy to be together u-u but Wendy is SOOO wrong here. I mean, what kind of signals does she expect froma guy to know if he's interested in her that way or not? Does she want him to gaze into her eyes and caress her cheek? I mean, he has to be discreet or otherwise it would be... awkward!!! WENDY STOP IT WITH THE NEGATIVE THINKING D:
Love you so much hun! <3 muahh!
Author's Response: Oh Maggie, you are always so kind to me. Thank you so much for the review. You know how much I appreciate every single word that you write. Yeah, I knew you guys must be waiting for a moment like this. That's why I ended this chapter on that note. I shouldn't tease my readers and my most beloved reviwers too much. As for Austin and Wendy... Only time will tell... She can't help thinking negatively because she has such low self esteem. She doesn't understand what anyone would see in her to like her that way. You know what I mean right? Yeah, the bit about the mask was something I added last minute. I love writing such innocent playful moments between Michael and Wendy. I promise you more hot stuff for the next chapter! Now hold your breath lassie! Hopefully it won't take too long! Much L.O.V.E from my heart to yours! Mwaaaaaaaah......
Date: May 09, 2013 04:11 am Title: Chapter 51
Oh I love this kiss. How long I've been waiting for this reaction of his. I like Michael being bold. Thank you for the wonderful update. I've read it as it was one short breath (LOL I almost forgot about breathing) and now will be missing Michael again. I love this story and cant wait to read more and more and more....
Maybe this kiss will finally break the ice...and will do them good. They both need one another desperately.
Author's Response: Awww....... Ania......... you liked this chapter that much??? Hee hee hee, I'm so glad!!! Yeah, I really want to heat things up between Michael and Wendy but I just can't seem to get it right as often as I should, mostly because both of them are such held back characters. And Michael being bold, well... I know he was a shy case, and I wonder if I'm doing injustice to his personality by portraying him this way but I believe that given the other part of the relationship acts immature, he would have been one to take charge. I don't know. Well, you guys like the story and that's what matters I guess. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2013 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 51
I'm glad that Michael apologized. And he's totally right about Wendy bottling her emotions. They need to learn to communicate better and that won't happen if she keeps ignoring how she feels. She reminds me of myself at her age. A bit naive and too insecure to say what she really feels. I think a lot of young women are like her in that respect. You've done an excellent job at painting such a complex and realistic character. I've read far too many fan fics where the main character is an 18 or 19 year old girl who acts with the sophistication and confidence of a worldly 30 year old which is just not believable. Kudos to you as an author for not shying away from the fact that the age difference between Wendy and Michael is an obstacle. It is by no means insurmountable but it is not trivial either.
Now he just needs to ditch the bitch (Krystal).
Author's Response: Tee hee hee hee, thank you sweetie, thank you so much for the review. Yeah I know, I was tired of reading so many stories that had heroines with the perfect personality. So I made it a point to make an imperfect character. And not the kind who thinks they aren't pretty enough to get noticed by a guy. Someone who is just as flawed as each one of us are. And yeah I want you guys to notice that the age difference is a problem. It's just that we are so used to seeing Michael as a timeless creature. I'm so glad you like this story so much. I'll try my best not to disappoint you guys with the next chapters I come up with. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: May 08, 2013 03:00 am Title: Chapter 1: She Got It
Thank you for the update. I can understand Michael's and Wendy's feelings. ....however this argument IMO has been lasting for too long. Why did Michael yell at her? Wendy was so caring and warmhearted, she cared for Crystal, and she wanted to have good relationship with her as well, and to make matters worse and add fuel to the flames Michael had to yell at her. I don't get it? Why does he bahave like this if he cares? Doesn't he understand that a woman/girl needs warmth and tenderness....This is the first step to win her heart and trust. Wendy will never trust Michael fully, if his girlfriend is Crystal....Michael must break and finish his relationship with this slut....This is the first step....Let him open his eyes and see everything in true colours....Please update soon cause waiting long is really stressful and distracting when you get in the mood...you know....
Love
Ania
Author's Response: Yeah I know, this argument takes up a lot of effort to be written too. I don't really want to drag it too long either. The thing is when you care for someone a bit too much, and then when you feel you can't really control what happens to them, you get upset. Wendy needs a lot of love, true, but she's just so cursed with bad luck that nothing really works her way too long. Don't get disappointed though. I promise you the next chapters would be worth reading! Thank you for the review darling. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2013 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 50
Wow....is all I can say utterly speechless...lol come on hun I need more lol...loved the update ...but I am in shock I don't know what to say :-)
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, you sound so excited!!!! Thank you so much for the review. I'm really really glad you liked this update. Chapter 51 is up. Hope you like that one too! Much L.O.V.E.
Date: May 07, 2013 08:18 am Title: Chapter 50
This chapter was so intense! *_* I loved it!!!
I didn't expect Michael to yell at her, though I understand he was worried for Wendy's safety. He was right, she shouldn't have gone to that karaoke club with Krystal... and if he says that, it means he knows what she is able to do...
On the other side it's true that this wasn't Wendy's fault, she TRUSTED Krystal and was manipulated by her lies - just like other people have done with Michael too...
I'm very sorry for both of them :(
Austin is a sweetheart... he cares so much for Wendy, even more than her two girlfriends who, just as she said, were too focused on the way things perfectly went on in their lives to notice Wendy's issues.... :/
Krystal. That colossal bitch :D
If THIS is was what you meant by "don't judge her, she will change" then I have to say my feelings toward her at the beginning were right!
Yeah, she is being used by the man she loves and she knows it... it hurts, it hurts like fuck - I can imagine.
But WHY on hell do you have to do that to Wendy? Like it was her fault that Michael likes her and not Krystal! Has she ever thought that maybe Wendy's innocence and good heart were some of the reasons that made Michael fall for her? And for God's sake, it was Michael who kissed Wendy -__- So if you're bothered about it go try and say the same things to Michael, if you dare... ha!!! No! You don't!! Because you know he would say "kno' wat, fuck you" ._.
"“Oh grow up,” Krystal snapped at her, “Life is full of disappointments. This was just one of many. And if I heard Joel right, he agreed to drop you home, and you refused him because you were a stuck up bitch who needed Michael Jackson’s SUV to drop you home!”"
I swear I would have slapped that bitch hard right there! ò__ò
"“What the fuck?” Krystal was taken aback, “So it is my fault that the guy likes you? I thought I might let him try his luck with you this one night because he was so hopelessly obsessed with you! I wanted to do something nice for you! I tried so hard to be good to you and this is how you talk to me?”
“I told you the guy is a pervert and I wanted nothing to do with him!”
“Well I’m sorry that you’re too much of a chicken to give a guy a chance.”"
What is wrong with her? IF SHE DOESN'T WANT THAT PERVERT TO TOUCH HER, YOU SHOULDN'T FUCKIN' INSIST! And just because she's a responsible person doesn't mean she's tryin' to be a goody good girl or tryin' to save her virginity for Michael. HAAAAA THAT BITCH D: Cerine, I'm angry over a fictional character right now hahahahahah I blame you for that LOL
As for Wendy... I don't know what to think, if that's her opinion of all the situation... -_- "Beastly side" I don't see anything beastly in crying over a girl... and fucking your actual girlfriend -_- Now the fact that Krystal sees it in a negative way it's something else. And like she (Krystal) said Wendy deserved what happened to her, I fuckin' say she fuckin' deserves what happened and is happening to her :D touché bitch
Author's Response:
MAGGIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GAWSH YOU AND YOUR REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *swoon* *thud* *die*
I guess Michael's argument here is that she should know better than to trust someone just because they say they want to start things over. And you know, people get mad at those who are closest to them when they know they can't control the bad things that happen to them. Take our parents for an example. Take Lolita for an example. Although most of the time she has a strange way of showing her love to her daughter.
And it's not Tracy and Renee's fault that Wendy doesn't open up to them. Hee hee hee, she doesn't like to snap them out of their happy little worlds just to make them focus over a passing problematic phase Wendy has. Yeah, Austin is a sweetheart. We all need men like him in our lives!
As far as Krystal is concerned, please stop taking things so personally. It is just a character I created. Her evil is all of what I want to create. I want to expose a different side to her but it just seems that I can't. She just evolved to be a hissing serpant of a personality. I have no idea how that happened. Mwahahahahaha... poor Krystal... When people are not used to seeing genuine goodness in another, they see it as a facade. That's the case with Krystal. And her view of being helpful to someone differs greatly from Wendy's or ours. She thinks all of Wendy's attention seeking issues in concern to Michael, as she think they exist, is because she hasn't really had a man in her life. Some people do think like that. Believe me. I know people who do.
Hold it with the cursing Maggie! I think reviews aren't rated R! What is bad about his behavior is that he laments about another girl to the woman he actually dates, and then seeks pleasure from her only to forget what he feels for someone else. Imagine if that happened to you. We would be pretty hurt. And in Krystal's eyes, she has to feel that pain because Wendy exists. It's not that Wendy is evil, it's her very presence that makes things go wrong for Krystal. We can judge no one here.
Thank you for an amazing review... as always! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: May 06, 2013 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 50
He IS in love with you, Wendy!
Author's Response: Tee hee hee.... you never know..... I'll update soon. Thank you so much for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2013 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 50
That chapter was intense! Michael and Wendy are just a couple of hot messes aren't they?! They both need to get a grip. I think I've lost hope that they will ever be together. Michael needs to stop resorting to slut therapy and Wendy needs to grow a spine and I don't either happening anytime soon. Please tell me I'm wrong!
Author's Response: Hot mess! Mwahahahahahahaha...... Don't lose hope yet! I won't disapppoint you guys. I will update this soon! Thank you so much for the review. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2013 08:20 am Title: Chapter 49
Wow!!!!Just freaking loved this! <3 <3 felt so sorry for Wendy..damn you really bring out emotions well :D this is amazing waiting for more <3
Author's Response: You make me blush girl! Thank you so much! I hope the next chapter I upload is as good as this one. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: May 01, 2013 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 49
I love this story!!! Krystal is just evil. I can't wait for Michael to ditch her skanky ass....please tell me that he gets rid of her soon.
Author's Response: Hey sweetie! Yeah, I hope to get rid of her soon enough. I'm so happy you like this story! Thank you so much for the review. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!