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Reviewer: shaylovesmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2013 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 13: The Baby's Baby

I luv it! dont stop please. u have to finish this story. LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, reviewing and supporting me and this story! I will go on soon (: I just give a few days between each chapter to keep you guys wanting more lol. Much love <3

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 13: The Baby's Baby

Merry Christmas. Im happy Michael and Paris finally saw the baby that is growing inside of her. But when i was reading the last bit of this chapter i almost cried. It was really touching when Michael broke down crying. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

Aw you too!! Oh, I'm flattered that I was able to touch your heart through my writing (: Thank you so much for everything!! Much love <3

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 3: Overwhelmed

I thought the dream was real.  I got scared for her and was so happy when it was not.  I know she is terrified but I think Michael wll support her



Author's Response:

Haha that was my intention, to fool you guys :P I'm so mean! But thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Please keep on doing both (: Much love <3

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 07:45 am Title: Chapter 13: The Baby's Baby

Aww, it's natural for Michael to feel this way but I know that he'll get through it! I still and always will love your story!!!

Please continue!!

Author's Response:

He will eventually hehe! Thank you so so much!! Much love <3

Reviewer: PeterPanMJLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 06:02 am Title: Chapter 13: The Baby's Baby

great chapter !! very cute :)



Author's Response:

Haha thanks!! Much love <3

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 05:44 am Title: Chapter 2: Makes Me Wanna Scream

I hate that Paris is suffering lke this. I hope she tells her dad and new Drew soon

As for that teacher what he said is wrong and he needs to be hauled over the coals for that



Author's Response:

She will soon, just keep on reading and telling me what you think, I absolutely love when readers do that haha! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and yes, the teacher is obnoxious lol. Much love <3

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 03:11 am Title: Chapter 1: It Happened Much Too Soon

Thank  you for dealing with this subject. I  read so many stories about young kids getting pregnant and its really sad. 

 

Anyway I love your writing and  I feel for Paris. She should not have to deal with this on her own. I hope she tells her dad soon 



Author's Response:

Aw thank you so much! You're really sweet and truly made me smile. She won't, just read on (: Much love <3

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2012 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 13: The Baby's Baby

Beautiful, just towards the end, I began to tear up, I did cry. I felt Michael. I felt his hurt. But then again he loves the unborn child. I felt the same thing when I got my first ultrasound, I was nine years old. But I was not pregnant. I had an ovarian cyst. I have Hirsutism. The cyst or tumor was wedged in tween my left ovary and my uterus. It was getting close to the size of a baseball, which can effect greatly to the ovary. So which means I may not have children. But thank god they have taken it out in time on Chistmas Eve of 2009. I prayed to Michael to protect me, cause the doctor said that I began to bleed heavily while the surgery, but God and Michael saved me. I recovered at the Children's Hospital of Edinburg. (In Texas) but I was transferred to the largest hospital because I began to get worse in health. I almost had a near death experience. It was rather freighting. And I was in the moment of working on the tour. Since the end of 2009 I've been working on it. Well on the stage design, dance, songs. But I had stopped from 2010, that whole year because I was behind on grades and school and on my orchestra rehearsals. But everything is fine now, I have to take pills to control the growth of my facial, and the hair everywhere else, gosh that's embarrassing. Hehe. Now I must get ultrasounds every 3 months. During my recovery days (December 24-December 31) I would have dreams about Michael. I thought it was strange that he would come and 'check up' on me. I was eleven at the time. 

 

Thank you for this chapter, please updated as soon as possible. <3



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much! It means a lot to know that I was able to touch your heart through my writing, because that's my main goal. And I'm really sorry that you had to go through this. I'm glad you're okay now (: OMG, I also had dreams about Michael after one surgery I had to do back in 2010. Maybe he really is looking after his fans hehe! Well, thank YOU for reading and leaving me such a nice, long review, I truly appreciate it. Much love <3

Reviewer: shaylovesmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2012 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 12: Too Young

I really love your story! I hope you will continue .......



Author's Response:

Thank you!! Merry Christmas to you and your family <3

Reviewer: shaylovesmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2012 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 12: Too Young

I really love your story! I hope you will continue .......



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I will continue for sure, just trying to find some time to write among my daily responsibilities lol. Much love <3

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 12: Too Young

Aww that was very touching!!! I'm glad that Drew's mother is very supportive of the two. She's a sweet woman and she'll be a great grandmother! Richard on the other hand, I hope he'll come around.

I really love this story!!!!! Always keep writing!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I can't believe I got 125 reviews in mere 12 chapters!!! I'm so happy! Thanks for your and support. Much love to you <3

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 11: Request

I'm so glad both Michael and Drew are being supportive! Now they've just got to tell his parents.

I love your story!!!!

Author's Response:

Aww thank you!! And read Chapter 12, there you'll find new information heheh! Much love to you <3

Reviewer: MeikelTatii Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 11:23 am Title: Chapter 12: Too Young

so....I'm soooo sooorrry for no reply the last time. :( hope you can forgive me. <3 I've just no words as always (: wonderful chapter :D I. love. it. <3 finally his parents know it. but his father's reaction... :s well, let's see, what happen.

please go on *-* 



Author's Response:

Aw don't worry haha! And thank you so so much!! Love ya <3 I will!!

Reviewer: PeterPanMJLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 12: Too Young

aww this was a nice chapter. richard was mad but lcuy was cool. love this story!! lots of love 4 you



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! Much love <3

Reviewer: thelostchild143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2012 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 12: Too Young

D': That was sooo intense... Oh my gersh... 

 

I can't wait for the next chapter!

 

I love you!! <3 <3



Author's Response:

Yeah haha. Thank you so much for everything!! I love you more <3 (:

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