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Reviewer: EvelovesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Turning Point

This is really well written, are you ever going to post more??

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 12:22 am Title: Chapter 3 - Turning Point

Is there gonna be more? I just found this and I really like it.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2012 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Turning Point

Wow im speechless. But dont get me wrong this is a great story. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E

Reviewer: KoP4ever2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2012 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sneak Peek

Hi!! You have a new reader. :)

This is great, keep it up!!

~Grace

Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2012 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected

This is very simular to 'Under his clothes' if you haven't read it you should! Hopefully this one ends better! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2012 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sneak Peek

Mikes being rude and seductive at the same time XD loving it!!!! More pleaseeeeee :D MUCH LOVE

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2012 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sneak Peek

Oh, man! Why did you have to end the chapter there? I can't wait to read the rest! I love this aggressive, domineering version of Michael.

 

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2012 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Just A Bad Day

its beauitful and i enjoy it very much. i read the first chapter and the sneak peak of chapter 2 on another site enchantressstories.com and i love reading ur story. i enjoy the second chapter too. cant wait for the next part of ur story.

Reviewer: mj2eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2012 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected

Loving the story so far x Please continue xx



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2012 10:27 am Title: Chapter 2 - Sneak Peek

I LOVE it!

I think it's a lovely start !

aND i 'M the kind of person who speaks the truth!

I only say it!

I'm NOT going to lie to you..why should i? i have to be a sincere person...

So...

I lov ethe ideea so far..

WHY is Michael SO ....you know...MEAN?

:))

IT'S INTERESTING!

 

( want to know something?  (giggling) ...when you mentioned on the second chapter that the date was ,,february, 8" , a light went on in my head :)) ..because it's my birthday then! ) :))

 

MUCH L-O-V-E!

waiting for the NEXT chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far. Michael is so... mean... well for a reason I'm sure, but we'll just have to wait and see why that is. ;)

 

P.S. Happy belated birthday!!

Reviewer: vaisakhi Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2012 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected

I am absolutely loving what I've read of this story. You are a very gifted writer. Enough with the torture.....please update soon LOL.



Author's Response:

I hope you will enjoy chapter 2 just as much. ;) Thank you for your lovely comment.

Reviewer: Ethereal Petrichor Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2012 02:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected

I love the way you began the story, its very unique and HOT! lol! Your writing is so professional & mesmerizing!!! you should definitely continue! Much Love, Monisha :P



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked the beginning. I hoped it would grab some attention. ;)

Reviewer: Serinity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2012 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected

Love the story please update soon

Author's Response:

Thanks! Happy to hear you like it. :)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2012 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected

wow i like this i hope you update somemore.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :)

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