Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2012 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: It Happened Much Too Soon

Continue!

Author's Response:

I will <3

Reviewer: canyoufeelit Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2012 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: It Happened Much Too Soon

all I have to say is that you HAVE TOO have Paris get in serious trouble for this if Michael is able to forgive her at for such a betrayal he has to go off on her has to

even if he has to make her leave him be the first few times he talks to her just so he can talk calmly as posible but he has to loose his coool on his HAS to, Michael was not a push over with his kids that how they ended up so well mannered 

and for him to be around and this happenhe would bust a gasket, there would be shame and disbelief feeling of disrespect and hurt HIGH anger and some tears, from both though I don't think Michael would want her to see him bust into complete tear but I do see him getting choked up

on the point of pregancy, I have been watching Tia and Tamera and they have stated thing that happen to a girl or womans body when your pregant besides throwing up 

gas, loss of ablity to hold your blatter, bleeding can occur that doesn't mean miss carraige but some blood loss do too ovr production of blood, discomfort,hair growing in palced that it wouldn't normally, MOOD swings, exhaustion if she were to have a emergancy and need to go to the hospital who is going to know who's gonna be able to help her she needs to talk and talk fast

because her symptoms may tell on her faster then she can, can wait for th next chapter just please let him go off on her like any normal parent would PLEASE

Author's Response:

Well, to act like any parent would is something very relative to say, but I do get what you mean. Michael rudely going off on her is not what I envision in my head, but I'll make sure that he scolds her and all of that. Don't worry about it. And Paris will talk, but it's only been a day since she found out. Maybe she still has to take the news in herself haha! Let's give her some time for herself. Anyways, thank you for the review, sweetie <3 much love (:

Reviewer: canyoufeelit Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: It Happened Much Too Soon

the last chapter was good, girl I tially understand what it's like to loose a chapter I lost 2 whoe chapters from Dance for you wheile I was righting it I highlighted it to prooof reed with my natural reader and acidently deleted and and didn't notice tol I was about 3 days from posting the chapter and I had to rember everything that happened and rewrite it TWO WEEKS after i wrote it but luckily I loved that part so much it was easy to rewrite I had no proble was i pissed 

HELL YEAH I thought I just had to edit and I had to not only write wtie it but edit 2 chapters so yeah I get your pain

all i have to say 

WHEN MICHAEL FIDS OUT HE BETTER GET IN HER ASS

be very dispointed with her I see what your doing your proloning the fact that she has to tell him but Damn she's near three months along so she better start talking QUICK before her secret tells for her

and what is with Michael is he really that busy he doen't notice things going on with his kids and really giving Paris that much frieedom to have her own car at 15 and no security taling her every where she goes NEVER happen 

she just better hope no one at school starts a rumor and starts tweetinging it and face booking it it hit TMZ and get back to Michael that way or her ASS is GRASS.

but that's up to you I just know I can't wait for when Michael get's home and how she tries to approach the situation, great job

can;t wait for more

 

Author's Response:

Hahahahah, I almost had a stroke when I saw I'd lost everything!! And to make things worse, I was already writing the last paragraph when the computer restarted. Ugh, so terrible! Lol, but thank you for reading and reviewing (: About Michael, he's away (like I mentioned in the first chapter) and, even though I didn't mention it, the kids are staying with Grace and all of that in their home. Paris only has freedom to drive around her school area and neighborhood (like, nearby, familiar zones), but if she goes anywhere else, the bodyguards will surely be beside her. I mean, there isn't much problem 'cause pretty much everyone that lives in her area is famous haha! Oh, in this story they live in some other house I made up, just saying. Ah, and yeah, if TMZ or The Sun discovers anything, she's pretty much screwed hahaha, but I won't let that happen... Or will I? 'Kay, so thank you again for you support, and much love <3

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: It Happened Much Too Soon

You're a very talented writer! I'm already enjoying this story

Author's Response:

Thank you!! I'm glad <3

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 2: Makes Me Wanna Scream

Thanks for posting the next chapter. And dont worry i dont think it was crappy at all. And Michaela is right Paris has to tell her family & Drew that she is expecting. I think Drew is cuite just saying. Also i do not like Mr. Wheeler i think he is a asshole and coldhearted. And i like it when their is spaces between the paragraphs because 1. I wear glasses and after awhile anything i read on hear like a chapter it becomes blury lol and 2. It makes the chapter cleaner. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

Aw thank you!! Drew is adorable, that's for sure, and Mr. Wheeler is indeed very annoying lol I'm glad you like it (: will update soon, much love <3

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: Makes Me Wanna Scream

Keep going! Drew is cute lol ^-^

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I surely will! Oh, and yes, Drew is too gorgeous for this world haha much love (:

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 2: Makes Me Wanna Scream

I loved the chapter u did good girl! & I didn't like how her teacher went off about her father. I hate wen ppl make fun of mj -_- & that's a teacher 4 crying out loud! I can't wait 4 more!

Author's Response:

Heyy, thank you!!! Mr. Wheeler is annoying, right? And yes, I also get very hurt when people make fun of Michael, but hey, that's kind of the price of fame! It's the consequence for being as amazing and flawless as he is lol kisses girl!