Penname: alexandrita [Contact] Real name: alexandra
Member Since: Mar 18, 2011
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Broken Vows by tinker13 Rated: MA starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

 

 

Love is something everyone strives to have in their life. There is nothing more special then finding that one person whom you love. That person who completes you and makes you whole. Broken vows is a story of love in its many forms. As a childhood friendship that blossoms into love. A love that is hidden and revealed when it is too late. It's a story of first loves, lost love, heartache, lies, secrets and the quest to get that special love back. But is it too late?

Michael is NOT famous in this story. the story is for Adult readers only due to sexual nature.


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92660 Read Count: 4482
[Report This] Published: Nov 02, 2018 Updated: Jul 14, 2019
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Date: Jun 21, 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I loved it!! I knew at some point Mike was going to get fed up with the press but I am glad that this has united them much more than separating them. 

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Date: Feb 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope it's not a dream haha... 



Author's Response:

you'll see really soon.. thanks for reading and reviewing

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Date: Jun 21, 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I loved it! :') 

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Date: Mar 13, 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I could feel that something bad was going to happen. ( i hate the media soo much!)  I hope nothing more spoils their romantic dinner, I really loved the chapter and look forward to the next one. Muchas gracias!    

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Date: Dec 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I read all the chapters in a day! I couldn't stop reading haha i can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for giving it a chance.  im glad you liked it and I'm thrilled you reviewed

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Date: Dec 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow i can't believe it! 



Author's Response:

is that good or bad?  Good I hope.  I tried toshock you guys and think I succeeded.  thanks for reviewing

Summary:

Black and Blue

 

He had always admired her. She was everything a young woman ought to be. In his eyes she was his perfection, but propriety kept him from pursuing her. She and he were one in the same, both understood the world of notoriety and wealth, yet still they were worlds apart. They both wanted to find one another, but the faces of those they imagined loving were not the ones they chose. It was he who first uttered the words "I love you" but, it was she who never left his side. This is a story not of typical passion, but of true love. This is a story of pain, of denial, and of obligation. This is the world of Black and Blue.  

 

Years ago a reader blew my mind and made me these amazing trailers for this story! They are out of this world, and every well done. Please check them out and let me know what you think. Please feel free to comment on her videos as well and leave your own feedback. 

She is spectacular!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=lLQSgTAEMsQ

https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=5tbTsDwYnG8

 


Categories: Adult, Drama, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257692 Read Count: 11804
[Report This] Published: Jun 10, 2019 Updated: Sep 21, 2020
Reviewer: alexandrita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Snow covered truths

They are so cute together! :3 i loved this sweet chapter! 

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Date: Aug 08, 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Silent night

Poor Michael....he needs to tell her the truth! Great chapter! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3 

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Date: Oct 22, 2019 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Tears of lust

What Savannah said came true....Michael is a gentleman but he's also a red blooded man. So it will be interesting to see how much more he can resist .. not only he but also Amelia that although she doesn't want to see it ..she is clearly attracted to her husband. Great chapter! :3



Author's Response:

He is so in love that it's clouding his judgement and breaking his spirit. He has chased after Amelia so long that he can't believe she is his now, and he wants all of her. Thank you for reading and commenting. It means the world to me. I hope you continue to enjoy more. 

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Date: Dec 12, 2019 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo

Oh God poor Amelia! 

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Date: Jun 15, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Helmsley Hotel

Oh my God!!I'm so glad you came back, I used to read your stories more than once because I loved the way you wrote them and how you described Michael so realistically. Your female characters I come to love you all and ..and ..... I love your stories basically, I wish they were books to read them always please never stop writing because you really are a spectacular writer! forgive me if it does not make sense what I say, English is not my native language haha

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Date: Jun 21, 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Dangerous

I love how you used the lyrics of Dangerous to describe Michael's feelings for amelia. Brilliant! 

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Date: Jun 29, 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Muse

You do capture pain perfectly.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I try :)

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Date: Dec 26, 2019 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony

oh God! They almost got divorced but finally Amelia told him the truth! I can't wait for the next chapter! :3 <3

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Date: Sep 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Walking the line Part I

When I thought Nicholas couldn't be more despicable...anyway it was an great chapter. I get very happy every time I see you´ve updated the story. I love reading how the relationship between Amelia and MJ gradually develops. :D