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Summary:

Cherell (Sher-el) is the secret wife of Michael Jackson. That is, until she and Michael decide to announce to the world their fourteen year hidden love affair via an exclusive interview hosted by Oprah Winfrey. During this interview, Cherell and Michael travel back in time, as early as the late seventies, and revisit the birth and growth of their love. However, as they recap on the magic that brought them together, they also ponder over the fame, insecurity, and jealousy that almost tore them apart forever.

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Disclaimer: All unoriginal characters and settings belong strictly to their respective owner while all original characters are full property of the author. No money is being earned from work of fiction and no copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 303315 Read Count: 79349
[Report This] Published: Jan 08, 2014 Updated: Nov 01, 2017
Reviewer: Freddiepeddie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Nov 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Great story! I think I've read about all of it in a week. The pace of the storytelling and the humour are really good. The only improvement could be on the steamy stuff, I think you could write longer flirty/sexy scenes without them being explicit, you know? Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Welcom aboard new reader! I'm thrilled that you've been enjoying this and caught up rather quickly too. Thanks for the advice too. Originally, this was an erotic story, but due to personal beliefs and conflictions, I could no longer continue the story in that manner. So, I had to do some editing with certain scenes and that may be why some of the steamy stuff is choppy or lacking in quality, compared to the rest of the story. And you're right, I'm sure with proper time and effort, I can make those scenes tasteful but sill appropriate. Thank you so much! I hope you continue to stick around as the story progresses!

Baby Be Mine by Gabby7 Rated: MA starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 415]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Find out what happens when Gabby has an unusual encounter with Michael and he becomes apart of her everyday life.

 

He continues to stand where he is and speaks in the most angelic voice I've ever heard. "Ma'am are you ok?"

I manage to gather myself over to him, desperately grabbing him by the arms.

"Please sir, can you help me. I need to go to the hospital. "

He stares at me wiith weariness as he stumbles over his words. "Oh, uh...well..."

A prickling pain shoots through my body, causing me to shake with fear. This pain is unbearable, yet in its essence, it's a bitter sweet moment.

I stare at him pleadingly. "Please sir, I'm in labor!"

 


Categories: Award Winning, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145448 Read Count: 24297
[Report This] Published: Sep 02, 2015 Updated: Feb 01, 2020
Reviewer: Freddiepeddie Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

This is oke of the funniest stories ever! Nice!

Summary:

SECRET

[see-krit]

Noun- Something that is kept or meant to be kept unknown or unseen by others.

 

SESSION

[seesh-un]

Noun- A period devoted to a particular activity.

 

Michael is at the peak of his career. Record breaking album sales, chart shattering singles, multitude of grammys on his mantle, millions of adoring fans, fame, fortune, and beautiful women on his arms. What sounds like the perfect life isn't all as it seems.  Michael is about to turn 30 and is still a virgin.  What started out as guilt from a strong religious upbringing, turned into awkwardness around women, embarrassment from inexperience, and eventually a paralyzing fear of intimacy. The tabloids have started to spread rumors about his sexuality so he's decided he needs to get some help to shed himself of the dreaded virginity curse and gain some experience to turn him into the confident lover his fans think he is. There's only one person he knows he can trust to keep his secret and help him. Join him on his journey and take a peak into their Secret Sessions.  

Warning:  this story is considered mature and intended to mature readers.  It contains strong sexual situations and could be considered Erotica.

This story does not line up chronologically with actual timelines in Michaels life and I have taken liberty to make events fit into my time frame for the story.

 


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105423 Read Count: 12834
[Report This] Published: Oct 17, 2017 Updated: Jul 01, 2018
Reviewer: Freddiepeddie Signed starstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: session one

Hi tinker13, great story! Been meaning to read it for awhile and finally did so. I really like the slower pace you've taken in your last two chapters. Don't be afraid of going into details of the non-sexual stuff, like conversations or descriptions of the surroundings. That makes a good build-up to the good stuff ;). Also I'd love to read about a confrontation with an outsider, while Mike and Kat are busy. That vould be very funny and awkward. Keep it going!