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A young, single, and downtrodden mother named Alessandra gives up on love and life. However, she runs into her high school crush and best friend. Sounds just about ordinary, but not when his name is Michael Jackson.
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 88690 Read Count: 18447
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 (Wanna Be Startin' Somethin')
This was too cute. Michael is the ultimate baby sitter lol I want some pizza :(
Author's Response:
I know haha, Michael racked up another title, "King of Babysitters!" Is there anything he can't do! I swear he is the Superman of the 90's lol
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 1)
Uh-uh, see, they ain't right lol. What's little man gonna think? Ooooh, they're have some explaining to dooo. But in other news, I'm so glad that they are finally together!!!
I smiled so hard. But hey, I almost forgot.
I can't believe Michael said we should have done this 25 chapters ago lmbo. I was screamin!!!! Why? That was clever though, so kudos to you! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yess, I thought that was funny too, especially with Michael chomping at the bit about him and Ali's relationship! In fact, I kinda wanted it to seem like Michael was talking to us lol haha, and yeah, 25 chapters is a long time to wait for a kiss with a man that is sexy, smart and entertaining (in and out of the bed)...Ali, stopped foolin before we had a chance to get in the story and take him lol
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 (You Are There)
I say yes to all of the above because I pretty much called it. *Pats self on the back* I'm so glad they made up, I was beginning to worry but I'm more happy that they got a new understanding and Ali's right, Mo better give Wayne a chance lol. That man came and found you girl to check on you, you can atleast hang with the man damn!
Any way, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Mhhmmm, and he is cute, strong, and Vanilla...girl get ur swirl on, I ain't mad. Well, you could even say that Alessandra is getting her White Chocolate on with Mike too lol!
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 (Ease on Down the Road)
Ok, cool. That was nice of Wayne to advise Monette like that, he's a good guy. Hmm, maybe they might even get together....ok lemme stop, wishful thinking lol. But this was really sweet. I hope she and Ali do patch it up though which I'm sure they will because that's what sisters do but Mo just needs to relax.
Author's Response:
I think Monette is so used to looking out for her that that is really the only thing she has become accustomed to. However, later on the story, you will see why Monette goes to bat for Alessandra the way she does, especially flashing-back to the years before. And hmm, things might be heating up with Wayne? Do I smell attraction here? And damn it Mo, you were hungover and got a man feelin u within only hours! I swear her and Ali have some magic formula or something with these men lol
Date: Mar 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 (I Can't Help It)
No, too hot lol. Wow, that is interesting but I definitely rolled on the floor when he said he was gonna go for a snack after all that lol I was like man, my dude so roused up, he need food to distract him lol. I enjoy the heck out of this though!!
Author's Response:
I know, man Ali's kisses must be like weed cuz Michael turned around n had the munchies lol he's a fiend lol but anyway, glad u enjoyed it as always 😊🙌🏾
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 (Whatever You Got, I Want)
Ok! First things first, Alessandra need to teach me that, she got a man in the house flippin' pancakes? Oooh!! * Chokes on the tea*
And Jose stank behind? What is he doin' girl, what is he doin!? I can't he must want a foot up his butt because...no. And who is this Simone cow? She must be a hater in that case, we have no time...be gone!
And I remember in an earlier review I asked if Jose was Anton's father but I'm so glad he's not but he is definitely thirsty though. He stay parched lol
Anyway, great chapter and I will talk to you soon!
Author's Response:
Girl, you said this Simone cow! I'm done! Tell you what, every time she pops up, we say, "MOOOOOOOO!" LOL and Jose is definitely asking for it! I smell trouble with him so stay tuned!
Date: Mar 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 (Break of Dawn)
Yup, he was working it. That was great, I can't believe they finally did it! But I have to applaud your writing style over all though. You hooked it up! It was so detailed and well planned, great job ma'am!!
And yes, I played the song!! Man, I love Silk and I never knew that that was one of their songs so you put me on to something. Appreciate it! And you're right it does intensify it, I was like Oh, snap! Lol. Definitely gotta add that song to my Playlist now. This chapter was too right.
Author's Response:
Thank u darlin n I love ur story as well too 😊😘 and yes I have that video on my playlist n child them sex scenes r like the most intense to write but the most fun to write! And Silk yes they had that little hidden gem like it's right up there with "Freak Me".... N they also made a montage for Michael on that one too 👌🏾 but thanks so much girl I'm so looking forward to ur reviews from here on out n I got u covered on ur story boo! Peace! c6;🏾
Date: Mar 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 (Human Nature)
Oooh, uh-un! They kissed! I'm gonna be like Michael now, I can't take it either, I have to read the next chapter ASAP!!! Lol anyway, this was cool and I love how concerned they are for each other. But on a side note, MoStay nosey!!! Like let Ali do her. K, boo? But I don't think it's fair that Ali leaves Anton on her all the time either though but I'mma give her props for picking up the slack even though she has to work lol. Great chap! Now, excuse me while I read the next one.
Author's Response:
Glad u enjoyed it babes and yes that kiss tho 😍
Date: May 04, 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 (Girlfriend)
Hey boo, I was on the site and I just wanted to say what's up but girrl, where is my new chapter? I'm waiting on you lol 😘👀
Author's Response:
hey girl, OMG college and work is running me ragged. Don't worry I got you its just been a lot but I missed writing and catching up, and i'll be sure to hit u up on your story. Peace love and blessings, boo!
Date: Apr 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 (Give in to Me)
Hey! I'm so glad you're back. This chapter was a bomb come back boo!!! I'll stay tuned. At least they finally broke the bet *wink* *wink*
Date: Aug 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 (Behind the Mask)
It was great girl and the girls are a mess! Glad I get more of my story😠I'm sure Ali will accept the invitation too. In terms of Michael, I think he really needs to get his body together because he can't continue to work if he doesn't. Also, Ali is pretty understanding so I'm sure his skin won't be much of an issue.
Great chapter, onto the next one!
Date: Mar 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 (Things I Do For You)
Heyyy!!! Ok, love this, Mike really set it out and them checking each other out was priceless lol.
Date: Mar 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 (Someone in the Dark)
That's messed up but Michael was so sweet to pat her up like that. Jose better not trip like that, I'm gonna have a fit lol
Author's Response:
I know I was like Awww poor Ali and Michael being the awesome man that he is 😍 N yeah Jose better not before me u n Michael will collectively kick his ass 👊🏾 lol
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 (With a Child's Heart)
Uh oh.:o I wonder what she'll say. If she doesn't say it right, that can be a tough pill to swallow.
Author's Response:
I was on the edge of my seat too with that cliffhanger girl! Come on Ali, as Tisha would say, "Stop playin cuz that friend shit is getting old," lol!
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 2)
They broke the bed? Nooo!!! Then they give Anton that messed up story about jumping on the bed...Girrrl. Then it cost 4k? Mm.mm. I would be breakin' not another bed with 4k. Shoot, I would be sleeping on the floor before I slept in another bed again that cost that much lol. And is Ali pregnant? Hmmm, I with her though that there is too much at stake, that would be me too. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Chile...ain't nobody got time for breaking $4000 beds now, here? And yes, that was so funny and embarrassing with the bed story, but Michael came through with that cover-up lol and I died when Mo and Wayne looked to the side like "Y'all got that," lol And hmm...what if a baby is under tow? Let's find out!