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Member Since: Apr 17, 2015
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Gender: Female
Age: 12-15
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Summary:

Fatima Brown is a young, wild, feisty and smart mouthed teenager who has to leave her home in Brooklyn and move to L.A. because her mother got a job offer she refused to turn down. In the life of Fatima, she is known for being a tomboy, insecure about her looks and not having too many friends back at home all except for one: her best friend Zenobia Carter, who she had to leave behind. Now, she considers herself as a loner without her. But what happens when Fatima meets Michael Jackson, the most popular guy in school, the ladies man, who is also smart at the mouth. Will these two go slashing at each other throats or will feelings get involve and change everything for them both?


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Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51975 Read Count: 5988
[Report This] Published: Sep 21, 2014 Updated: Apr 24, 2019
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Mar 19, 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22. Party Going Up...Onna Tuesday: Part 4

Yess, one of my faves is back! Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. Somethin' For Dat Ass

This is great, so mad you stopped  lol



Author's Response:

Aww thanks. And sorry, lol.

Summary:

 


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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death, Domestic Abuse, Kidnapping, Neglect
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24881 Read Count: 5869
[Report This] Published: Oct 14, 2014 Updated: Jul 20, 2018
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Nov 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Lust...

This is getting good! Definitely going into the favorites!



Author's Response:

Omg thank you!!!!I'm really happy now😻😝🙌🙌🙌

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Nov 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: "Dammit!"

You are doing such a great job, more please!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 🙌🙌🙌🙌

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

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Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Nov 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Interview...

This is really interesting!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Read on. I hope you can dig where I'm going with it. Thank you for reading! <333

Summary:

A young, single, and downtrodden mother named Alessandra gives up on love and life. However, she runs into her high school crush and best friend. Sounds just about ordinary, but not when his name is Michael Jackson.

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 88690 Read Count: 18447
[Report This] Published: Feb 05, 2015 Updated: May 23, 2020
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 (Ease on Down the Road)

Ok, cool. That was nice of Wayne to advise Monette like that, he's a good guy. Hmm, maybe they might even get together....ok lemme stop, wishful thinking lol. But this was really sweet. I hope she and Ali do patch it up though which I'm sure they will because that's what sisters do but Mo just needs to relax.



Author's Response:

I think Monette is so used to looking out for her that that is really the only thing she has become accustomed to. However, later on the story, you will see why Monette goes to bat for Alessandra the way she does, especially flashing-back to the years before. And hmm, things might be heating up with Wayne? Do I smell attraction here? And damn it Mo, you were hungover and got a man feelin u within only hours! I swear her and Ali have some magic formula or something with these men lol

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 (You Are There)

I say yes to all of the above because I pretty much called it. *Pats self on the back* I'm so glad they made up, I was beginning to worry but I'm more happy that they got a new understanding and Ali's right, Mo better give Wayne a chance lol. That man came and found you girl to check on you, you can atleast hang with the man damn!

Any way, great chapter!



Author's Response:

Mhhmmm, and he is cute, strong, and Vanilla...girl get ur swirl on, I ain't mad. Well, you could even say that Alessandra is getting her White Chocolate on with Mike too lol!

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 1)

Uh-uh, see, they ain't right lol.  What's little man gonna think? Ooooh, they're have some explaining to dooo. But in other news, I'm so glad that they are finally together!!!

I smiled so hard. But hey, I almost forgot.

I can't believe Michael said we should have done this 25 chapters ago lmbo. I was screamin!!!! Why? That was clever though, so kudos to you! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yess, I thought that was funny too, especially with Michael chomping at the bit about him and Ali's relationship! In fact, I kinda wanted it to seem like Michael was talking to us lol haha, and yeah, 25 chapters is a long time to wait for a kiss with a man that is sexy, smart and entertaining (in and out of the bed)...Ali, stopped foolin before we had a chance to get in the story and take him lol

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Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 (Wanna Be Startin' Somethin')

This was too cute. Michael is the ultimate baby sitter lol I want some pizza :(



Author's Response:

I know haha, Michael racked up another title, "King of Babysitters!" Is there anything he can't do! I swear he is the Superman of the 90's lol

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 (Workin' Day and Night)

Uh oh, where my tea at! Mo catching Ali with Michael? Uh-un this is about to be fu-nny. So crazy of her to get Michael to babysit, I never saw that one coming. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I know, Michael to the rescue! He came through on the real though! Besides, not too many kids could say that they had Michael Jackson for a babysitter!

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (Much Too Soon)

Awww, she's leaving but this was cute! And kudos on the day dream. I'm just going to cross my fingers that it goes down like that. That would give me too much life lol

 



Author's Response:

I know...Michael and Ali with their daydreams :-) they are like mini-movies aren't they, but maybe you are onto something girl? ;-)

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 (Why)

She told him! Ooooh!!!! I'm so glad now a weight can be lifted off her shoulders and her convo with Anton was beyond cute. I was like awwww lol.

It's great that Ali finally has the support she needs. Michael's right, she shouldn't have had to do it alone.



Author's Response:

I'm glad she told him too! But I also could understand her position as well as Michael's! And yes, Anton is the cutest little thing isn't he?

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Mar 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 (We Got a Good Thing Going)

Look at them, gettin' all cuddly and stuff lol this was too cute. I wonder why she lied to him about Anton though, but I guess I can see her reasons.  Bomb chapter!



Author's Response:

I know, Mike and Ali are too stinkin cute arent they lol but the sexual tension was all types of real tho! Glad you loved the chapter! And trust and believe, more and more will unfold about Anton

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)

This is the bomb! I know I said that I hadn't read it but I actually remembered reading some of it once I began reading those parts again. I love it, just the whole set up. It's funny and extremely interesting! I will continue to check in on this one...thank you for reminding me <3

P.s. Michael and his friends are priceless lol I rolled on the floor too many times and I also love how down Ali's friends are for her. I hope you continue to update even though I am still in the beginning stages because I am beyond hooked! If the day didn't move so fast and I could finish it and do everything that I had to do at the same time, I would! Now, if you will excuse me, I'm gonna go squeeze in another chapter with some popcorn lol See ya!



Author's Response:

Chile, I'm a need some popcorn and some strawberry lemonade for all this shade lol ironically Momma made some today, but anyway I'm glad you like it and you better not leave me hangin for another chapter as well. I love writing the dialogue between the friends, I picture it as my own friends and how I would talk to them and vice versa! 

Well, you keep me posted on your story and I will do the same! Peace, love, blessings and all the fun stuff in between! Bye!

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Date: May 22, 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 (Somebody's Watching Me)

Girrrrl, hold on, where do I even start? Woahh, this chapter was everything! And before I forget, so proud of you for getting straight A's! You Go Girl! (Martin voice).

Now on to other news...

Yass on Wayne and Monette and it's so cool that you picked Dean to play him...he too fine girl <3 He fit perfectly.

And oooh, that bet and the whole "little friend" situation, had me dead. I can't wait to see how that turns out! And Mike goals for being sensitive to her about her period.

My mouth dropped at the news insider too...damn!

But I can't wait to see wassup and what all the details will be behind it.

Girl, you said you glued to your seat on me but forget allat, I think I'm going to become a damn skeleton waiting on you for the next one lol.

 

Love you girl and keep doing you!

-Peace, love, and blessings.



Author's Response:

Thank you girl! Yeah, college been kickin my entire butt but it's all gonna be worth it in the end! and glad you loved the chapter! Don't worry girl, I'm a try not to have y'all waiting too long now that school is out but BABY!!!!!!! I am serving! I'm gonna have some straight ICED TEA served cold...I'm a outdo that Beyonce Lemonade. I got a surprise for y'all and I have more coming up with RTT! Stay tuned love!