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Age: 12-15
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Give It Up by Lenetta16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary:

Peyton is your typical high school outcast. She doesn't follow trends, she has a very low tolerence for others and she lacks a sunny disposition. But when she meets Michael, the friendly college student who is the complete opposite of her, it seems as if he can be the one thing that will actually make her somewhat enjoy school. Will they become really close friends or will it eventually evolve into something more? Find out in Give It Up!


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Angst, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75070 Read Count: 3994
[Report This] Published: Aug 14, 2013 Updated: Nov 22, 2017
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Michael and Peyton are driving me crazy lol. I'm a little sad about their predicament too but I respect Michael for waiting, not many would have. But great chapter,  I'm loving it 😁



Author's Response:

Right, especially back then lol. Thanks for reading! 😁

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jul 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great chapter. They're so cute!



Author's Response:

They really are ☺️

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Date: Aug 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Please come back with this story, I am too thirsty to know what happens next lol



Author's Response:

I'm working on it! I'm gonna make my comeback in the 2016 ;D

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: Jul 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I've been waiting for this to come back! I love the way Peyton got Michael back for that "You'll never get a man that way" comment lol. He was getting all beside himself. Can't wait for this party either and to see if Janet gets caught or not. Lastly, Peyton trying to deny that she likes Michael is killing me, she is doing so much to disprove it but is really confirming it more in the process. 

Glad to see you back and I'll be waiting for more <3



Author's Response:

Lol yeah Peyton's a funny one. Thanks so much for reading! 😁

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Jul 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Peyton's conversation with Michael was cool 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! ⭐️

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jul 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ooh. I didn't want it to end! Peyton's reaction to her crush on Michael was great, you really captured the moment. Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Lmao I'm happy you're enjoying it so much! 😆

Summary:

 

I wrote as story YEARS ago about Michael and Tatiana it was a Master of fact the VERY first story I ever wrote about Michael so I’m going to rewrite it but including the New Idea’s I have come up with and new concept I didn’t use for something else on two other stories so I’m going to use it to make this re write

So get read you guys for

A Crime of PASSION

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crime

krīm/

noun

1.    1.

an action or omission that constitutes an offense

synonyms:

offense, unlawful act, illegal act, felony, misdemeanor, misdeed,wrong; 

pas·sion

g2;paSHən/

noun

1.    1.strong and barely controllable emotion.

"a man of impetuous passion"

A powerful emotion, such as love, joy, hatred, or anger.

A Strong sexual desire; lust.

b. The object of such love or desire

 

 


Categories: Invincible: 2000-2003, This Is It: 2006-2009, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1696 Read Count: 126
[Report This] Published: Jan 18, 2014 Updated: Jan 20, 2014
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue:Momento's - of a Lost Love

This great, I can't wait to see the twists and turn. More please!

Summary:

improved

Semaj is 17 with big dreams and goals but meeting 21 year old drug dealin', shit talkin', trouble makin', Michael Jackson was not planned. Her life turned a full 360 after the night she met him.

 

Not your average bad boy meets good girl story but see for yourself!

 


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Neglect
Series: The Gangsta Lovin' Series
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238258 Read Count: 62228
[Report This] Published: Sep 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 04, 2015
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 25, 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57- Gangsta Lovin'

HI! To be honest this could have kept going lol but as you said, it had to end sometime but you did a good job nonetheless. I'm just so sad to see it go. I'm looking forward to your other endeavors though. Thank you for the journey, I loved every minute of it!

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51- April Fool's for the Fool's

Had to check out my fave story, you really did a good job. I laughed a lot at the end, Michael is so silly!

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54- Late Night Cosco Drinkin'

Don't worry about it being short, this is great. And I'm going to be so sad to see it end.



Author's Response:

Aww thanks! And I'm going to be sad too when it ends, but I  loved writing it.

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Sep 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55- Not Gon' Leave My Baby

I loved how Aaron just rolled up and saved the day, so unexpected



Author's Response:

Lol, I hope that's a good thing? Thank you.

Summary:

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I met her on my way to Chicago
Where she was all alone
And so was I
So I asked her for her name

She smiled and looked at me
I was surprised to see
That a woman like that
Was really into me

Hi My Name Is Tina Anthony…. Ha ha Ha… Or Is it

 I have a Rather glamourous Life style, I fly all around the world Meeting Clients and taking care of Major Business Deals for MAJOR Returns…. Sounds like I live the life Right

Well I do, but I am only a Assistant…. And I am a New assistant I haven’t been working at the company for longer than 2 years…. And I don’t get paid what one Might think, But when you Live that Life style… and you live it long enough, that Lie becomes the Truth…

You see I’m a Fast talker, I can make you believe anything I need to get what I want…. But when my boss offers Me a Life Changing Opportunity…. How was I to know that it came with such a steep Price?

It’s Like gambling, you play to Win…. But you Forget

 

The House ALWAYS Wins

 


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2145 Read Count: 89
[Report This] Published: Sep 08, 2014 Updated: Sep 13, 2014
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The End In The Beginning... Tina Anthony?

Very interesting, please continue

Summary:

 

Chivonn's a girl in her mid-twenties working a mediocre job struggling just to get by. Her brother Bryan is a father of two young children is also struggling after his baby mama kicked him out and sliced his paychecks up with child support. The two siblings realize they are better off living together than struggling on their own. Chivonn feels safe with her brother and the living arrangement is working out perfectly....

....until the day Bryan's childhood friend Michael Jackson, gets released from prison and becomes the roommate from hell you just can't get rid of. He's bad, he's dangerous, and often lets his pride get in the way of doing what's right. There are a few good things about him, though. He's got a secret soft spot for children and just so happens to have one of the rawest talents the world will ever see.

 

But will the world get to see it? Or will his talent be wasted... Forever lost to the streets...

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142404 Read Count: 36878
[Report This] Published: Sep 09, 2014 Updated: Sep 20, 2015
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Can he stay for a couple days... maybe a week?

I can honestly say that this is still one of my favorites, I know it may take you a while but you definitely haven't lost your edge!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! That means alot!!

Summary:

Fatima Brown is a young, wild, feisty and smart mouthed teenager who has to leave her home in Brooklyn and move to L.A. because her mother got a job offer she refused to turn down. In the life of Fatima, she is known for being a tomboy, insecure about her looks and not having too many friends back at home all except for one: her best friend Zenobia Carter, who she had to leave behind. Now, she considers herself as a loner without her. But what happens when Fatima meets Michael Jackson, the most popular guy in school, the ladies man, who is also smart at the mouth. Will these two go slashing at each other throats or will feelings get involve and change everything for them both?


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Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51975 Read Count: 5988
[Report This] Published: Sep 21, 2014 Updated: Apr 24, 2019
Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. Somethin' For Dat Ass

This is great, so mad you stopped  lol



Author's Response:

Aww thanks. And sorry, lol.

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed
Date: Apr 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. The Three Muskaroaches/New Follower

I really like this story and I love the way its going. Please keep writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! :)