Penname: Briannasamuels [Contact] Real name: Brianna
Member Since: Apr 12, 2015
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Summary:

Michael and Jessica have two beautiful children Prince and Paris. They are living in a beautiful home Neverland, Michael has a successful singing career and just completed the movie Moonwalker and Michael and Jessica are engaged!! Life is perfect for them!!

 

Until one day a Accident changes the Jackson life dramatically

 

Find out what happens to this Family's life  

Warning!: This Story does contain very strong Domestic Abuse but it will be based on a Medical Mental Illness which can happen so if you don't like a out of Character Michael do not read

you have been warned 


Categories: Horror, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!, Angst, Crime
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35835 Read Count: 11085
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2014 Updated: Aug 31, 2015
Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

- Updateeee 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Sep 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

OMGOODNESS I pray that he don't drop here and great update 

Summary:

Sometimes, life throws you things unexpectingly. You just have to take them as they are.

Orphaned at the young age of 15, Krystal Luther was forced to live a rough life. She lives working hard to support her and her little sister, Kyla. With this huge responsibility, she has matured herself and has created a hard wall strictly permitting anyone to get close to her...

Michael Jackson is one who is willing to break down that wall. 

Not So Tough.


Categories: Family, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18751 Read Count: 23540
[Report This] Published: Jun 24, 2014 Updated: May 31, 2015
Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: May 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Note.

Please continue 

Summary:

improved

Semaj is 17 with big dreams and goals but meeting 21 year old drug dealin', shit talkin', trouble makin', Michael Jackson was not planned. Her life turned a full 360 after the night she met him.

 

Not your average bad boy meets good girl story but see for yourself!

 


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Neglect
Series: The Gangsta Lovin' Series
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238258 Read Count: 62228
[Report This] Published: Sep 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 04, 2015
Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51- April Fool's for the Fool's

I thought she was really pregnant -__-



Author's Response:

Girl nooo. She's only 18, lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

You'd think working as an intern for Michael Jackson's Bad album would have its perks right?......WRONG! Here's my story of what happened that interesting winter of 1987......


Categories: Humor
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50567 Read Count: 181774
[Report This] Published: Sep 13, 2014 Updated: Dec 27, 2015
Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

- he's suck a dick to her



Author's Response:

I know :/

Summary:

This will not be your typical fluffy happily ever after sequel and will span over the next 10 years of their life. Can Michael really provide a 'normal' life for Nina and the children? How long will it last? 

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151856 Read Count: 20857
[Report This] Published: Oct 13, 2014 Updated: Jan 19, 2016
Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jan 04, 2016 Title: Chapter 54: Admitting the Problem

I'm just waiting for the sit down for all 3 of them , they just need to lay all their feelings out and do what's best for Maddox and Marcus just needs time , Nina had time to get over him he was still waiting for her in jail then come out to her to being married with kids they all need counseling 



Author's Response:

Marcus didn't get time to greive over his heartache and he doesn't have the closure that HE wants. It's driven him borderline crazy. They do all need counseling especially Michael.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Sep 28, 2015 Title: Chapter 45: The Prince has Arrived

That's so beautiful and so cute but why didn't they speak to her ? That's not right and I know she's happy with her new family but Marcus will always be Maddox father and it's not going to be easy if she cuts him out because Maddox wants to spend time with his dad but all in all this was a very special moment 



Author's Response:

They feel like she's taking him away from them and forcing him to live in the midwest. She won't cut Marcus out if Maddox wants him in his life, but she's done trying to force the civil union.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Bitter Feelings

- Michael new the risk of getting involved with nina, he knew that Maddox father would be back he just had to be prepared, with Michael comes fame and media hogs with nina comes Maddox and Marcus it's that simple they just need to understand each other's place , Marcus as Maddox father and ninas ex and Michael as ninas new man , I'm sorry but Michael can't dictate when Marcus see his son he has no place in that matter and maybe if Michael could see why Marcus feels the way he do he would calm down but Marcus needs to respect Michael as the new man in Nina and Maddox life and find himself and nice young lady and try to move on



Author's Response:

You're right, they both knew what came with the other so it's too late to be mad about it now. Nina did not handle dealing with Marcus while being in a relationship with Michael very well. Her lack of honesty made Michael distrust the whole situation right off the bat. But you're right. It's not Michael's place to dictate when Marcus gets to see his son and Marcus does need to move on though he has the right to be hurt there's nothing he can do about that.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Impossible

- is good my to take Marcus a while to accept Michael and ninas relationship but in due time he will , he just need time like who knows what he went through in jail and the fact that nina and his son was the only thing keeping him going just proves that he hurt but he has to slowly move on and Michael running away is just going to add more fuel to the fire , I understand your upset but leaving your pregnant wife and taking your daughters from there mother is a little bit extreme



Author's Response:

It would be a little extreme to snatch the girls out of bed and run off leaving her there behind. Michael does put Marcus down a lot and he did make a mistake in his past, but he could have been a little more understanding. Marcus also could have been a little more respectful too.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Father vs Stepfather II

- I understand Michael but damn be can't do that shit , it's not like Marcus is a dead beat he wants to spend time with his son and be there but the way Michael is going about it is all wrong , if it was the other way around he wouldn't like that and yea Marcus needs to accept the fact that Nina moved on but he's hurt it will take time 



Author's Response:

Both Marcus and Michael are in the wrong. This situation could have been handled way more maturely on both of their ends, but you're right, Marcus is hurt... Michael's just insanely jealous.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 36: April Fools

- Michael really needs to understand that , that is Maddox father no if ands or buts he was there before Michael and he can't be just shoved away because Michael doesnt like him

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Father vs Stepfather I

Michael isn't being nice that's her sons father Maddox needs his dad and Michael doesn't seem to get that and he's hurt that she left him smh they need to be a little bit more sensitive 



Author's Response:

Michael is always rude when it comes to Marcus, but Marcus hasn't shown Michael any respect either.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Dec 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 52: The Unthinkable

What Marcus did was absolutely wrong in every way and what Michael said was true but he doesn't have the right to remove Marcus from Maddox life , Nina and Marcus just need to have a serious talk with their lawyers and just work everything out and fix the problem and keeping Marcus away wouldn't help because Maddox loves him and Marcus loves him too and Maddox will get older and miss his dad if she takes him away you just can't replace someone's parent and it's not like Marcus is doing something to endanger his child , if anyone here had a child you know you just can't rip the child away from his dad unless it was something serious like life threatening and I understand Michael is upset but the way he deals with it is horrible 



Author's Response:

It's a tough situation to be in when stepparents and biological parents can't get along. Only bringing lawyers in can really solve that at this point. Marcus is being a bad influence on Maddox right now so that is grounds for Nina to keep him away from his father for now until he can come to terms with her marriage to Michael and respect it.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jun 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Old Flames and Bad Habits II

- I feel bad for Marcus 



Author's Response:

He's got it rough losing Nina and not being able to see Maddox. 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 55: The End

She cut Marcus out her sons life for Michael ? If anything it should be because at the moment he isn't being the best father to Maddox smh her priorities is all wrong now all her children don't have a father and she should just tell the judge that she wants temporary custody for bother Marcus and Michael don't delete them both just have that damn conversation with all three of them about what they need to do in order to raise their kids civilized