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What I show you is me.
But what I show her is Another Part of Me.
Categories: Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Attempted Suicide, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6508 Read Count: 1253
Date: Jul 01, 2016 Title: Another Part of Me
Wow wasn't expecting that but damn MJ I get that was a straight shock but he should of let her explain.Oh they'll meet again Michael will make sure of that when and where don't know but god only knows what he will do this just keeps getting better and better.
Date: Jun 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
And ohhh chile Michael know he look sexy in that GIF I can't with him licking those lips umph LOL.
Author's Response: girllll trust me it's going to be so much more, you'll probably faint.
Date: Dec 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: 3. 'Hallway Pt. II'
Man Michael really has a certain power over her he's her weakness for sure.I don't know what Anika is going to do she was strong and willful at first,but he just has a way of pulling her in.And I don't know what to make of Mike he obviously hasn't changed much but I'm wondering if those tears are real or if he's running game on her to get her back.Well it seems like she's caving can't wait to see if she gives in completely.
Author's Response: Of course, although she hates him she only loved and loves him.... no one else
Not your ordinary Billie Jean story. The kid is his son!
Chanel Evans was just your normal twenty-two year old girl. Until she had a one night stand with the King of Pop. The one night stand turned into continuous sexcapades. Chanel and Michael had fun. No rules and no attachment. Nothing but just good sex. Being friends with benefits can also come with consequences. Like when a baby pops in the picture! Can they raise their baby together and get along? Will love ever bloom for them? Or will they continue to see other people while the little bundle of joy is in the middle?
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Song Fics, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56896 Read Count: 7321
Date: Aug 26, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home?
Sorry I totally mispelled inhibitions wrong lol my spellings been off lately lol.
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooo!! And It's okay girl :)))
Date: Aug 26, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home?
Man leave it to the paparazzi to find them and start trouble,I can imagine how frightening it was for Chanel and Baby Mike.The media and the paps made Michaels life miserable and he hated them with a passion.But I'm glad he got them out in time,and he's right now that their known about they are never gonna have peace Michael being her baby's father is big news.And it seems to have brought them just a lil bit closer I swear Mike is a horny ass toad lol he seems to be good at getting Chanel into compromising positions and loosening her inabitions not that she complaining at all though.They gonna wind up doing the deed forreal if he has anything to say about it ,but man lil mikey is the ultimate cock-blocker for sure lol.Great chap as usual.
Author's Response:
Yes girl I couldn't even imagine going through all that mess. Yes girl. I honestly wish Michael didn't have to deal with that hectic crap either. You're right! Maybe this time they can come a little closer. It seems to be happening a little. And yes! Horny Mike is back on the radar. Something might happen soon *shrugs* 🤔 :)))) and Awww you're right! Lil Mikey is a cock blocker. His fussy self. And thanks again!
Date: Aug 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Mahogany
I'm really just loving these insights to more and more of Chanel's backstory and what lead her to make the decisions she did.Not to get too deep but I've always thought a person's foundation and their beginnings shape who they later become.Her being self-conscious of her darker skin and being picked on.Women even little girls are so harsh on eachother and critical ''Oh I'm prettier than you'' Oh my skin is lighter'' Oh my hair is straight not nappy''such a shame.but I'm glad she had her two besties in her corner.And Mike is still a trip a drunk trip but nonetheless maybe that to is what drew him and Chanel together he was bullied and severly picked on for his looks and appearances as well and the sexual attraction of course LOL but yeah great chapter girly and Baby Mike is beyond adorable just like his daddy.CANT WAIT FOR MORE.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you love them! Because you know from my other stories that I love flashbacks! I love showing you all the character's backgrounds. But hmmm you were on point taking about Chanel being picked on and how that could drew Michael in because of his childhood. I loved your input on that! Baby Mikey is just the cutest and more on the way girl!! Thanks again!
Date: Aug 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I swear Michael's thing is going to rot off some day LOL always f...ing them nasty hoes.I feel sorry for Chanel although they are not in a relationship he should have more respect for his baby-momma.He should have taken his latest hoe deluxe to a hotel room or something,I'm sorry but he just nasty.Seems to me Chanel's feelings for Michael are coming to the forefront she seemed to be on her way to falling in love with him.And that was just foul what Robert did selling out just to make a quick buck,like Michael said he could have come to him if it was that dire of a situation.I tell you this chapter got me feeling all kinds of things man I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
What the hell is wrong with Michael?! Things were so great until he decided to act like a hoe again! And you're right he should have respect for his baby mama and son too! And hmmmmmm are feelings being shown???????? They do need to talk and i'm putting the next chapter up today :))))
Date: Aug 08, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wooh the attraction and sexual chemistry between them is hott and off the charts.But I feel its deeper than that the ease they have with eachother the teasing and the flirting.Not to mention they have a kid together I love it,they know they want eachother.The time they shared with little mikey was soo sweet the perfect family moment lol.And of course I got a big kick outta her girls comin through and Diana razzin on Mike callin him 'cinnamin stick' damn I hollered off of that one.Also thanks soo much for the shout out much appreciated I've loved your stories from the jump,and your continued consistency in putting out story's when so many have come and gone.I will continue to support your work girly so keep um coming.
Author's Response:
Yes Chanel and Michael do have some hot chemistry between them. Lmaoo I think they can sense it but play it off🤔 Hmmm...
The little family moment they had with Mikey was cute! So sweet. And her girls are hilarious. That cinnamon stick joke had me too lmaooo poor Michael has to deal with their shenanigans.
And of course I gave you a shout out! Forever welcome. I just have so many ideas and I can't hold off long with my stories. I know there's stories on here that haven't been updated since 2010. I can't say they don't have important lives but I can't hold off long without telling y'all what's up. But writers block can be a big bitch too. I think I'm as excited as y'all when it comes to the updates lol Thanks again <333
Date: Aug 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Girl Oh My God!!!! You gave me life with this chapter I'm telling you.This had me rollin from beginning to end,first Diana is my girl she hella funny and got jokes for days.Who has a dream about McDonald's damn hahaha so flippin funny.And of course Mike and Chanel wooh that was some flashback gettin it on in a ferris wheel only Michael child that was soo hott.I'm sorry but they are so perfect together the chemistry ,animal attraction whatever you call it is just insane.And awww MIke wrote some songs inspired by her omg so freakin sweet they needs to be together i'm just saying girl i love this so much more please.
Author's Response:
I'm soooooo glad you love it girl! And Diana is something else. Her and her crazy ass dreams. I knew everybody would love that Ferris wheel flash back. That was hot and crazy right? Only Michael. Only Michael would be spontaneous and would want to do something like that. They do have a lot of attraction. We all can sense it but can they 🤔 And I'm updating today :)))
Date: Jul 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I loved getting to know more about Chanel and also the backstory of how she and Mike met.Michael is something in this story and he and Chanel play off eachother so well I'm really looking forward to seeing more of what will go down in they're world.And Chris and Michael's debate over KFC and Popeye's cracked me the hell up personally I prefer Popeye's just sayin LOL but yeah you got another good one on your hands girly and wether you decide to make it a short one or long i'll definately keep reading.
Author's Response:
Yes! You know I love flashbacks. 😠I always have. Michael really is something lmaooo and it's more to come with those too. And Michael and his damn KFC lmaoooo obsessed or nah? I like Popeyes chicken with KFC's biscuits lmaooo and thank you so much girl! And more on the way! <333
Date: Jul 25, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Always Team Mikey for sure but gurl I like this funny as all get out and Chanel is my girl she got spunk for days and seems she can give as good as she gets.
Author's Response:
Can't go wrong with Team Mikey! Lmaooo and yes girl! She has so much spunk! And it's more to come. Just wait and see :)))) Thanks!
Date: Sep 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 10: CHERing Feelings
O.K normally I would be rooting for them like fuck it yall been through some shit yall got a kid together and whatnot.But Michael getting on my damn nerves lol like he so freakin immmature and dumb as turd bricks,not to see that Chanel has feelins for his ass.And when Chris asks him ''Do you love her''? he's all ''Um I don't know'' lord give me a big rock to throw at his head.You don't know cause you keep fuckin them 10 cent hoes while she's living in your house with your baby fool.Ooh my pressure up and Chanel always seem to be doing the heavy lifting watching over his drunk ass making sure he ok he need to grow up and get his shit together or he gonna really lose a good woman and by the looks of it she ain't going nowhere cause her lovesss him lol.
Author's Response:
You are so right. Chanel might walk out that door.....or is she :P ??????? Lmaooo and I love how you all are mad at Michael. But he is being a total douche. He's being indecisive for no reason at all. Either you wanna be with a good woman or you just wanna fuck your hoes. It shouldn't be that hard to answer. He is so immature ugh! Can't wait until you all see the next chapter! Which is tonighhhhhhhht! Thanks for reviewing girl!
Date: Sep 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 11: The Date
O.K. First let me just say CamilleianPYT review killed me dead Lol so flippin funny,and so agree with him getting tested for STD's.And now all of a sudden he in love with that CoCo or should I say like cause he can't even say I love You.But girl you had me rollin this was hilarious Michael setting up Davon he know he wrong lol and Davon fallin for that shit like a damn simpleton.Mike riffling threw her underwear draw lord-have-mercy he is a mess.But what was soo extremely sweet was when lil Mikey said Da-Da for the first time although he still a lil cock- blocker bless his heart.The jury still out for me though yes they're together but my spidey senses just feel somethings off but will see if they can make it work though.Excellent writing as usual can't wait to see whats next for these two child they a mess Lol.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
HaHa Girl once again another great chapter!!! Now I know I kinda went in on Michael in my last review but I have to say,he is officially off my shit list Lol.Well at least for now nah just kiddin he has stepped it up my man came through.That was some major point moves with the all at once group text to his former hoes.Girl I died laughing lol that was a good one right there.But Chanel and Mike finally getting it together and that's alright with me.Lil Mikey can he get any more adorable 'po'baby having mommy withdrawal symptoms, he ain't use to sharing but that lil cock-blocker better get use to it cause Daddy gone want some more of Mommy on the regular lol.Glad they were able to get out for a lil one -on-one time and then back home for a lil sexy time.And the end when she learned they were going on tour with Michael well let's just say now that they are officially a couple she better expect shocks ,turns,and surprises I mean look who's her man.Great chapter Girly glad your back with more!!!
Author's Response:
Lmaooo everybody was iffy about Michael in the last chapter. Lmaooo and when he group messaged him I was dead lmaoooo all those hoes got the message. And Mikey is such a spoiled baby and Michael wasn't having that, that night. And we'll see how this couple is :) thanks again girl
Date: Nov 15, 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Chanel is something serious lol she don't play about her man she beat the mess outta ms. honey lord a mess lol.But yeah Baby Mikey is too adorable the way he was callin for his Da-Da.And Michael was like you only call me when you boom boom in your diaper hahaha hilarious and he know he wouldn't have it any other way he loves being a dad.And yeah what's up with him not tellin Chanel I love you hmmm is he really ready to commit or he may just be taking his time so he won't mess it up.But either way they seem to be in it to win it so he may drop the 'L' word pretty soon Chanel just need to be patient I mean he did just change his hoeish tendencies for her so he gone need a little more time to reform lol.But all in all great chapter girly can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Chanel does not play with her man at all lmaooo throws them hands every chance she gets. And Mikey is soooo adorable (I love having baby characters) and Michael really needs to tell her those words! Chanel doesn't even have to stay with a man that doesn't love her! *harah* lmaooo thanks for always reviewing girl <3333