Penname: loyalpyt [Contact] Real name: kayla leann
Member Since: Aug 09, 2014
Membership status: Member
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I WILL NOT TOLERATE ANY HATERS!  IF YOU TRY AND HATE ON ME, YOU WILL BE REPORTED! I hope you enjoy my stories!


One day you'll lead the charge, you'll lead the band. -Eric Church 'Mr. Misunderstood'


#keeppounding RIP RAJ ( my great uncle) 8/4/46-9/8/15


#Cruz2016 #dabonem #FreeKesha


Age: 18-21
Gender: Female
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Reviews by loyalpyt
Summary:

Imagine running away from your family after you have endured enough drama and abuse that came from the house. You stay with a few friends and you get your own apartment and get a job. Suddenly, you are fired, envicted and you're now on the streets, searching for work. One night, you meet a man that becomes your boss and you start selling your body to the men at night for money. You are also a pleasure for you boss. Then a night goes by and a handsome man watches you and then uses you for his pleasure. But he started to deeply fall in love with you and you have done the same. However, there's no love in this business



Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17189 Read Count: 2635
[Report This] Published: Jan 04, 2015 Updated: Feb 15, 2015
Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Jan 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Surprised Part 4

ADDICTIING UPDATE IT!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Jan 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Business Pleasure

awesome story so far you are doing great hunty!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thnaks love. I really appreciate that. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Business Pleasure

omg too addicting!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing 

Summary: Feature

We have all seen those stories that get no comments and those stories that regularly get a handful of comments per chapter. This series will focus on providing tips on how to be one of the latter, not the former!

reading

Newest Segment: Developing Minor and Supporting Characters


Categories: Admin Only
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26875 Read Count: 108651
[Report This] Published: Jan 19, 2015 Updated: Sep 11, 2017
Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Basics

bad spelling, not today Satan!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Writing about Sensitive Issues

Sensitive issues make me sad and a little scared.

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Developing a strong female lead character - UPDATED

@redone, you are awesome! This is helping a lot!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Feb 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Topic Ideas?

WRITER'S BLOCK PLEASE!!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL 'k

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Feb 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Topic Ideas?

how about slash stories. Those seem to scare me

Author's Response:

Hmm. I don't know how I would address that one to be honest. I get why some people like them and I don't think they are a travesty to FF. I think the same rules apply to them as to straight fic. At the same time, they are not my cup of tea.

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Feb 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Let's Talk About Sex

I felt kind of awkward writing my first sex scene and I still kind of do so thanks for this segment!

Author's Response:

Hope it helps!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Feb 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Going back to Square 1

thanks for taking me back to creative writing lol

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Portraying Michael: The basics

taking notes on him counts right?

Author's Response:

Taking notes on him?

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: It's the little things that count

thanks this has helped hun!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Feb 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Resources for information about Michael - Updated 2/7

redone, sorry about that other comment, I was half awake at the time. Are there any good Youtube videos to watch about MJ's life

Author's Response:

Not that I'm aware of. Clips aren't the best sources of in depth information. Sound bytes are what got him into trouble :/

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: The Female Lead - A call for suggestions!

This will help majorly thanks a lot @Redone, you are awesome hunty!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed
Date: Feb 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Resources for information about Michael - Updated 2/7

would the J.Randy Taraborellli book work?

Author's Response:

I'd hesitate on that one. He lacks integrity in many aspects of his writing.