Penname: Livahute [Contact] Real name: Liana
Member Since: Mar 20, 2014
Membership status: Member
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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

Michael was so alone, he wanted someone who was interested in Michael not Michael Jackson. Until one day during an authograph signing he meets a young woman named Veronica. He knew there was something about her that he just could not forget, when he saw her he knew he had to know more. Will they get together? Will their age tear them apart? Or will their insecurities get the best of them? Follow Michael and Veroncia through happiness, laughter, heartbreak, and passion....
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Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Song Fics
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27023 Read Count: 6872
[Report This] Published: Jan 20, 2013 Updated: Mar 17, 2014
Reviewer: Livahute Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Mar 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 In Paris part 3

Oh my god, what the hell was that :o

First, I'm a french university student trying to get her english degree and read those stories about MJ really help me :3

I had to say that your story was really interesting to read, I was like " OH MY GOD, that's so good :D " I love the way you describe Michael( Loving, charming, sexy, skill ( :3 ) attentive and the way he takes the lead ) and Veronica ( Fragile, sexy, natural ) but I'm really sorry to say that but I hate the end, I don't understant why he acts like that and why they broke like that, my god I was disappointed :( 
But I want to thank you for this amazing first part ( From chapter to 13 ) I will remember this first part as moving and interresting , it made me dream :) 

Please forgive some mistakes I could make, I'm just a french xD



Author's Response: Hi hun! First off I want to sincerely thank you from the bottom of my heart for complimenting my story like that; it truly makes me feel great! :) But I just want to tell you that this last part was NOT the ending of the story. I apologize for not specifying that in the latest chapter, but I was just trying to get it posted since I haven't updated in months. I am truly sorry to hear you hated the latest part, but if you please hang in their with me it will all tie in. Sorry again for the mix up. I will go back and edit specifying that. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Livahute Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Welcome to New York

Oh there will be another chapter, sorry i didn't understand ( how stupid am I ? :o )
In fact, I would to spend my time to read your story but you have to write more and more chapter :p
I would like to encourage you to make it because you have the talent :D
And make a happy end xD 

Your first fan, Liana ;)



Author's Response: Oh my gosh Liana honey, you are so sweet! Thank you so much for your understanding and support. It is difficult for me to continue to write when my work gets reviewed very little which gives me not motivation :"( But maybe if you would read and review my chapters maybe that would help. LOL I will try, I want to make this story a longer one but you have to put up with my sad endings and cliffhangers ;) You really have touched my heart with your words which has really gave me my motivation again!

Reviewer: Livahute Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Welcome to New York

To be completely sincere, i going to read your entire story tonight 'cause it really make my day wonderful and my english better :3
I will read it everyday if it can make you write ore and more chapter :3
And just for you I will review all the chapter to say you what i liked in it :D

Liana 



Author's Response: Oh my Lord, you are just so sweet! If you were any sweeter you would melt! ;) Hun thank you so much! I would love to hear your feedback on my chapters along with anything I could improve with my story :) So happy to hear it helps you with your English (which I think is very good). Cannot wait to hear your thoughts!

Reviewer: Livahute Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - First time

I love this chapter :D I love the way you describe them, Michael si so sexy and I actually imagine him like that, I guess we share this picture of him :D
Then, the way he takes care of Veronica, so so cute and adorable !
And you have the talent to write some sexy scenes, I could never describe such a scene, at least not in english, so I congratulate you for making us climb on curtains ( I don't even know if you can say that in english, sorry xD )

Liana :3 

Summary:

Victoria LeVaugh has done pretty well for herself as a former child actress. And generally, everyone she's grown up with in the business, she adores. Well, almost everyone. She grew up around Michael Jackson too, but the problem is, she's not too fond of him, and he's not too fond of her either. She finds him weird and full of himself, and he finds her to be an everlasting pain in his side. But can two long-time enemies become friends, or even something more? Find out in Passion's Insanity.

MJ and Victoria


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 189400 Read Count: 21605
[Report This] Published: Apr 21, 2013 Updated: Jun 03, 2017
Reviewer: Livahute Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My god what a beautiful story, girl you make me dream :o
I'll read your story every day 'cause it's really good, my favorite in fact :D

I'm french and I didn't understand all the swearwords but it was good xD 
I noticed that Victoria is always sleepy in this story, we have to deal with Sleepy the dwarf xD 

I really hope you will " publish " soon, I cannot wait :O

Ps : Excuse me if I made some mistakes ! With love, Liana :3



Author's Response:

Thank You! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Lol you're good, swear words are just their way of expressing their emotions lol. Yes Victoria likes to sleep a lot but she find herself busy a lot of the time looooooool. She'll try to not sleep so much ;-) 

Reviewer: Livahute Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hope you'll update sooooooon :DD !

Summary:

 

 

Can’t Have the Sweet Without the Bitter.....

Warnings:

M/M relationships and sexual content (If this doesn’t ring your bell then please don’t read this story). Credit to Scribbles-Skylar.

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Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75985 Read Count: 12102
[Report This] Published: Mar 09, 2014 Updated: May 22, 2014
Reviewer: Livahute Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god I'm so disappointed I will explain you why :/ ...

I found the story interessting, the character of Michael was perfect, you really know how to write, how to make such girl like me totally in love with Michael, I promise :D I liked the sexual allusions you put in it, I loved the way Michael is actually acting *.* 

I've read the first chapter without knowing it was a gay story ( I'm french, I didn't know what M/M story was ) and to my great misfortune i cannot imagine Michael as being gay ( I have no problem with gay and lesbian, I love them ! ) but not Michael, So I stopped reading and that's WHY I am disappointed because your story seemed to be amazing but I had to keep my picture of Michael :)

Though, you're a great writer, I promise and respect your work, hoping your readers to honor you and your story :)

Liana From France 

Ps: Don't pay attention to the mistakes if ever there was :)



Author's Response:

Oh excuses moi, mademoiselle.

Je suis désolé que cette histoire vous a fait déçu. Merci pour l'examen :)

Summary:

So. I just accidently deleted "A Teachers Love" I'm pretty numb right now. I'm shaken and torn, and I feel so bad. I meant to delete an Update chapter and instead I deleted the entire story. Words can not describe how I feel right now. All 200 reviews, 20 Chapters, 15,000 reads of my story are gone. I don't even know what to do. Please read this small update and tell me what you guys want me to do. Should I continue the story? Start a whole new story, with a new girl, but still have it a  teacher-student story? Or just a brand new story?

Or should I stop writing?

mj

 

 


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233 Read Count: 177
[Report This] Published: Apr 16, 2014 Updated: Apr 17, 2014
Reviewer: Livahute Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Teacher's Love

Too sad :/ 
I think you could write another story with another girl but he could be his teacher or not ( depending what you want ! ) maybe if you write another story you would have more imagination and you could forget your mistake and enjoy writing another famous fan fiction :D 

I will be there to read it of course, just DON'T STOP WRITING ! ;)

Liana :3

Reviewer: Livahute Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Teacher's Love

Too sad :/ 
I think you could write another story with another girl but he could be his teacher or not ( depending what you want ! ) maybe if you write another story you would have more imagination and you could forget your mistake and enjoy writing another famous fan fiction :D 

I will be there to read it of course, just DON'T STOP WRITING ! ;)

Liana :3