Penname: sydneylovesmike20 [Contact] Real name: Sydney
Member Since: Nov 25, 2013
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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
Real Name: Sydney
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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

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Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: When A Stranger Calls

Woah, this is really getting intense now! Is it true that he has Ria's heart in the freezer?! That's fucking crazy! I'm also wondering if Baylee is really his kid? A whole lot of drama coming!! Continue please!!



Author's Response:

Yup it's true. He does have her heart. She was missing a few things when she was found and that was one of the things. We will find out in the upcoming chapters about who Baylee really belongs to. More to come Bb just hold on with me!! <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: May 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Interview...

It's ok! Read my two stories; they are called 'neighbors becoming lovers' and 'do you really love?'



Author's Response:

I'll check them out when I get the time. :) <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: May 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Boxed In

This is getting good! I'm still confused on something; were Michael and Kamaria married and have Bayley? Also, did she really die or did Kenny tell Michael that she died? Can you please explain it to me?



Author's Response:

Yes Michael and Kamaria were actually married. She really did die when Baylee was only a few months old. Michael hired Marley as Baylee's nanny not long after. Baylee is now 4 going on 5 years old so it's been a while since Kamaria passed away. I hope this clears up the confusion. Anything else jus ask and I'm here for Ya! :) <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)

Woah, that is dark!! What did the une in the chapter mean?



Author's Response:

I hope it's not to to dark!! The Une means 1 in French. There will be a part 2 to this chapter after the next Michael and Marley. <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Real Eyes

That sex scene was very hot! I'm very happy things went well with her parents! I think they should tell the authorities of what they found out. I think Marley should face her ex instead of running away! Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. ;). Yes it's great her parents like Michael. It's just one less thing they have to stress over. Now Michael has to do good by Mar or else he gets his legs broken. Lolllll. They should definitely tell the authorities. We will see if she stays and confronts her Ex. <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: May 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Boxed In

I have another question. So the ria Michael is seeing now, is this a different ria or Kamaria?



Author's Response:

Ria and Kamaria are the same person from the past. In the present he's dating Marley the nanny he hired for Baylee after Ria died. The story is going back and forth from the past to the present. This chapter is the present time. Any chapter with Ria is in the past. <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Feb 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: It's Understood

This story is getting good butnI am confused with something. He married a girl named Kamaria and he also had a best friend named Kamaria? I'm a little confused on who's who. Can you explain to me who's who.

Author's Response:

Welcome to the story!!! I'm sorry you're confused. There is only one Kamaria in the story. The Kamaria that is Michael's best friend is the same person he marries. So just one Kamaria. If you're confused about anything else don't hesitate to ask. <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: May 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Interview...

But it says in the summary that he reunites with her. I'm still confused with that.



Author's Response:

Michael Ria and Kenny grew up together since they were all 4 years old. Michael left Indiana for college in England. So he left then behind. Ria started dating Kenny and It broke Michael's heart so he never went back to Indiana. He moved to New York for work. (this is all taking place in the past) Ria leaves Kenny because he beat her up and it's after that she reunites with Michael in New York. So that's when they get together get married and have Baylee and soon after gets  killed (Still all in the past)  That's the quickest synopsis I could give. I hope it helped but if not The best thing to do to get a full understanding of Michael and Ria is reread all the chapters that have to do with the past. They are the even numbered chapters. <333

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: May 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Soft Then Vile

Ooo the suspense is killing me! Also, I thought you said all the Ria chapters are even chapters and it's an odd chapter, just wondering?



Author's Response:

Ahhh my bad they are odds. Sorry about that. <333

Summary:

She saw him at the bar and she knew she wanted him tonight but he wasn't who she thought he was...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2195 Read Count: 1529
[Report This] Published: Nov 21, 2014 Updated: Nov 28, 2014
Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Nov 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Kiss me all over my body ...

Very hot! Also when are you gonna do your roleplay?

Author's Response:

thank you so much and i don't know i hope soon

Summary:

"Till Death do us part," is what is always said in the vows of marriage. It's true in the sense that the death of your companion would also bring death of your relationship. I know, that sounded a bit depressing, and a bit horrifying actually.

But maybe, this might not always be the case. Perhaps the soul will live on to help the ones in need. Perhaps, the soul willingly stays on Earth because he/she has created an unbreakable bond with a soul from the living.

When Michael Jackson's star fell on June 25th 2009, the world endured a great pain and a great loss. For his fans, he was their idol, for his family, he was a brother and a father. But for one growing girl who dwelled in a childhood of loneliness and despair, he was her saviour, and her mentor for life. Side by side, his star rose once more.


Categories: Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57528 Read Count: 2978
[Report This] Published: Dec 21, 2014 Updated: Feb 25, 2016
Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

God that was so hot!! Continue!



Author's Response:

Oh wow, you actually liked THAT bit. Thank goodness, thank you so much!!! You have no idea how awkward I felt writing that... probably won't read that bit ever. ever. again. But yes, stay tuned for.. whenever i make a new chapter (pls don't lose hope on me lol) :D 

Summary: Michael was an insecure person. He hated his smile and they way he looked. Kayla was also insecure too. They soon meet and become best friends. Will they find comfort in each other? This will be in the late Bad era but it's modern day!
Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Song Fics, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4985 Read Count: 12980
[Report This] Published: Dec 26, 2014 Updated: Apr 19, 2015
Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Apr 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Being With You Is Better Than Anything

Great chapter! Also, when will the next chapter of burnin it down be posted?



Author's Response: soon

Summary:

Sydney auditions to be the lead girl in the video for "In The Closet." Michael starts to fall for her as soon as they shoot the video. Will they stay friends or lead in something more. Based off of "Burnin It Down" by Jason Aldean.


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Fantasy, Romance, Song Fics
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: stories that are requested
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8042 Read Count: 3193
[Report This] Published: Dec 27, 2014 Updated: Jun 14, 2015
Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2015 Title: Chapter 14: The Massage

Hot and loving at the same time! Loved it girl!



Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: May 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Love Me Harder

God that was so hot! Loved it!



Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed
Date: May 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: A/N

No. Can it be the wedding chapter please? ;)



Author's Response: ok then