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Set in the era of Thriller / Bad Era, Michael has just moved out of Hayvenhurst and meets an unlikely friend in Jade Riley, an employee at the Beverly Hills Hilton. Even though, they get off to a rocky start, Michael starts to learn about friendship, love, and committment with some major hiccups along the way.
Categories: Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 196922 Read Count: 370481
Date: Feb 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
If anyone got sick of hearing it, I'd send them to a doctor.
Author's Response:
if anyone got sick of hearing it, itd be because they command a punch in the dick hole.
Date: Mar 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I love the heart to heart moment with Joseph. It gave his character more depth and it didn't feel falsely supportive.
I hope nothing happens while Michael is asleep. Jade's symptoms created a sense of foreboding.
Date: Feb 18, 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Damn - I'm a little frightened to think of what gave you the idea to have her dad walk in on him....
Author's Response:
Hahaha. Just how that would tarnish anyone's first time meeting your boyfriend.
Date: Feb 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I love how natural your scenes are. They just flow.
Date: Feb 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
“Something that you’re hiding from the world?” I joked with him.
If you were to trust LSA posters 100%, there'd be a room full of 'em
Author's Response:
Hahaha yeah. Morons
Date: Feb 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Well, this was a walk in emo-memory land.
Date: Feb 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
“Hi, you’ve reached Jade, 818 5328788. I’m currently screening my calls. So leave a message… or don’t. See if I care.”
And the melodramatic emo-answering message award goes to.....Jade! Congratulations, you won all black clothing, a Marilyn Manson CD, and a fake ID saying that you are 15/16!
Author's Response:
I'm going to admit that the early character of Jade was based on my own little jaded behaviours as a umlateteen (coughtwentycough) ... in hindsight its totally lame, but I stopped writing this story for a long time when it got to about chapter 18, a couple yrs passed and I picked it back up again and she lost her shitty snivelly attitude and became less of a pain in the ass (as did I, I hope).
Also, I forgot, obviously that as an American, the expression "piss party" probably doesnt have the same meaning LOL (just imagined a bunch of people all pissing in to a bucket in a circle) .... a drinking party is what it is.
Date: Feb 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I guess Jade’s bluntness was something that probably perturbed others who didn’t quite know what to make of her.
Gee, I don't have a hint of a clue as to what that feels like.
Date: Feb 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
How did the American take on "piss-party" come to include a bucket. In my mind's eye, I saw no bucket.
Ah. Then I can relate. I was an emo-ish youngin. No black on black, but I listened to "Paint it Black" a bit too much (the Vanessa Carlton version).
Author's Response:
LOL you just ruined it all by adding the Vanessa Carlton version.... I used to listen to the ACTUAL song hahaha. I was more emo than you ... or so it would seem! :P
Date: Feb 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Damnit. I just realized that I never reviewed this story when I read it. This means I will have to reread and review. jkfdasj;
Author's Response:
you're such a jerk... theres about ... 87 chapters so.....
This passion burns inside of me.
Burn is loosely based on the songs ‘In the Closet’ and ‘She Drives Me Wild’, true stories and my very active imagination.
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A love story that takes place after a few months after the Bad Tour has ended.
On her way home from a boring day at work Kayden runs into Dorien, a criminal from her past. John, an old acquaintance, comes to her rescue and is forced to remove his disguise revealing himself as Michael Jackson. Michael has an obvious attraction to Kayden and can barely control himself around her. At first all she wants is friendship, but when a friendly trip to Las Vegas turns sinful, she finds herself in a steamy secret relationship filled with adventures in love and lust.
But like any other couple, they hit a rough patch and just as things are starting to look up, secrets from Kayden’s past threaten to ruin her life and sanity.
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I hope you guys like the new banner !! I finally figured out who I originally used to represent Kayden, so I hope you like it. And thank you guys for the support and positive responses to this fic, I really appreciate it.
Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70970 Read Count: 14169
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | Off Limits
Stop hatin' all over yourself. It was a corny ending, and sometimes chapters need to have corny endings. They are best used on special occassions, such as this chapter ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, but sometimes I don't want the scenes to feel too corny, like they're not possible.
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | S-L-E-E-P
That's what he gets for not listening to her.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're invested in my characters lol one of my goals when writing this, is to have people call Kayden, Kade.
Exactly, if he woulda just got out his feeling for a minute there wouldn't have been an arguement in the first place
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | I Cut The Wrong Cord
How can he expect her to call him first if he doesn't even answer the phone when she called him OR call her back before coming?! pffft. Girl, you are getting me emotionally invested in these characters....
Author's Response:
The logic of a man is something I'll never understand lol but I know his pride was hurt. , so he acted an ass lol