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Baby Be Mine by Gabby7 Rated: MA starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 415]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Find out what happens when Gabby has an unusual encounter with Michael and he becomes apart of her everyday life.

 

He continues to stand where he is and speaks in the most angelic voice I've ever heard. "Ma'am are you ok?"

I manage to gather myself over to him, desperately grabbing him by the arms.

"Please sir, can you help me. I need to go to the hospital. "

He stares at me wiith weariness as he stumbles over his words. "Oh, uh...well..."

A prickling pain shoots through my body, causing me to shake with fear. This pain is unbearable, yet in its essence, it's a bitter sweet moment.

I stare at him pleadingly. "Please sir, I'm in labor!"

 


Categories: Award Winning, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145448 Read Count: 24297
[Report This] Published: Sep 02, 2015 Updated: Feb 01, 2020
Reviewer: Marri Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

DUNN DUNN DUN! I glanced over this chapter since I remember a lot about it. But Michael should have known better. He could have awaken her to inform her. 

Great update!



Author's Response:

Lol, thanks! You glanced over it? 😑 lol....jk. But you know how post partum can be. I think she overreacted a bit. Hell, he was only trying to feed her...lmao! 

Reviewer: Marri Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

“Oh my gosh! Do I smell? Cause I haven’t took a shower in two days, because I’m afraid of leaving him unattended… but I’ve been doing wash ups…”

That line has always been one of my favorite parts. I laugh everytime! And I think Michael making a vow to being MJ's surrogate father is rather cute. But it makes me wonder what will entail during this commitment. I feel everything won't be all peaches and cream. 

Reviewer: Marri Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Since I know what her reaction will be already, I'm anticipating them getting to that point and their discussion about everything. 

Reviewer: Marri Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now this chapter was just a teaser and you know we need another one like soon! I wanted Michael to stay but then get up and leave in the middle of the night to show that he was still pissed at her, but then she should have known better! Levi is just the screw up guy and that's what he's been doing in each chapter, there to screw things up! UGH! Update soon please

Summary: Past Featured Story

Winners Posted!

remembering

 

6/25 is a day of sadness and a day of reflection. In honor of Michael's legacy and the authors who continue to bring us beautiful reminders of Michael, we bring you the Remembering Michael MJFiction Awards.

Awards: A graphic for the winning story summary + labeled as "Award Winning"


Categories: Award Winning
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1431 Read Count: 718
[Report This] Published: Jun 05, 2016 Updated: Jul 02, 2016
Reviewer: Marri Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: And the Nominees Are

1.TheBodyguard -Honeytothebee

2. Killing Me Softly - Gabby7

3. Baby be Mine- Gabby7

4. Confessions - Moni89

5. Cradle to the grave- TutThreeSeven

6. Dreamwalker _ema21

7. Let of them all Materialize- Lenneta16

8. Fear of Flying - TInker13

9. YEar 93 - BrandyandMJ

10. Everlast

11.MJ in Love (The Whole True Story) - Dare to Dream

12. Fallin - mermaidbyheart



Author's Response:

Counted!

Reviewer: Marri Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Run-Offs!

  1. He Wasn't Like That, but Damn! (Best OOC Michael)
    • The Bodyguard - HoneytotheBee

     

  2. A Different Reality (Best AU)
    • I'm Only Human - Tinker13

     

  3. You Really Captured the Era (Best Era)
    • Baby Be Mine - Gabby7

     

  4. My Stomach is in Knots (Best use of Drama)
    • I'm Only Human - Tinker13

     

  5. My Heart is Melting (Best use of Romance)
    • Fear of Flying - Tinker13

     

  6. I Wish This One Shot Would Go On! (Best One-Shot)
    • Inside His Mind - Illusion

     

  7. This Long Fic (100,000+ words) Must Continue! (Best Long Fic)
    • I'm Only Human - Tinker13

     

  8. I'd Read It Again (Best Completed Fiction)
    • Janus, I Have Loved - Everlast 

     

  9. You Had Me at Your Banner (Best Banner)
    • The Priest - KaraBeloved 
  10. Look at You Now! (Most Improved Author)
    • HoneyToTheBee

     

  11. The Chemistry! (Best Couple)
    • MJ in Love: The Whole True Story - DareToDream

     



Author's Response:

Counted!

Summary:

🎉 Birthday wishes for Michael! 🎉

 

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Add a chapter with your wishes - the minimum word count has been lowered briefly for this thread :) 

 


Categories: Journal
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1714 Read Count: 254
[Report This] Published: Aug 29, 2017 Updated: Aug 29, 2018
Reviewer: Marri Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, so as you know, Gabby, Michael was my first boyfriend. Literally. The first guy I had feelings for, and I was nothing but a young child. The love I had for him and the love I have for him now continues. There are times where I may feel lost or need a little exuberance and Michael is one of the people that can give me that. Through reading, writing, listening to his music and watching his videos. I've seen a number of his videos and every time I see them, I'm staring at them as if it's my first time seeing them.

I remember when I was younger, I thought Michael was some kind of magical person. As we all know, deep down, he had that magic touch. He was/is everything. I find my son asking about Michael nowdays, and it makes me happy. I think I'm ready to show him the Thriller video and all my other videos of Michael.

I found my daughter (she's 8 months) stop playing with her toys, just to watch Michael on the tv earlier as one of his music videos played. It meant a lot to me. 

It also means a lot that I can share certain things with certain people about Michael. My fiance even told me, "Today is Michael's birthday!" as if I didn't know! LOL. 

I can't just pick one of Michael's song as a favorite, but if I HAD to, I would pick Human Nature. 

 

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Michael!