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Find out what happens when Gabby has an unusual encounter with Michael and he becomes apart of her everyday life.
He continues to stand where he is and speaks in the most angelic voice I've ever heard. "Ma'am are you ok?"
I manage to gather myself over to him, desperately grabbing him by the arms.
"Please sir, can you help me. I need to go to the hospital. "
He stares at me wiith weariness as he stumbles over his words. "Oh, uh...well..."
A prickling pain shoots through my body, causing me to shake with fear. This pain is unbearable, yet in its essence, it's a bitter sweet moment.
I stare at him pleadingly. "Please sir, I'm in labor!"
Categories: Award Winning, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145448 Read Count: 24297
Date: Sep 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 34
Something just occurred to me. I hope the way Mae is acting doesn't scare Michael away from Gabby and Mj. That will just break my heart
Author's Response:
We shall see 😈
Date: Apr 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29
What was that about? Why was Michael eager to leave? Gabby been in Michaels aprartment and someone coming to the door but has the wrong apartment? Something sounds fishy. Something is up and I can tell that something major is probably about to go down. On another note, how wonderful is it that Gabby can trust Katherine to watch Mj. Michael has stepped into the role of a father wonderfully and he picked right up and moved right on in and is making everything right. For that, Gabby should be grateful. I also was thinking, maybe she should go be out on some antidepressants. She still seems a bit melancholy over certain situations. I feel that Michael is doing everything and maybe she should show more gratitude than what she has been. I understand that she's reserved because of previous relationships, but damn. I also feel that with Michael working a lot, eventually it might become an issue. I just hope that it isn't a big issue for Gabby.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27
Michael meet's Levi, him and Gabby get intimate, and then he asks her to move in with him?
I"m glad these two are back on good terms. Levi was definitely an ass, and MIchael had every right in my opinion to go check things out and find out how Levi really was. It helped MIchael come to senses about Gabby and thst he couldnt leave her and MJ stranded.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
And thank you for the review! Yes, going to visit Levi definitely helped him come to his senses. Levi is an asshole...and anyone can smell it miles away...lol. But I definitely happy they're back together again, let's just hope there will be no more popping up from anyone.
Date: Feb 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22
Where's the emoji button when you need one?!?! These two sharing a kiss? Levy back in the picture? This should be exciting!
Author's Response:
Very exciting and the best is yet to come! lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Her working for him might be a good idea at that moment, but them mixing business with their relationship could cause some problems. She'll have access to more than just a bit of information.
Date: Dec 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15- part 2
Michael may not need to know everything, but he definitely needs to know that the child he is caring for father may or may not pop up. He needs to be prepared for any and everything that comes his way.
Date: Dec 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
She should most definitely tell Michael about Levi. It's going to be much confusion when Levi come back into the picture. I can only imagine Michael's reaction at this point.
Date: Sep 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hey, I'm glad you bought this back! Hopefully we can get caught up with the newest chapter!
Date: Sep 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Remembering this chapter, I love that Michael helped with the delivery. And then the fact that it was on his birthday! Oh, and the baby is named after Michael. Lol.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reviewing sissy!
Date: Sep 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
That's my bestfriend, that's my bestfriend! LOL. I love that Michael has stepped up to the plate. Despite how Levi is described, I'm visioning him as this tall, buff, athletic kind of guy... but him leaving his responsibilities, married or not, Michael is more of a man than Levi will ever be throughout this story!
Date: Sep 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Michael reading this parenting books shows how committed he is to this! And also his conversation with Katherine shows me that he needs/ wants his mother's support through this.
And who the hell is answering the phone? She invited someone else over that quick?
Author's Response:
Yea, I think he's looking for her support too in all of this. And I glad to see him taking to this parenting thing. I think he'll make an excellent father for MJ.
Date: Oct 28, 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
The tension is definitely there! And I loved how he just gave her money to buy herself something.
Date: Oct 28, 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
These two have a lot in common, especially with their past relationship to horrible people. If anything, plus little MJ, this should bring the two of them together!
Author's Response:
As always, thank you sissy for your reviews!
Date: Apr 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30
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Gilbert! How can you end right there? When I got to the end, I kept scrolling looking for more! So it's out! Jeanine is Michael's side piece and Levi's wife? Gabby just can't escape Levi, huh? I can see the shit unfolding right before my eyes and before you even post the next chapter. I had to tell my kids to be quiet when I read the last line cause I swear I heard Jeanine herself say those words out loud. Girl I had to sip my (wine) and look away briefly! DAMN! Update soon please!!
Author's Response:
Marri Moe, you know I love a good cliff hanger 😂😂 and yes, it's definitely about to be some drama! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: Nov 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 37
I was checking and realized that the party had never really gotten started and that hopefully when you update, Jermaine will be in the next chapter! We really need to get to the bottom of this with him! What if this was intentional! For some reason i believe that he knew that the four of them were linked some how