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Summary: Karina Reynolds, a 29 year old woman with stage 2 melanoma, has one true wish: to meet Michael Jackson. Little does she know, her wish is about to come true. What will become of Karina and Michael?
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9373 Read Count: 1371
[Report This] Published: Jun 06, 2010 Updated: Aug 05, 2010
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Date: Jul 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue! You are doing really well with this story! Update soon please!

Summary:

Dionne Phillips is a 26 year old widow. She feels as though her life is over after her husband dies tragically. After her friends urge her to start over, she starts living again and resumes her job as a chef, where she unknowingly cooks for a celebrity when he visits Sacramento. She receives the opportunity of a lifetime and learns how to live and love again.


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42539 Read Count: 3084
[Report This] Published: Jul 12, 2010 Updated: Aug 10, 2010
Reviewer: deenajones Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Dionne Phillips

I LOVE this story! It's quite addicting! Please write more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I apprecoate you for reading snd your review. Just posted another chapter and will be working on another one soon!

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Date: Aug 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Christmas

I knew that Mike was going to propose! Damn that slut Anya. Can't wait to see what's going to happen.

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Date: Aug 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- I Like It

Girl. Short chapter, but it got steamy..need more! Lol!

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Date: Aug 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Weekend in Boston

Aww..wonderful chapter girl. I'm so excited about the Christmas get together! I wonder what will unfold! Keep it up girl!

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Date: Jul 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Michael's Trip

I love Dionne and Michael together. I also love Dionne's relationship with the children. Such a lovely little family. You are an amazing writer! Please write more!

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Date: Jul 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Last Day in Las Vegas

This chapter was so great! It must be love =) . Write more please! I love your story!

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Date: Jul 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Dionne's Birthday

They are so adorable together! Please write more!



Author's Response:

Awwww! Thank you. I will be writing more and hoping to post by Saturday. Thank you for reading!

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Date: Aug 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Dionne Phillips

How cute can this story be? Aw. Mike feels at home with her family. They've all been so loving and accepting of Mike and his children. Now Prince is calling her "mommy." Paris is next! How sweet. Great chapter girl. Love the story!

Author's Response:

Thanks girlie! Your feedback means the world to me. Please stay tuned for the next chapter :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

In life, Keisha Devin has to wear many hats: Twin, Lawyer, Best Friend, Daughter, and many more.  Her life has always been in order and she has always been control of her destiny, but what happens when a handsome superstar comes along and rocks her world in more ways than one? 


Categories: Romance, Song Fics, Adult
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190119 Read Count: 105307
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2010 Updated: Oct 03, 2011
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Date: Aug 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Aww! Well, I always love your chapters really!
Keisha's pregnant! That's exciting, but kind of bad timing! Still, they deserve a baby, at least after all of their hard work. But 18 months of touring? Kind of sad really! Can't wait to see how you'll amaze me with the upcoming chapters!

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Date: Aug 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

This chapter brought tears to my eyes! I agree with Mike for the most part. If Keisha decides to go on tour with Mike, how would they hide her from the public? Sometimes Keisha reminds me of myself...always gotta think logically, never capriciously. And Roxy is too cynical! Can't wait for the next chapter though girl.

Author's Response:

Hooray for 70!!  I swear, Deena, you're the greatest!

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Date: Aug 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Lmao. I can see why she's Michael in a dress. Ha. Kind of favors him in the video. and Keisha went jet black? I can imagine its such a dramatic, gorgeous look! Tati better get lost! This one's married! I bet Keisha is going to go to rehearsals so fly. And Roxy...ugh..I'm so disappointed in her.

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Date: Aug 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Omg. That was soo sweet. Aww...he's going to be a wonderful father and husband..and legend! Forget Frank..

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Date: Aug 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: Aug 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Hey girl! Can we please get an update tonight? I can't wait to see what happens =) !