Penname: Annies_NOTokmj [Contact] Real name: Christine
Member Since: Jul 03, 2012
Membership status: Member
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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

A Sequel to Surrogate


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Angst, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21927 Read Count: 4115
[Report This] Published: Aug 03, 2011 Updated: May 03, 2012
Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Working Out

I really hope this story will be updated. I hate reading a story and it's left unfinished.

Summary: Past Featured Story


FORMERLY TITLED I WOULD LIKE TO CALL IT BEAUTY!!!!!!!


Looking at your hands. Hands can understand. Waiting for the chance. Just to hold your hand. A touch of rain and sunshine made the flower grow into a lovely smile that's blooming. And it's so clear to me that you're a dream come true There's no way that I'll be losing. And golden lady, golden lady, I'd like to go there.



Olivia Harris is beautiful, young painter/model from a small town in Virginia. Her whole world get turned upside down when she gets the opportunity to paint for Michael Jackson in 1985 and they quickly all head over heels in love with him. Let's see how Olivia handles living in his world and how Michael handles his sweet new romance.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34783 Read Count: 14614
[Report This] Published: Jan 08, 2012 Updated: Sep 03, 2013
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Date: Jan 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Suprises Part 2.

what the hell!? Now, you have gotten the "d" up, but won't get it down!? That's some bs right there, lol

Summary:

Being gay is tough in a world where there is so much hate surrounding it. It's even harder when you're famous.

Michael Jackson and Adam Lambert have to go through their superstar lives living a lie. Living in the closet. It works for four years without any issues, but after awhile people start to wonder why they're always together.

Now, the two of them have to deal with the media hounding on them for supposedly being gay and they have to deal with all of the hateful words that are targeted at homosexuals.

Will Adam and Michael collapse under the pressure or will they be able to stay strong and stick together?

Will they ever come out of the closet?

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250+ reviews! So awesome, I can't even explain it! Honestly, it's so overwhelming! Thank you thank you thank you! <3 :D

 

 Haha, just imagine me in Quincy's place for a second... that's how I feel about all the reads/reviews/favorites, so thank you again :D

And Adam... Just admit it, you want a piece of that sexy ;)


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Slash, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 87 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 165392 Read Count: 21248
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2012 Updated: May 28, 2013
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Date: Dec 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Future Regrets

oh boy...shits about to hit the fan 100!

Author's Response:

Lol! That's probably the most accurate way to word it ;)

 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Future Regrets

aww man! fucking someone else definitely isn't going to make things better! Adam can't be serious...Mike has still been faithful to him, but he goes out and cheats. Michael isn't to blame for his actions now, they're his acts, and his alone. SMDH. I think he's messed up his family and relationship now with MJ, for a quick fuck. I can imagine how hurt Mike will be and feel about this. Shit, look at all that he almost lost, just for being with Adam.

I need another update today please. This got me TWISTED!

Author's Response:

Agreed, cheating NEVER makes anything better. And yeah, Mike's definitely not gunna like it (who would?) but we won't see that for awhile. You'll see that things will start to peak back up, but then it'll all come crashing down all because of what Adam's done...

Haha! At least you're left wanting more ;)

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Date: Jan 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75: How Could I?

Adam is dead ass wrong. He knows it too. Why compound it by sitting your ass there looking Michael in the eyes, and still lie!? The truth is only going to hurt him so much more, since he is trying to make it work, and planning this trip to smooth things over. When Mike finds out, he needs to hit Adam in his damn mouth! It's one thing to lie behind my back, but its another thing to lie right to my face.

Author's Response:

Agreed. What you said is 100% true; the fact that he's lying to his face now will make everything even more painful for when it does come out.

Thanks for the review! :D

Summary:

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Michael Jackson and Bianca Jackson were once the ideal couple. Now things have changed for the worse. After 10 years together, all they do is fight, make love, then fight some more. Finally convinced by family and friends, they decide to get some help. But as demons and secrets from their past come into the light, will there love be strong enough to last?

*Contains Adult Content*

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Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult, Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150896 Read Count: 44867
[Report This] Published: Jun 07, 2012 Updated: Mar 24, 2013
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Date: Nov 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Appointment #1

@Ian_music: you go hard in the paint girl, hard! Lol.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 61: *Taking A Poll*

Man...lol. I need an update or something! Feeling all kinds of lonely with this cold weather! Lol

Author: I'm glad you like my reviews! :) I'm just honest, and say what people are sometimes afraid to say. Love your writing and imagination. Girl, it blows my mind! ;)

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Wow... I don't know what to say, and that is a first for me , lol. The drama and pain and heartache is really about to kick into high hear for Mike. Bianca is moving on with her life, and he'll have to watch it and hear about it constantly. Talk about, running salt in a wound, lol. But, he deserves it honestly. I'm hoping that this divorce, his addiction, and their Co-parenting responsibilities force MJ to become a better man, and though Bianca moves on with Shawn, the man Mike becomes, can be the man she can come to love again, and remarry. Time has a way of doing things. I should know, I can testify to it!

I know you said their is going to be a SEQUEL,so maybe all hope isn't lost. Sigh. I hate the breakup of any family, but sometimes it's necessary, to make the family stronger, and allow growth of all involved.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 61: *Taking A Poll*

@Author: ok, girl. The suspense is killing me! What were the poll results, and can we get an update!? :) I'm missing this story, and all nervous about what happens next! Lol

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed
Date: Nov 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 61: *Taking A Poll*

Ooh... @Iam_music: I LOVE your whole outline you just posted! Sounds excellent, and would definitely make this store EXPLODE! However, it would be good to see how Mikes life changes once he hits rock bottom.

Author: I think we have a WINNER! All that @iam_music just posted today! Lol. I love it.

Author's Response:

Lol ikr. You are just as funny. I love to read all your reviews.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Appointment #1

@Iam_music: your idea for #4 is quite interesting indeed! However, I think we have enough babies mixed up in this shit! But, your imagination is GOOD, and it will definitely make Mike BURN, but I'm hoping all of this makes him a better man in the sequel, and that he can show/prove this to Bianca. Who knows, hope springs eternal. :)

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 61: *Taking A Poll*

Shoot, #1 again, and #4. I'll even do #3, but that breaks my heart, BC his addiction could kill him!

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Date: Nov 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 58: And It Kills Me

Girl...the shit is hitting the fan! You mean to tell me, this picture is of him and Kelly kissing!? I'm with Bee on this, just how long have y'all been fucking, and what you got to say about this picture motherfuckers!? You hugged up with this hoe kissing in pictures like y'all a couple! I need the date this was taken, cause if I'm Bee, MJ's about to get his ass whooped up in this hotel room! I suspect Kelly had someone take the picture, but still, MJ should have known better...this hoe on your lap now!?

Girl...more please! I can't even...he better talk some sense, or it's ON!

I think Bill is still trying to tell Bee about MJ's addiction, AGAIN.

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Date: Nov 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 58: And It Kills Me

Edit to add: Hold the fuck up! MJ and Bee got married in 1988, if this picture is from 1987, like MJ claims, he was cheating on Bianca before they even got married! Oh hell no! I am seriously pissed over here, lol. How do you explain you hugged up kissing another hoe, the year BEFORE we got married, while we were engaged!? Hell naw!

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Date: Nov 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Pictures From A Distant Past

I don't even know what to say! He has been lieing all this time, and now Bee has really left him. Sad. Can you update again today please, this is too good to stop right here.