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Michael Jackson and Quincy Jones are close friends for years. They're like father and son and trust each other deeply.
But one day, Michael will meet the one who will become everything to him. A young and beautiful woman...who will be Quincy's youngest daughter Kayliah, 17 years old.
Will they take the risk to live this forbidden love?...Will Quincy discover who is the one who make his daughter happy?
Categories: Romance, Adult, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83870 Read Count: 24454
Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Haha I love Kayliah! She's so funny! Janet too "Pick up some girls on your way home!!"
Okay, I think that the two of them are going to continue hanging out and stuff, but I wonder what Quincy will think because there's definitely an age difference between the two of them!
Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oooh they're gunna get together aren't they? I bet they are but they're gunna hide it from Quincy!! Excuse me while I read the next chapter...
Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ooh I thought that Quincy was going to get pissed at Michael because he let Kayliah kiss him...
Great story! Really well written too!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews you left me, I appreciated :)
You know as long as it will be on the cheek, Quincy will be ok with this lol. I'm happy you find I'm writing well, it's important to me as I'm French :)
Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh my God! Every chapter I keep thinking that they're going to get together!! They always seem to get close but neither of them take that extra step to admit it completely!
Date: Jun 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oooooooooooohhh! Same bed. C'mon something has to happen! They're totally going to get together soon! I can feel it! (hopefully my feeling is right)
You're French? Ca c'est bon. Haha, I speak French but I'm not francophone or anything. But I'm going on a French Exchange to France for 3 months next year and I'm getting a French exchange student coming here in a month and a half. I'm going to be like, 20 minutes away from Grenoble when I go there. SO stoked!
And yeah, your writing is really good considering that you are French! I honestly wouldn't have guessed, I would have thought that you were english if you hadn't mentionned it.
Good story! Can't wait to read more when I get the time! I've been slacking a bit :/ But I'm determined to catch up. I sha'll! >:D
Author's Response:
Oh it's really great that you're going in France...I hope you'll love your stay here.
Thank you so much about your compliment on my writing.I'm happy to see that I don't do too much mistakes in English.
Take your time to read sweety, I'm gonna read your update of Gay Factor right now :)
Date: Jul 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Aww! :( Poor Kayliah and Michael! They totally love each other but Michael is just too afraid of what Quincy will say and the fact that Kayliah is only 17! I hope that they can figure it out!
Date: Jul 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww! It's so sad reading this because they would be so perfect together!
Date: Jul 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Awwwwwwwwwwwww! YAY!!!! Finally! I've been waiting for that forever!
But now that they're together I wonder what Quincy will say... and Peggy! And I wonder what everyone else will say abouth the age difference!
Great job! Love this chapter! So sweet!
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Whoa! Even I was shocked at the fact that Kay is a virgin!
I wonder of they actually will be able to wait or if their wanting for each other will take complete control...
Great chapter! Update soon :)
Author's Response:
I know it can be really surprising lol...
Hmm we'll have to see but it will become hard for them...The temptation will be hard to handle...
Thank you for your nice review as usual :)
Date: Oct 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Aww! I loved this! They're such a cute couple I love it! Haha I loved Michael's reaction when she said it was her first try at cooking XD
I love Michael and Kayliah together <3
Don't worry about the writer's block thing, I'll be waiting here for when it comes to you :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much sweety :-)...Yeah I loved this part too lol
I'll do my best to write this weekend and update as soon as possible.
Date: Jul 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh wow, sorry about that! My review totally got cut off there! That was weird... lol! Good thing I checked! I was like; I wonder if she replied... so I went to check and I just see; Aw! And I'm sitting here like; what the heck??
Anyway, here's what I also said... ahem;
I hope that the whole Brooke thing doesn't get in the way of their relationship, even though they have talked it through. I have a feeling that Brooke is going to pull something on Michael, and that's going to leak to the public and then Kayliah is going to see it and then a huge fight is going to break out! :O
I'm also wondering if Quincy is getting more and more suspicious... haven't heard a lot from him, but I think that we will be soon...
Hopefully they don't cut this one off! Lol! That was weird. :/
Author's Response:
No worry about your review girl even if I have to admit that I didn't understand it at first lol.
About Brooke, we'll see...She's gonna do something which will make Michael think about the two relationships...and take a decision...
About Quincy he will be present as his wife Peggy and they'll become more suspicious of course. I just don't want to make them interfer in every chapter...Just from time to time, showing their doubts and suspicions. Michael and Kayliah's realtionship also need to be build before drama come.
Anyway, I just saw that I was in your favorite author.I'm very proud of this and I really liked the comment you wrote about me.It was very nice and really made me happy.I hope you'll enjoy more stories from in the future.Thank you very much for your support :)
Date: Jul 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Aw!
Author's Response:
OK lol.
Date: Jul 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Aw! Yay! I'm really glad that they've made up now and that Kayliah now understands why Michael did what he did!
I was afraid that someone was going to see them at their dinner! Thank God I was wrong!
Author's Response:
She understood but she will have another hard time later...You'll see...
It would have been an interesting twist but not for now lol.
Thank you for reading and reviewing each time :)
Date: Jul 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
:O O....M....J.... Did I actually just read that?!? Ohh dammnn... I think Michael has screwed up this time. Even though he's doing it for all the right reasons, I think Kayliah will only look at the wrong reasons for dating Brooke.
Date: Jul 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod!
They've got to be more careful because Quincy is starting to get suspicious... if that relationship with Brooke breaks then Quicny will have more reason to think that Michael and Kay are together!
I have a feeling they won't be able to wait 3 more months...
Anxious for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Even if they will be in an hurry to do it, they're obliged to wait 3 months cause of the law...But it will be hard, temptations and growing desire will give them hard times lol.
About Quincy, he will become suspicious...A lot of little things will make him doubt several times...Just let's see how our lovebirds will take his doubts away :)