Penname: YANAgirl07 [Contact] Real name: Kourteny
Member Since: Nov 26, 2011
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Summary:

 

Michael Jackson and Quincy Jones are close friends for years. They're like father and son and trust each other deeply.

But one day, Michael will meet the one who will become everything to him. A young and beautiful woman...who will be Quincy's youngest daughter Kayliah, 17 years old.

Will they take the risk to live this forbidden love?...Will Quincy discover who is the one who make his daughter happy?

 

 


Categories: Romance, Adult, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83870 Read Count: 23857
[Report This] Published: Mar 27, 2012 Updated: Apr 16, 2013
Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awwwwwww!!! :'( I hope that they're able to make up soon! They were so cute together! I hope Michael dumps Brooke and confesses his relationship with Kayliah. It would just be better that way!



Author's Response:

Well confessing his relationship with Kayliah could bring a lot of troubles to him, for she's a minor...Being 24, he's an outlaw...And without thinking about Quincy.

You'll see what will happen to our cute couple very soon :)

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Date: Jul 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aw! Yay! I'm really glad that they've made up now and that Kayliah now understands why Michael did what he did!
I was afraid that someone was going to see them at their dinner! Thank God I was wrong!

Author's Response:

She understood but she will have another hard time later...You'll see...

It would have been an interesting twist but not for now lol.

Thank you for reading and reviewing each time :)

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Date: Jul 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aw!

Author's Response:

OK lol.

 

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Date: Jul 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow, sorry about that! My review totally got cut off there! That was weird... lol! Good thing I checked! I was like; I wonder if she replied... so I went to check and I just see; Aw! And I'm sitting here like; what the heck??

Anyway, here's what I also said... ahem;

I hope that the whole Brooke thing doesn't get in the way of their relationship, even though they have talked it through. I have a feeling that Brooke is going to pull something on Michael, and that's going to leak to the public and then Kayliah is going to see it and then a huge fight is going to break out! :O

I'm also wondering if Quincy is getting more and more suspicious... haven't heard a lot from him, but I think that we will be soon...

Hopefully they don't cut this one off! Lol! That was weird. :/



Author's Response:

No worry about your review girl even if I have to admit that I didn't understand it at first lol.

About Brooke, we'll see...She's gonna do something which will make Michael think about the two relationships...and take a decision...

About Quincy he will be present as his wife Peggy and they'll become more suspicious of course. I just don't want to make them interfer in every chapter...Just from time to time, showing their doubts and suspicions. Michael and Kayliah's realtionship also need to be build before drama come.

Anyway, I just saw that I was in your favorite author.I'm very proud of this and I really liked the comment you wrote about me.It was very nice and really made me happy.I hope you'll enjoy more stories from in the future.Thank you very much for your support :)

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Date: Oct 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Aww! I loved this! They're such a cute couple I love it! Haha I loved Michael's reaction when she said it was her first try at cooking XD

I love Michael and Kayliah together <3

Don't worry about the writer's block thing, I'll be waiting here for when it comes to you :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much sweety :-)...Yeah I loved this part too lol

I'll do my best to write this weekend and update as soon as possible.

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Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Whoa! Even I was shocked at the fact that Kay is a virgin!
I wonder of they actually will be able to wait or if their wanting for each other will take complete control...
Great chapter! Update soon :)

Author's Response:

I know it can be really surprising lol...

Hmm we'll have to see but it will become hard for them...The temptation will be hard to handle...

Thank you for your nice review as usual :)

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Date: Aug 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm glad that Michael broke up with Brooke, I just hope that Brooke doesn't find out that he was dating Kayliah at the sane time because she might feel used...
I think Brooke and Michael breaking up will make Kayliah feel more comfortable and be good for their relationship but it might alao bring suspicion...
Can't wait for the next update :)

Author's Response:

Kayliah will be sure more comfortable and their relationship will grow stronger, without saying too much things lol.

Suspicions will come from time to time...especially from Kayliah's side.

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Date: Aug 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Haha poor Michael!! That must have been awkward! :/
I knew someone would come home while they were together, at least it was just Peggy, because if it was Quincy well... we all know how protective dads can be ;)
Great chapter as always!! :D

Author's Response:

Yeah really awkward. Being seen in underwear by the mother of his girl lol.

Quincy would have been really more suspicious than Peggy. Oh yeah dads are really protective, maybe too much lol.

Thank you very much for your support girl ;)

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Date: Aug 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oooooh! I hope that Randy doesn't ruin what Michael and Kayliah share! I think that Kayliah's love for Michael is sincere, I just think that Michael is going to get really jealous! I hope that he doesn't do anything stupid :/
Great update as always!! Keep 'em coming! XD

Author's Response:

Kaylaih's love for Michael is really sincere as Michael's one for her. Michael is going to be jealous in the next chapter and will do something not very appropriate...But I have nothing more to say lol.

Thank you!I'm happy you still like the updates!

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Date: Sep 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I really liked this chapter! It showed Michael and Kay's love really well! Michael is sooo in love with her!!
I hope that that little lie Michael told Randy doesn't come back to bite him in the butt :/ And I hope that he can keep their relationship under wraps for as long as he needs to. I have a feeling he'll crack...

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it so much. Michael realised how much he was in love with her because he was scared to lose her because of Randy.

He will succeed to keep their relationship under wraps (at least for the next chapters I wrote lol) but it will be sometime difficult.

Thank for keeping reading girl :-)

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Date: Sep 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Argh! I thought they were gunna get it on! I was so excited! But I guess she's still 17 so I won't be seeing any of that for awhile ;)

The dinner was cute! I feel Kayliah's pain when she couldn't use the chopsticks, lmao! I'm horrible with those! I usually just eat it with my fingers. More efficient that way ;)

Oooh Quincy's really suspicious now! I hope he doesn't find out... and if he does I hope he doesn't get angry because Michael and Kayliah are SOOOO cute together! <3 My favourite couple on this site! XD



Author's Response:

No not yet.Kayliah isn't 18 yet but she will very soon ;)...But I planned an idea that won't be appreciated by my readers I guess lol.

Me too, that's why I wrote this part about the chopsticks.I tried many times but it never worked with me lol. I really feel like Kayliah when there are chopsticks around lol.

Yeah he gets suspicious...I mean really suspicious.You'll see in the next chapter.

Really your favorite couple on this site? Well I'm more than honored and happy :-) Thank you girl!!

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Date: Sep 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ooh I knew she'd get scared about it! I can understand though, I mean, not only will the intimacy changed in their relationship, but so will a lot of things. Like you mentioned, it won't be illegal anymore so they won't have to worry as much.

Lmao! The part with janet reading off the list had me smiling and laughing! I can only imagine how awkward that would be! At least it was Janet though, and they're close so it probably wasn't as awkward as I thought it was. Haha!

So good, one of my faourite stories ever! You write so well! You don't rush through anything and you move at a really good pace! Plus the grammar and stuff is pretty good! I really like this story; a lot! I'll be waiting anxiously for the next update! :D



Author's Response:

Yeah I think it's pretty normal she's scared about this. A lot of things changed after a first time.

I liked to write this part with Janet.In my stories, Janet is always the one to who Michael is the closest with and there are always funny moments like this.

I'm really happy you like this story so much.Thank you very much.About the grammar and stuff, I try to do my best, being french but fortunately it seems to work pretty well lol.

I like to take the things slow sometimes. I know people are waiting for sex scenes and sexy things but I don't write sex scenes for writing a sex scene lol. I think that a story can be good without a lot of sex scenes...But don't worry, that don't mean my story won't contain naughty scenes lol.

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Date: Oct 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Adult chapter

Omj that definitely wasn't what I expected! :O But I think the fact that they didn't necessarily go to the end might have been good in a way. It proved to Kayliah that Michael doesn't just want her for the sex, but because he really loves her (like he said) <3

Lmao I like how you added that it's not from a personal experience

The wait between updates can be good though, because it just makes me more excited when I see it in the recents! :D



Author's Response:

Yeah I know, I wanted to try different things and their age difference was something that allow me this. At first, I wanted Michael to say he loves her when they were having sex but it could be too expected.

Yeah it was my funny line of the day lol...You'll think I'm kidding but on another website, a girl asked me this in a joke you know. And I was like, they will really think I used my own experience? xD lol

It won't be as long as it was this time anymore.It's just that I got family's stuff last week and I catched a very bad cold to my cousin's wedding this weekend. Now I'm fine and back with my updates! lol

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Date: Oct 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Aww! <3 I love how sweet Michael is. I really like Brianna too! She's such a great sister to Kay!

I'm happy that Kayliah has realised now that's it's normal and nothing to be embarrassed about! I think everythign will go by smoother the next time ! :D



Author's Response:

Yeah Michael is so sweet...I can't write another Michael than that. I would like to try in a next fanfic but I don't know if I can't write a no cute Michael lol.

Now she totally understood it and she just has to let her fear aside and trust Michael. He proved her she can do it so we'll see next time.

Brianna is great indeed :-)

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed
Date: Nov 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Adult chapter

Aww! <3 I loved this! It was so sweet and hot! So good! I love love love love this! I'm glad that it worked well and that Michael went slow for her and took it easy, making sure that she was comfortable XD



Author's Response:

Thank you sweety, I'm happy you loved it!

Yeah he took everything slow and she was comfortable, even more than that lol. She had a perfect first time I think lol