Penname: YANAgirl07 [Contact] Real name: Kourteny
Member Since: Nov 26, 2011
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Summary:

 

Michael Jackson and Quincy Jones are close friends for years. They're like father and son and trust each other deeply.

But one day, Michael will meet the one who will become everything to him. A young and beautiful woman...who will be Quincy's youngest daughter Kayliah, 17 years old.

Will they take the risk to live this forbidden love?...Will Quincy discover who is the one who make his daughter happy?

 

 


Categories: Romance, Adult, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83870 Read Count: 23857
[Report This] Published: Mar 27, 2012 Updated: Apr 16, 2013
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Date: Jun 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Noooo! They were so close! I was like "oh my god yes! Yes! They're gunna kiss!" And then they didn't. Michael is so worried about her being too young and what Quincy will think he isn't able to tell Kayliah how he feels :(
And I love how you add pictures into your story, it makes it easier to visualise everything. LOVE Michael's shirt! XD

Author's Response:

Yeah they were so close...But you have to wait a little lol.

I think adding pictures in some situations can help too, I love to put some when I think it's needed...Michael's shirt is priceless, yes and right in the theme lol.

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Date: Jun 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooh he's starting to admit it! And lol if his brothers try to hit on Kayliah... oh God.
I hope they get together soon! They're so cute!!

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Date: Jun 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! I like it already! I'm definitely going to try and catch up so I'll be ready for the next update :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much girl!! :)...I hope you'll like the following chapters :)

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Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Haha I love Kayliah! She's so funny! Janet too "Pick up some girls on your way home!!"
Okay, I think that the two of them are going to continue hanging out and stuff, but I wonder what Quincy will think because there's definitely an age difference between the two of them!

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Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oooh they're gunna get together aren't they? I bet they are but they're gunna hide it from Quincy!! Excuse me while I read the next chapter...

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Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ooh I thought that Quincy was going to get pissed at Michael because he let Kayliah kiss him...
Great story! Really well written too!

Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews you left me, I appreciated :)

You know as long as it will be on the cheek, Quincy will be ok with this lol. I'm happy you find I'm writing well, it's important to me as I'm French :)

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Date: Jun 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh my God! Every chapter I keep thinking that they're going to get together!! They always seem to get close but neither of them take that extra step to admit it completely!

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Date: Jun 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oooooooooooohhh! Same bed. C'mon something has to happen! They're totally going to get together soon! I can feel it! (hopefully my feeling is right)

You're French? Ca c'est bon. Haha, I speak French but I'm not francophone or anything. But I'm going on a French Exchange to France for 3 months next year and I'm getting a French exchange student coming here in a month and a half. I'm going to be like, 20 minutes away from Grenoble when I go there. SO stoked!

And yeah, your writing is really good considering that you are French! I honestly wouldn't have guessed, I would have thought that you were english if you hadn't mentionned it.

Good story! Can't wait to read more when I get the time! I've been slacking a bit :/ But I'm determined to catch up. I sha'll! >:D



Author's Response:

Oh it's really great that you're going in France...I hope you'll love your stay here.

Thank you so much about your compliment on my writing.I'm happy to see that I don't do too much mistakes in English.

Take your time to read sweety, I'm gonna read your update of Gay Factor right now :)

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Date: Jul 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aww! :( Poor Kayliah and Michael! They totally love each other but Michael is just too afraid of what Quincy will say and the fact that Kayliah is only 17! I hope that they can figure it out!

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Date: Jul 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww! It's so sad reading this because they would be so perfect together!

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Date: Jul 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod!

They've got to be more careful because Quincy is starting to get suspicious... if that relationship with Brooke breaks then Quicny will have more reason to think that Michael and Kay are together!

I have a feeling they won't be able to wait 3 more months...

Anxious for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

Even if they will be in an hurry to do it, they're obliged to wait 3 months cause of the law...But it will be hard, temptations and growing desire will give them hard times lol.

About Quincy, he will become suspicious...A lot of little things will make him doubt several times...Just let's see how our lovebirds will take his doubts away :)

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Date: Jul 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! YAY!!!! Finally! I've been waiting for that forever!

But now that they're together I wonder what Quincy will say... and Peggy! And I wonder what everyone else will say abouth the age difference!

Great job! Love this chapter! So sweet!

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Date: Jul 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ooooooooooooooh.... I hope Brianna doesn't spill anything! If Quincy finds out they're going to be in trouble. I don't think Quincy is going to like to find out that Michael adn Kayliah are dating. On the other hand in might be better if they just tell Quincy because at least they're being honest, maybe Quincy will prefer the honesty then to have them tryign to hide the relationship from him...

I guess I'll have to keep readign and see :D

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Date: Jul 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Lol at Latoya's comment about calling Branca or Frank sexy! Haha! That made me laugh! Fantastic job! Love this story! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much girl!!!

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Date: Jul 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

:O O....M....J.... Did I actually just read that?!? Ohh dammnn... I think Michael has screwed up this time. Even though he's doing it for all the right reasons, I think Kayliah will only look at the wrong reasons for dating Brooke.