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Ours by ThrillerEraSlave Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Young wife and husband: Courtney and Michael Jackson have been wanting a child since November 18th 1982, the day they got married. After trying and trying repeatedly after a whole year. God has answered their prayers. December of 1983 finally, Courtney has been blessed. She is now pregnant with Michael's [first] child. Follow their heartwarming story in coping with the symptoms of pregnancy; getting prepared for the time of their life.

 

Nov 14, 2012, 5:27 PM

 

Dec 22, 2012, 8:56 PM

 

>>>New Chapter O7.O5.15


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death, Domestic Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17275 Read Count: 3868
[Report This] Published: Nov 14, 2012 Updated: Jul 05, 2015
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Date: Feb 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: || Chapter 6: Recovery ||

Aw :) I'm glad things are better now after the hospital :D Michael and Courtney are so cute XD omg I love them together so much you can't even comprehend! XD

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Date: Mar 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: || Chapter 7: Tumbling Over ||

:O

Omg.... what?!?!?!

This I did not expect!!!

Omg, Michael is such a dick when he's drunk! I think Courteny should leave him! He gets drunk and almost fucks some stripper, hits her, and gets them in an accident (probably going to end up killing the baby) SCREW HIM! She'll have the support from a bunch of people since she wasn't the one who did anythign wrong!

She should seriously leave him.

Great chapter thoguh (despite the sadness and anger) really well written! :)

Summary:

 

Michael Jackson had everything a man could dream...He was a megastar, had a beautiful wife...But in reality, he felt lonely, misunderstood and his marriage wasn't as perfect as it has seems...

 

But a new employee will change his life, more than he could expect...Bringing Michael to wonder...Who does he want to be?

 

Warning : Homosexual content!


Categories: Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, Romance, Adult, Slash, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95848 Read Count: 45905
[Report This] Published: Dec 02, 2012 Updated: Jul 29, 2014
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Date: Apr 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Oh this story definitely isn't boring! The anticipation makes it exciting!! :D

Although - not gunna lie - I'm desperately waiting for the physical stuff.

Lisa-Marie in the morning when she made the sly little remakrs about Jake's pleasures... that made me laugh! :P

 



Author's Response:

Yeah so you must be really excited for it now lol. When the chapter will be up, I think that you'll be jumping all around lol.

I know, if I was a reader I will be too lol.

I think it was funny too...If only she knew what it meant and what's happening between her husband and Jake, she won't be laughing that much lol.

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Date: Dec 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Ooh, I wonder what he did back when he was in the gang with Sly... :O

Hopefully whatever he did won't come back to haunt him later on in the story and possibly jeopardise his friendship with Michael. I hope Sly doesn't pop up and screw things up.

 



Author's Response:

It's not really what he did but more what happened when he was in his gang.

He will haunt him because it's haunting him right now...It won't jeopardise his friendship with Michael, it will be even a thing that will bring them closer. About Sly...I don't know yet.

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Date: Dec 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oooooh  l love it already!! The first chapter is amazing! I liked how blunt Jake was when he said that he was gay. Too bad Bobby didn't believe him :(

Gunna read the next chapter! I'm already hooked! XD

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Date: Dec 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I find it hard to believe that Michael only hired Jake because he has will... I'm pretty dure Michael noticed that he also has good looks ;)

This is soo good! And don't worry about the updates! It'll be worth the wait. :D

One thing that I'll tell you in case you want to incorporate it in your writing, but when you write in english, and when you're writing times, you write it like 8:30pm. I think it was in the first chapter you wrote 8pm30. Just thought I'd let you know, that way you can keep improving :DD

Love this though, I love this so much. I think I'm only reading one slash story right now, so I was happy when you told me that you were going to be writing a slash story! :D



Author's Response:

Hmm well it's hard to believe but for now, it's only for this reason...Michael is married and even if he has crisis in his couple, he's still straight...

Thank you for your advice about writing times...Being French, I often wondered about this point...I'll remember the lesson girl :DD

Thank you very much for loving it that much already...I hope you'll keep writing and I won't disappoint you with the next chapters. You're such an amazing writer especially in slash stories so...

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Date: Dec 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Lmao! This chapter had me laughing! I shouldn't be laughing because I guess this was Jake's first time as a PA but still! I couldn't help it! I feel kinda bad for him though since he was havign such a hard time with everything and the other people were laughing at him! :(

I really respect Michael for doing and sayign what he did. He's a good boss :)

And LMAO at Daniella! Haha, discreetly bending over just a little more and totally flirting with him! I loved Jake's comment too! XD

I love this story so much! <33 I've already added it to my favorites! Haha! it's just that good! XD

And thank you for what you said in the reply to my earlier review! I appreciate that lots! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah it's his first time as a PA so all those things are really new for him...

Michael being sweet and understanding as always...Like Jake said when he went on his brother's grave, his boss is cool.

Jake's comment made me laugh...I wanted to create a character who speak explicitly sometimes...Without revealing too much, because he will be a part of the story, his past has something to do with this lol.

Thank you for adding it to your favorites and you're welcome for my reply...I really meant it :)

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Date: Dec 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Aw :'( I thought this was going to be sweet until everything just went wrong there!

I don't blame Michael for wanting it go be sweet, but at the same time I can't blame Lisa either... I wouldn't mind having Michael pretend to be a cop ;) lol! I sure wouldn't kick him out of bed! lol!

Poor Michael, on the couch :(

Love this! I was so happy when I saw that it was updated! :DD



Author's Response:

Yeah Michael is a romantic and for him all those role playing games and whild sex as Lisa called it isn't everything...Sometimes, he would like to just make love to his wife in a simple way...Not with the risk to break the bed each time lol.

But like you, I wouldn't mind Michael being a cop and punishing me lol...Just imagine him with nothing but the cap...:faint:

Thank you sweety...I'll try to update soon!!

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Date: Jan 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

"Sure...If your hands are clean..."

^^lmao! I loved that part! XD Haha that's like people with their iPhones nowadays ;D

Ooooh Michael!! Embrace the fact that you TOTALLY dig him!! It's okay; he's better than Lisa Marie anyway!

I love this more and more with each chapter. ^-^ So good 



Author's Response:

I loved it this part too lol...It shows that Jake take Michael for a normal and not loke the King of Pop or even his boss.If he wants to say something to him, he says it.

Yeah you're sooo true, people with their iPhones are like this lol.

Totally agree, Jake is soooooooooo much better and hotter than Lisa Marie...We just have to let the time do its thing lol

Thank you very much and I think you'll like the next chapters, especially one I just wrote, which will be a funny one.

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Date: Jan 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Ugh. Lisa is so rude! Michael should leave her for Jake! <3 :DDD Haha, but I guess it would be a little early for that yes? Haha, I'll have to wait before I get to see any of that happening I'm sure :P

Oh! Jake told him! I'm glad Michael took it so well! And I loved Jake's comment about the glitter and the voice! XD It made me smile :)

Lol at Jake's naughty thoughts... ;) It's okay Jake, we were all imaging that too ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah it's a little early for this lol. But who told you that Michael will leave her for Jake?...Oops I should stop talking lol.

Michael is very open minded so he doesn't care about this. Love this part too, I thought it could be funny.

Oh yeah, if I saw a king size bed in Michael's bedroom with Michael next to me, I think I will have a lot of naughty thoughts lol.

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Date: Jan 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Michael! Why must you be so nice? Good job for Michael for trying to make things work between him and Lisa Marie, but at the same time I hope he leaves her soon. he needs to be a free man so he can be with Jake!!

I'm excited for the Saturday that Jake's bringing Michael into his world :D Can't wait to see what Michael thinks of it all. I think he'll like it more than he expects ;)



Author's Response:

He' so nice because it's Michael lol. He's in love with his wife so...But maybe he will find some lacking things into Jake...We'll see ;)

It won't be something too "gay" for begin with, something gay but classy. And I think you're right, Michael will probably like it more than he thought and will enjoy Jake's company a lot...

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Date: Jan 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Ooh, I wonder what's going to happen when Michael wakes up. I wonder what he thinks of the little experience XD

And you know what Michael? You may have been drunk, but deep down you know you belong with Jake. Don't kid yourself.

Haha! Priscillia... Eugh... She's like an older version of Lisa-Marie!! "that witch" is right!!

Haha! the scene with the two men and Michael made me laugh so hard! I could totally picture Michael just giggling, not even realising what those guys' intentions were! lmao!



Author's Response:

You can wonder but you will never find what's going to happen when Michael wakes up lol. I planned something pretty interesting lol.

Yeah but it's the power of the alcohol lol...Sometimes it can make you say some truths you wouldn't have said if you were sober...And I think it's what happened to Michael lol.

I thought that witch could be a good word for her. I always thought she was one lol with our Mikey lol.

I know lol. I pictured the scene in my head to when I was writing it and it made me laugh. Michael, giggling, totally drunk when two men were hooking him lol.

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Date: Jan 31, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

LMAO! I loved the part when Michael was ike, "Oh yeah, the cool gay bar.." and "Drunk? No, I never get drunk." Lol!

Suuuuuure Michael... haha! ;)

Omg! YES! Haha! Michael's got the hots for Jaaaaake!! Yay! :D

Ew, Lisa Marie is just so... eugn... She's so annoying. I'm glad Michael took some initiative though and told her off. Good on ya Mike. :D



Author's Response:

Sure Michael we believe you...You never drink a drop of alcohol lol, we all know that lol.

Yeah a little but don't rush girl...Michael won't take it very seriously for the moment.

I know very annoying but she still has a big place in Michael's heart and even if he told her off, Michael still loves her and will try to fix his marriage problems.

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Date: Feb 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Fixing things won't be easy. Michael, just give up! Go with Jake!!!!! He's better than Lisa Marie!! Do it for your sanity and peace of mind! *sigh* I hope Michael doesn't linger with her for too long. I don't think she's going to comply with what Dr Taylor suggested... >:(



Author's Response:

It won't be easy but they both want to fix things cause they really do love each other despite their problems...

I don't think that going with Jake will be good gor his sanity or his peace of mind, not at first...Maybe after, he will bring him good things...Even in his couple...

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Date: Feb 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

No Michael! Not shit! This is good :DDD This is REALLY good! Embrace it Michael, just embrace it. He sooooo liked it, he's going to go into denial thinking about it, but we all know he totally liked it.

I hope this doesn't affect their relationship too much, but I have a feeling it might :(



Author's Response:

Yeah this is really good lol. You're right about the denial.

It will affect it a bit for sure...Michael will be quite overwhelmed by this...