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Categories: Family, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126308 Read Count: 20396
Date: Sep 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: It Must Have Been The Mistletoe
This is not at all crappy!!! This kiss should have happened a long time ago!! And multiple times at that!!! I hope this is a wake up call for you Puvve!! Oh and I love how Maria was trying to play it cool!
Love the chapter, Love the story!!
Author's Response:
Lol, Maria kills me! And you say ALL of my chapters aren't crappy. Hah. And, don't we all.-_- Lol. Thanks for the review.
Date: Sep 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Trouble
This was not a crapy chapter!! I read it when you updated but didn't have time to review. I love how you incorporated "Baby Be Mine" in the chapter. That's like my all time favorite song of his from his adult solo era. Now that I got a phone it's my ringtone!!It's so underated. I love how Michael was affaird of the dog!! I hope that Hayden makes up her mind and decides to adpot Jess with Michael before anyone else does!! I bet Donny and Joseph are up to this!!!! Great chapter as always!!
Author's Response:
Author's Response: "Baby Be Mine" used to play on repeat for entire weeks, on my ipod! I was so addicted to it. That and "The Girl Is Mine". As we enter the Thriller era, I find myself yearning for the old days of them as kids. Lol, writing their relationship was easier. I always found it funny that he was afraid of little dogs, but he owned animals that could eat him. "They're little but they bite". Lmao. Yeah, she would have, but Maria needs to find those missing files of his. Otherwise, those strange people have dibs. And of course Papa Joe is behind it! Nobody is as evil as him. What she needs to do, is see Donny for what he is...before it's too late. I won't say anymore, but things are to come. BIG things. As always, thanks for the review. ^___^
Date: Aug 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Looking Through The Window
UGGGGGGGGHH!!!!!! PUVVE!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!? THAT WAS YOUR CHANCE!!! I really don't understand why she won't give into Michael!!! I mean who gives a flyin fig about Donnny???? Let the smuck go!!!! Why settle for Donny when you can start a family with a fine young man *cough* cough* MICHAEL JOSEPH JACKSON!!! I really want to go into this story and stick my size 10 foot up so far Donny and Joseph but that they both have toes for teeth!!! But anyway, I'm glad Tatum is gone now can you pretty please find a way to get rid of Donny????
Anyhoo, Great chapter!!
Author's Response: ROTFLMAO!!!! "Flying Fig".u92; I'm dead. xD I'm officially dead. Lmfao about the size 10 shoe. Even after he put his heart on the line for her, she still said no!-.- I would have taken him quick, fast, and in a hurry. As always, thanks for the review.
Date: Aug 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Just Like Old Times
Awww! I'm glad Jess makes her happy! I hope she will get to adopt him and maybe her and Michael could become a family? cough*cough*
Anyway, great chapter, great story!
Author's Response: He makes ME emotional. Lols. We shall see.8) I'll tell you this, though. Donny will cause some mayhem in the near future. I like you're making implications. about the two.
Date: Jan 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: James William Patrick
Yay!!! You made an update!!! There father seems like a pretty nice man. I wonder how Michael will react??
Author's Response:
:D, I do too. Thanks for the review!
Date: Apr 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: There's Nothing We Can Do
Poor Hayden, I can't imagine her grief. She finally realizes she needs Michael. And yes, Michael was beautiful at 17 and always! He was such a handsome young man, I really wish he knew it. Anyway, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yass, everyone needs Michael!
Thanks for the review :D
Date: Mar 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Booty Call
Yay!! Michael's back in the picture!! I knew Donny meant no good. I love how you incorporated some of Michael's lines from the skit he did with Diana Ross in Donny's phone call! I love how he says:Well, for one thing, you’ve lost your je ne sais quoi. ‘What’s that, you say ?’ I actually don’t know, but you’ll find it missing.
Michael was so cute in that skit!! Loved the chapter!
Date: Feb 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Who's Loving You
Aww poor Michael! I knew Donny was up to no good. I hope Hayden doesn't get heart broken. Great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
My ever faithful reader. (sigh) Much love. And we'll just have to wait and see. *Nudge, Nudge*
Date: Feb 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Normie
I had a feeling she was falling for Donny! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
You have good instincts.:D
Date: Feb 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Reverse Psychology
Donny is still a trip!!! Yay!! She going to be going to school with Michael!
Author's Response:
Yes, yes he is. Imagine going to school with him?! OMJ, that would be awesome.
Date: Dec 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Donny
Uhoh! A little competition between Donny and Michael!!!! Continue!!
Author's Response:
Lol, Donny is a trip huh? He needs to #SitDown.
Date: Aug 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Jess
Yay!!!You're back!!! Icouldn't wait for the next update. I'm beginng to think that maybe jess is Hayden's son maybe but his name was Joey. But I love the connection Hayden has with him. Oh, and by the way; I love how you noticed Michael says "sometime" istead of "sometimes" not a lot of people notice this about Mikey and his Gary accent!
Anyway, I'm glad you're back to writing and I hope to see another chapter soon.
GREAT story!
Author's Response: Yup, I was going through withdrawal!. Hmmm, that's....interesting insight, but like you said his name was Joey.I guess we shall see. ;D Yes, I analyze my hubby's voice. Haha, like when his accent comes out in "Moonwalker". "Do it and your dead". *_____* I love it. I wish to thank you from the bottom of my heart for staying with this story.
Date: Nov 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Gone
That's so sad:( I hope Michael comes back for her. I have a story like this. If you'd like to read it it's called "You and me against the world." Reading and Reviews are appreciated. Anyway, I love your story!
Author's Response: Thank You for the review, I'll be sure to read your story.
Date: May 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: You Are Everything, And Everything Is You
OMJ, OMJ, OMJ!!!! You updated!!! That seemed like the longest update of my life!!! You did great with the chapter! It was by far the best!!!Shavonda is hilarious!:“Aye, doctor. Listen, bitch. She going in there with o’ boy with the terminator shades on. M’Kay. He ain’t doing no harm---so shut the fuck up, and get her into whatever room she needa’ be in ‘fore I shank yo’ ass.
I laughed so hard!!! This chapter was beautiful and it fits perfectly with the song. Aww that's sad, why doesn't Hayden just keep the baby and go live with Michael???? Anyway, Awesome update!
10 stars!
Author's Response:
I'm slacking on my comments on your reviews. Sorry about that. Can you do me a favor, and go back and read the chapter. I kinda' messed up on my update, and I fixed it. Haha, I guess she's just super stubborn. I would have gone with him in a heartbeat!
Date: Jan 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Au Revoir
LOL! "My mom told me always to follow my dreams" Donny is such a trip! And the weird thing is he and I were born on the same day. Oh no!! They can't move!! I wonder what will happen!
Author's Response: Lol...I didn't think anyone would understand that corny pun! Really? That's extremely ironic! Thanks for reviewing.:D