Reviewer: liberiangurlmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 48 - The Ultimate Insurance Policy

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 OHMYGAWD!!!  What a fricking chapter!! Frank! Jeez he's really pissed as I knew he would be, only a man with no true feelings wouldn't be pissed. He was so pissed he quit and put his hands on Michael. Damn 

Michael is so clueless sometimes, it's cute and annoying. Lol but I suppose he's getting used to the whole "husband" title. Sighs it's drama drama nonstop for these four. Gideon really stepped up and did what was right, even if people get hurt in the end🥺 

Michael and Amelia 🤦🏾‍♀️ 

Amelia- phantom baby.... seriously?! 

Lol Michael is back to the couch 😩😩😂😂 

i feel extremely bad for Amelia when it comes on to her professional life. I think she can do so much more outside of the office... she really needs to get involved in some activities that are more fulfilling..  

another awesome chapter! Will reread to see if I missed anything 👍🏾👏🏾

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2020 12:07 am Title: Chapter 47 - Cage birds singing

Intricate chapter ! I admire Gideon for his coolness and considerate behavior and his support for Savannah. I like the fact that you hinted at Gideon very likely to be telling Frank about Savannah being pregnant with Frank‘s child.
What I do not understand at all is that Michael appears to be so careless about his relationship with Amelia. Apparently, he doesn’t see the damage he has done by being so inconsiderate. And I am shocked that he doesn’t even seem to care to call her right away to explain himself, to tell her what happened so that she can be prepared for the onslaught of the media circus that is coming for her. I hate to know, that he is leaving her in the dark about it for her to be blindsided by it. She of all people should hear it from her husband first so that she can have the calmness and serenity to act accordingly and keep the composure. If Michael does not call her in the beginning of your next chapter BEFORE the reporters get to her, he is handing her over to the vultures on a silver platter and this doesn’t sit right with me. Why would he do that? He loves her so much. He cannot be that careless and ignorant. That doesn’t make any sense to me and it is so out of character. In the past, your Michael always looked out for his Mia.
I honestly hope that the next chapter will fix that.

Author's Response:

Don't you worry. I will explain Michael's intension and frustrations in the next chapter. :) Thank you so much for your support and for enjoying my work. I means so much to me. You are one of the reasons I continue to upload. I wish more readers commented with such passion like you do. 

Reviewer: liberiangurlmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2020 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 46 - The Southern Belle turns brass

Wait what is Michael supposed to find out??!!!! 👀👀👀👀 What is this Alexandra girl up to? I bet it's no good, she reminds of a tatiana type of character.  Why isn't Michael allowed to use the phone???? Omg what is going on?! She's finally told her father that she's pregnant. Sighs now it's time for her to tell frank 😔 poor Savannah, I just know her heart is breaking more and more each day. 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2020 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 46 - The Southern Belle turns brass

Oh, poor Savannah! The truth is out. I wonder what he will do next. Will she reveal the entire truth ? If so, will he rip the contract to shreds?
Why on earth is Michael spending time with one of his female dancers when he could have spent time with Frank instead. A guy’s evening so to speak. It seems wrong, though it is -at least from his point of view . The dancer might get the wrong impression. I still cannot shake the feeling that they will be come friends and that she will be some kind of Debbie Rowe for him. 😤 I don’t like that idea. He should have rather called Amelia than hang out with a woman. If the roles were reversed, he wouldn’t like this one bit. Short but eventful chapter. Thank you for updating!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2020 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Strawberries and Champagne

I am especially upset with Savannah for how she’s reacting towards her best friend, who made the effort to fly all over to America after her long disease to see her friend! Not only did she leave Michael but also she was just recovering and still she made the effort and reached out to Savannah! And Savannah should have been grateful for that. She really is so bitter and Amelia doesn’t deserve any of it! And the audacity of Savannah to leave Amelia standing there knowing that Niclas just arrived! They also that I wouldn’t have done that she would’ve stop by Amelia’s side and Wood offended him off! Thank God Amelia is witty and smart and couldn’t stand her own ground! I’m so proud of her for that. I wonder when Savannah will come to her senses.
My prediction for that matter is : Amelia will tell Frank eventually, like she threatened she’d do and then he will come for Savannah and talk some serious sense into her. This is what I think will happen.

And now let’s move to my two most favorite phrases/ paragraphs in this chapter:
1)
“Well, then you two deserve each other. You both are cruel, cold-hearted bastards who deserve none of what you have.”
2)
“Oh, they don’t make condoms that big!” Amelia smiled brightly before flipping her hair elegantly and nodding hello to the few familiar faces as she disappeared into the crowd.

Amelia was fantastic! She really put him in his place! I am cheering, laughing and clapping my hands euphorically 💪and I’m so proud of her! Nicholas thought he was so slick, but she won every conversation that he inflicted on her!
Great, great amusing chapter.
I sincerely hope that this information is going to kill his ego! Now he knows for sure, that Michael has what he never had: Amelia’s true love, passion, heart, soul AND body!
👍👍👍👍👍😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍

Reviewer: Switt23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2020 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Strawberries and Champagne

This chapter was so good !

i love Amelia spunk , and how she's such a good friend to savannah . I also love ariannas character !

nicholas I think his ass is up to no good but who knows , he might change but I think it should be to only better himself 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2020 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Drives me wild

Great chapter. On the one hand the beginning of a dangerous coalition between two absolutely despicable men. They are so obvious in how sour and full of hatred they are. No matter what they try, they will definitely fail in the end. On the other hand the beautiful relationship between Mike and Mia. I love how caring he is and won’t take no for an answer. That was the most wonderful, insightful scene and says everything about the love they share and how well Michael knows Amelia. He can knows her like the back of his hand. Brilliant!!!!
And I was laughing and giggling when you described the scene when she made Michael sleep on the floor and he not only took the pillow but also the blanket with him. Their little back and forth is always so amusing and priceless. They are a perfect match. Love how respectful they are treating each other and it’s a precious thing to read about their blossoming, loving sex life. They are so incredible together and she is so responsive to him. Great writing! Loved every minute of it!!!😍