Date: Jul 13, 2021 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Normally I don't review within the first set of chapters, but I have to admit this is still good, especially dating back to 2013. Another thing I would admit, I bet it's super hard to not be distracted by Michael. I feel like it takes a lot of willpower to focus on the performance along with a certain level of trust.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
Waow, excellent update! SO cool to read more day by day!
Love this story! please, continue!
Awe, thank you! You really are too kind :) I'm almost halfway down the story, and honestly... it's quite frustrating to read back at times, but I'll keep posting it since people are actually reading it :o
Date: Oct 15, 2018 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love where u went with this!! That ending confused me for a min, but then i realized what happened and was like ohhh ok lol.The fact that you wrote this at 16 shows that you're really talented and an overall great writer to me!.So yes, definitely keep it goin!