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Reviewer: toolowtogetunder Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2016 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1 The Dream

Omg this is so good!! I wonder who the girl is

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Haha you'll find out soon enough!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2016 01:14 am Title: Chapter 3 Answers to be reveled

Very Sweet. But people will believe that he is crazy if he starts talking to the invisible woman.....

Author's Response: Well yeah of course, he has to be very low key about the whole thing.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 11:58 am Title: Chapter 2 Her name...I must know her name

This sounds interesting. A different twist and plot. I wonder how the interaction will be like when they officially meet? My suggestion is to spread the paragraphs it's a little hard to read all at once.



Author's Response: Thanks. I'll be sure to do that in the future chapters.

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2016 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Dream

I like it :) 

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