Date: Aug 13, 2016 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Girl Oh My God!!!! You gave me life with this chapter I'm telling you.This had me rollin from beginning to end,first Diana is my girl she hella funny and got jokes for days.Who has a dream about McDonald's damn hahaha so flippin funny.And of course Mike and Chanel wooh that was some flashback gettin it on in a ferris wheel only Michael child that was soo hott.I'm sorry but they are so perfect together the chemistry ,animal attraction whatever you call it is just insane.And awww MIke wrote some songs inspired by her omg so freakin sweet they needs to be together i'm just saying girl i love this so much more please.
Author's Response:
I'm soooooo glad you love it girl! And Diana is something else. Her and her crazy ass dreams. I knew everybody would love that Ferris wheel flash back. That was hot and crazy right? Only Michael. Only Michael would be spontaneous and would want to do something like that. They do have a lot of attraction. We all can sense it but can they 🤔 And I'm updating today :)))
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2016 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
This story is so so good l just love it
Author's Response:
Awww! I'm glad you love it! More on the way!
Date: Aug 11, 2016 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Michael wants Chanel! I think that Chanel wants Michael too but is afraid of getting hurt. She doesn't want her child not to have a relationship with Michael, if they somehow don't work out!
Author's Response:
Hmmmm🤔 Does Michael want Chanel? We will have to see lol. And that is true Chanel doesn't want Mikey in the middle of her and Michaels "relationship" if they get one. Thanks again.
Date: Aug 10, 2016 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm so loving this story. I can relate so much to this story it's kinda freaky. My first name is Chanel and I'm dark skinned too. I was picked on most of my life for being dark skinned and having "nappy hair" by my black peers. In reality I was really pretty with long hair and girls hated me for it. Enough about me, I am ready to see how this story unfolds. I want to know why Michael doesnt want to date Chanel and how they met. I'd like to see a flashback chapter on how they conceived Mickey lol. I'm looking forward to seeing them try to get together.
Author's Response:
Chanel is that you? Lmaooo but seriously I knew this story was going to connect with someone and I'm glad it did. It's so great that you can relate. Sorry you went through that. But like a lot things in life..we grow and gain from it. And we will see why Michael doesn't want to date Chanel. We'll see. More on the way! Thanks again ;)
Date: Aug 08, 2016 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
Keep going, this is an enjoyable read :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! More on the way!
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2016 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
These two are so cute together! Michael is definitely up to something...can't wait to see what's up his sleeve.
Author's Response:
They are cute together. And we will have to see :))
Date: Aug 08, 2016 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
Please keep writing! I really enjoy this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! More on the way!
Date: Aug 08, 2016 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wooh the attraction and sexual chemistry between them is hott and off the charts.But I feel its deeper than that the ease they have with eachother the teasing and the flirting.Not to mention they have a kid together I love it,they know they want eachother.The time they shared with little mikey was soo sweet the perfect family moment lol.And of course I got a big kick outta her girls comin through and Diana razzin on Mike callin him 'cinnamin stick' damn I hollered off of that one.Also thanks soo much for the shout out much appreciated I've loved your stories from the jump,and your continued consistency in putting out story's when so many have come and gone.I will continue to support your work girly so keep um coming.
Author's Response:
Yes Chanel and Michael do have some hot chemistry between them. Lmaoo I think they can sense it but play it off🤔 Hmmm...
The little family moment they had with Mikey was cute! So sweet. And her girls are hilarious. That cinnamon stick joke had me too lmaooo poor Michael has to deal with their shenanigans.
And of course I gave you a shout out! Forever welcome. I just have so many ideas and I can't hold off long with my stories. I know there's stories on here that haven't been updated since 2010. I can't say they don't have important lives but I can't hold off long without telling y'all what's up. But writers block can be a big bitch too. I think I'm as excited as y'all when it comes to the updates lol Thanks again <333
Date: Aug 07, 2016 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Fun read...😊
Author's Response:
Thank you :))
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Those two are crazy lol but love them
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying them :) thank you!
Date: Aug 04, 2016 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like it. She is a pretty girl.
Author's Response:
Thank you and she is very pretty :))) more on the way
Date: Aug 04, 2016 08:49 pm Title: Mahogany
Wow! You never know what others have to deal with growing up.
Author's Response:
You are so right! You never know. And I love doing backgrounds for my characters so I will give you all more glimpses of her life :))) thanks for reviewing!!
Date: Aug 04, 2016 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am enjoying this story! I enjoy reading all of your stories!
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2016 01:57 pm Title: Intro
😠I wonder what Michael wants to talk about! They are too cute together. It's obvious he has feelings for her. Can't wait to read the next chapter!